It vS. Meters
 

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are you posting rules or not?
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It just zones out & clears his mind 2 drop something deep from the soul...


OK here we go meters...minus U down 2 negative beyond zero
U will B so morbidly cold & bitter...that no 1 will call U there hero
U trying 2 swing at me is like trying 2 fix lifes problems...impossible
Yer loss is tossible like cheap salads...try 2 B dresing & its lossable
my wordplay is thick paste...as for yas is sauceable & not possible
Im the boss...take orders from me when i tell U 2 fall into a portal
Im immortal...as for U a mortal...ya skills easily killed with a pistal
Slash ya verbal rip wit a crystal sword...mash U wit a 4by4 board
Im the lord ya battles bow down 2 me...pick U up & throw u soard
Put leters of acidic bacteria in meters...the sickness displayed & u toared

blah...

no haters
no d/r
no crew votes
all votes must b explained
due date like i give u another 15 min
no bullshit
reg rules apply
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come on dogg drop ya verse...u dont want to be a pussy do you
you excepted my callout...so follow threw or everybody will no u a faker
come hit me harder dogg and show me what u got or ill just save this verse for another battle
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come on bitch u have 5 more minutes asshole
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why the fuck accept if u not gonna drop and shit dogg

Outdid *it* as *it* was 'bout to go down/
He thought he was an emcee king so I knocked him in the crown/

Here comes the lyrical pound, the message in the bottle on the shelf/
What's going on? I...think he merked himself!/

It is reading too much fantasy, he sounds like J.R.R. Tolkein stoned and it's plain to see/
We'd all be lucky if an orc came by with a golden staff and slayed
him violently,

It was worthless, in scrabble it only got two points/
But then meters came along, double word score, tripple those joints/

I annoint you, FantasyGeek1, take your gift, take your thrown, take it now/
I'm with the Welcoming part of rapbattle.com and i've come to remind you to keep your head down

finally dogg uppin1
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i think u both need to improve but my vote would go to Meters cuz he had a little better punches and it flowed pretty good, "ITs" shit didnt flow that good and it just rambeled on

VOTE--Meters

Hit this back wit an honest vote, *****ONE*****

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...71&pagenumber=2

i think both had good flow and wordplay, but meters had better punches. both need to elevate though, supposedly.

lokk at my battle with yaz and give an honest vote thanksssss!!!!!!!!!!!!

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U fools are fuckin retarded
those votes dont even count
worthless attempt to explain shit
faggots
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uppin2

yeh nice battle
results:
i rapped both to a beat to check da flow...nice nice but meters woz a touch better
liked his rhmyes much better too, dey juz came together nicely.
i ddnt really like da line bout j.r.r tolkein..seemd to geeky for me haha
but da rest woz gud from meter
for "it" i ddnt like da way it flowd..i ddnt like da rhymes to well
it woz gud content n stuff ...but i ddnt like da structure of it..feel me?? its hard to explain wot i really wanna say but...
da punches n stuff were good..both need some upping though

so i vote for meter...came harder, better punches n rhymes plus flow n structure

peace

ok lets get some real votes
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yo i think it won this one but i aint gonna vote on this gay battle
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bill shut up
yo u guys these fools are hating and you no it
next person please see my flow has more value
read both of them 2 times and make the right vote please
uppin3
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Vote http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...84&pagenumber=2 and ill return da favor

Uppin'
Even if it wasn't a very impressive battle,
it's difficult to get better when you can't
elevate any because people refuse to vote on your thread.
Just do it, it's painless.
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=94736 ( I voted on urs meters :) so return da favor!

fuckin haters
fuck you all
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uppin4
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alright, upping.
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yo fool this battle was alredy closed wtf
u got a win and i got a loss
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lol. meters verse just made me laugh on that one, thats some funny clever shit. IT your verse wasnt bad, just didnt have anything that really stuck out too much.

meters just tagged ya on the wordplay from the opener, and just punching you over and over again very personally, while u kind of could of been battling a cardboard box...?

vote:meters