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Slim Thug 11-25-03 10:59 PM

Yungheadwrecka vs Meters
 
Rules :
5 - win
No crew/hate/dickriding/ votes
10-15 lines
1 hour to post
Ight ill spit first

Slim Thug 11-25-03 11:01 PM

Hold no grudge, not even a judge can bring a verdict/
Because the way you lose a match jus comes together perfect/

No contest with slow context in motion, i spit grammar a
skool teacher couldn't correct/
It's like lyrically "cuffin-your-ventricles" cuz I'm puttin
you in "cardiac-arrest"/

At your rate you battlin me is like you "surpassin'-dracula",
it's simply a "miss-stake"/
Like gas prices over America, my rhymes ain't bout to
de-flate/

Burstin wit words, fuck meters, with my verse I create a
diversion/
The only way you rhyme clean is if you spit those
"unwanted-lines" through detergent/

Surgeon General's warning says it's OK to "smoke" ya
competition/
Choppin game up so much it's like makin' "incisions" in my
opposition/

My rhymes are far too astute and shrewd for your mind to be
able to compute/
Dissolve ya bars through amonia and hydro-chloric chemical
solute/

This nigga battled restricted and he lost 5 to 1/
I bet u sucked some niggas dick for that nigga to say u won/

Slim Thug 11-25-03 11:11 PM

Drop ya verse meters .................................................. ......................................

Slim Thug 11-25-03 11:22 PM

goooooooooooooooo dawg . .

Slim Thug 11-25-03 11:34 PM

Damn Nigga DROP YOUR FUCKING VERSE................ Im not gonna post again cuz u got about 20 more minutes and ur out so we will see

TAG 11-25-03 11:43 PM

good verse Yung. I'll hit this up when Meters posts if he does. I wanna see this battle. Should be hot

Meters 11-26-03 12:08 AM

Meters bakes Yung's cracked clay on a tray of dissaray/
Until he breaks the mold and admits that he lacks the skills to fairly enter the fray/

Google search: Clever wordplay, now it's time for his prewrite/
'Finishing my verse in a minute doesn't arouse suspicion, right?'/

YungHeadWrecka negates the difficulty of the opposition/
What would he do if he lost his prewite, not write a verse at all and just listen?/

He types from the laptop in his closet I assume/
Because the last contact he had with poon is when he exited the womb/

His immense skills are inate maybe, because he was a premature baby/ God was playing a game with Lucifer called 'create the personification of scabies'/

Even if i was on an island your punches couldn't touch my style/
While i'm launching tomahawks, all you've got is a miss-isle/

Your structure cums out like a flow of conscious stream,/
While mine erupts with the power of a thousand geisers screamin' 'wet dream!',

Your battle record is two times loss, five times reign sup-reme/
It's a good thing that you have dick riding friends who don't mind getting their asses reamed/

I'm sure that death could improve your position at rapbattles.com/
Because you're already a dummy for n00bs to WRECK their cherries on without a condom donned/

My rhymes are my spawn, and two attack, one named de-feat, the other purg-atory/
Because once i've purged the board of you, you'll grovel at my feet and declare my glory/

YungHeadWrecka should think thrice before he responds because he ain't gonna smoke this herb/
I don't want his mind to be blurred before he hears the final word, the best he could do was third/

Meters 11-26-03 12:09 AM

Sorry, i didn't know you were going to post so damn quickly! I thought you were taking an hour too but you posted in two minutes.

Slim Thug 11-26-03 12:11 AM

Thats 22 lines u needa cut it up some then ppl can vote .

Meters 11-26-03 12:11 AM

Alright, hold on........
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Slim Thug 11-26-03 12:12 AM

Thanx playa at least u play by da rules but nice verse............................................. .................................

Meters 11-26-03 12:20 AM

Meters bakes Yung's cracked clay on a tray of dissaray/
Until he breaks the mold and admits that he lacks the skills to fairly enter the fray/

Google search: Clever wordplay, now it's time for his prewrite/
'Finishing my verse in a minute doesn't arouse suspicion, right?'/

Even if i was on an island your punches couldn't touch my style/
While i'm launching tomahawks, all you've got is a miss-isle/

Your structure cums out like a flow of conscious stream,/
While mine erupts with the power of a thousand geisers screamin' 'wet dream!'/

Your battle record is two times loss, five times reign sup-reme/
It's a good thing that you have dick riding friends who don't mind getting their asses reamed/

My rhymes are my spawn, and two attack, one named de-feat, the other purg-atory/
Because once i've purged the board of you, you'll grovel at my feet and declare my glory/

YungHeadWrecka should think thrice before he responds because he ain't gonna smoke this herb/
I don't want his mind to be blurred before he hears the final word, the best he could do was third/

Meters 11-26-03 12:22 AM

There we go dawg, it was painful but we're now at 14.
Good verse............................................. ......................
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Slim Thug 11-26-03 12:24 AM

u 2 .

MC2 11-26-03 12:25 AM

Yungs shit was a bit more clever
Vote Yung .

Slim Thug 11-26-03 12:27 AM

Can tha rest of u explain mo haha .

Slim Thug 11-26-03 12:38 AM

NEED MORE VOTES NEED MORE VOTES NEED MORE VOTES NEED MORE VOTES NEED MORE VOTES NEED MORE VOTES NEED MORE VOTES NEED MORE VOTES

SKULLSPLITZ 11-26-03 12:41 AM

This was a damn good battle... eventhough my 2cent don't mean shit for tha minute, I'de wanna hear yours so U can hear mine... here it is------
Yung took the opener. umm, Pretty even on punches( maybe Yung by a cunt hair) Personal... I'm givin' that to Meters. Flow- Well that was a TIE (an audio would decide that)Both finished good, but I enjoyed Yungs' verse a little more. So there it is, U figure up tha rest.
but this is jus' my opion.
Hit up my battle, drop a vote or atleast a thought.

TAG 11-26-03 12:42 AM

Opener: tie
Closer: Yung
Flow: Yung
Personals: Meters
Punches: Yung
Win: Yung
Pretty Ok battle, bith will elevate in time

-uski- 11-26-03 01:17 AM

Opener: tie
Closer: Yung
Flow: Yung
Personals: Meters
Punches: Yung

Win: Yung

Yalll need to Elevate a bit but..YungHeadwrecka took this Justwith harder Punches But all round a good battle............................................ .Yall need to stop freepostin

jego 11-26-03 01:42 AM

this shit was real close. best shit i've seen by meters so far...this cat is rapidly elevating. he had some wordplay, and some tight and funny as personals..
wrecka came hard as always with tight multis and some wordply for himself......only thing lackin was personals

flow was pretty even cept a couple of meters lines seemed to not fit when i read em....

real close right here but my vote is YUNG

Slim Thug 11-26-03 02:23 AM

Can we please get 1 last Vote here... Sorry for upping but im tired of waiting so do ur thang people and Vote?

Young P 11-26-03 02:49 AM

Vote Goes Wit

Yung wrecka. His wuz much more witty wit betta punches. Overall just a lot betta den meters.

Vote goes to yung wrecka.

-Igglybuff


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