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TAG 11-26-03 02:46 AM

TAG v. Tökën
 
8 lines max
No crew/hate/unexplained/BS/DR votes
I'll spit now you spit when ya can

TAG 11-26-03 03:06 AM

Tökën, When I toke ya you'll be blazin: Smoken
Your spirit will be like ya muthafuckin neck: Broken/
This leader of the Black Ties is a waste of my time dude
Only time I'll wear black is after I Lyrikally Murder you/
At your funeral, You boyfriend might toss a rose on your grave
I'll be like Rambo dawg and toss a fuckin hand granade/
Like in an arcade Tökëns are a waste of money fo pleasure
A couple quarters and this kid will suck ya dick forever

Token 11-26-03 10:45 AM

You stuck your text in a light socket just so it'd spark
But like pencils without lead you're not leaving a mark
Like boxers without gloves.. I'll take this with clothesed fists (boxers= clothes)
You can't even kill yourself.. Like depressed cripples without wrists
You're it.. Just like every Tag leader.. Everyones running from you
Ashanti had to put a jewish cap on ya.. Just so she could rock wit jew
You're just not dope.. Like drug addicts smokin a ciggarette
You cant run with the big boys.. like racers with torn leg ligaments

Slim Thug 11-26-03 11:17 AM

Holy shit. Well both of these guys are my home boys so im gonna lay this out catergory based.

Punches: (Tie)
Personals:(TAG) I didn't see many personals from Token
Flow: (Token) took that by a little bit
Opening:(Token) You stuck your text in a light socket just so it'd sparkBut like pencils without lead you're not leaving a mark
Closing:(TAG)Like in an arcade Tökëns are a waste of money fo pleasureA couple quarters and this kid will suck ya dick forever
Creativity:(TAG) He got this catergory just because he used a few personals. Token had a few punches i've seen before where most of TAG's where personal so it was a little more creative.
Win: So overall after a close battle im gonna have to say my vote goes to TAG ( Hard decision )

Slim Thug 11-26-03 11:18 AM

lol sorry about all the faces I did : an ( so it came like dat .

Token 11-26-03 11:23 AM

He had closer? Sex lines are played as fuck man... what u smokin?.. i hate newbie votes... uppin 1..............

AJ 11-26-03 11:28 AM

Punches-Token
Flow-TAG
Peronsals-TAG
Wordplay-Token
Structure-Token [TAG / is bad]
Opener-TAG
Closer-Token

Overal-Token
Not a bad battle at all, Token dident really seem to give a shit, buth e still won, props.


Hit this up for me:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=89126

Token 11-26-03 12:26 PM

thank you... you forgot to poll vote... uppin 2................................................. ...........

1liner 11-26-03 12:57 PM

Well as i predicted Token Came out hard and Did his sdizzle

Tag you came better than normal but Tokens verse was str8 illness

Anyways Nice drops by Both

Vote=Token

Due 2 a entirely better verse

MP~PHASIZ 11-26-03 01:15 PM

METAPHORES - neither
VOCABULARY - neither
PUNCHLINES - Tökën
STRUCTURE - TAG
CREATIVITY - Tökën
PERSONALS - TAG
OPENING - TAG
CLOSING - Tökën
MULTIES - neither
FLOW - TAG

OVERALL - TAG (Close battle though)

Return the favor:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=93392

Obscure 11-26-03 01:17 PM

Opener-TAG
pucnhes-Token
flow-TAG
structure-token
wordplay-token
closer-Token

Good Battle -.-Token Came Harder.. Props to both

Slim Thug 11-26-03 01:23 PM

That shouldnt count. Its a big time hate vote haha good luck token and TAG .

MC2 11-26-03 01:34 PM

FlowTag
Personals Token
Punches Token
Metas Tag
Creativity Token
Enjoyment Tag

I would say a tie but it has to go one way or the other

Vote=Tag

menolin 11-26-03 01:37 PM

Opener-tag
Closer-token
Punches-token
Flow-tag
Peronsals-tag
Wordplay-token
Structure-token
overall-TOKEN

nice batte peeps but thats my breakdown of the battle.


plz return the favor and vote for the battle in my sig!!!

Casual 11-26-03 02:05 PM

Flow - Neither... felt like each bar was individual
Personals - TAG... attempted one
Punches - TAG... coupla kinda fresh ones
Multis - Neither
Meta4s - Token
Originality - Both/neither
Structure - TAG... consistant bar length
Opener - Token
Finisher - TAG

Vote = TAG

Kinda close all round but TAG takes it based on personals an punches.

Good battlin fellas... hit this upp now plz:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91262

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TAG 11-26-03 02:15 PM

uppin fo some fair votes .................................................. .................................................. .......

TAG 11-26-03 02:34 PM

Uppin(2) fo some votes. Leave a link and it will be hit............................................... .................................................. .............

Slim Thug 11-26-03 02:48 PM

I wanna see who wins this so SOMEBODY vote on this shit hahaha. .

Slim Thug 11-26-03 04:43 PM

Hurry up and vote so I can see who won this shit !!! haha this was a clean battle very nice and if yall dont mind vote on this 1 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=94597

Twizted Ayngel 11-26-03 05:20 PM

Flow - Personally I think TAG's flow was a little bit better..
Personals - Pfft.. neither really
Punches - TAG.. just a few.
Multis - once again.. neither..
Meta4s - hm... Token
Originality - Tag.. just thought his wasnt as played.. some of the lines anyway.
Structure - Tag.. his bars weren't all different lengths

So overall my vote goes to Tag.. his just seemed better to me, and punches, to me, really wins a battle.. and I thought TAG came harder.. so he gets my vote.

Emerge 11-27-03 05:39 PM

opener - token
closer - tie
punches - token
personals - tag
wordplay - meh
overal - token

nice battle thought not bad

Token 11-27-03 05:43 PM

Thank you... uppin............................................. .......................................

Chem 11-27-03 05:56 PM

You stuck your text in a light socket just so it'd spark
But like pencils without lead you're not leaving a mark
Like boxers without gloves.. I'll take this with clothesed fists (boxers= clothes)
You can't even kill yourself.. Like depressed cripples without wrists
You're it.. Just like every Tag leader.. Everyones running from you
Ashanti had to put a jewish cap on ya.. Just so she could rock wit jew
You're just not dope.. Like drug addicts smokin a ciggarette
You cant run with the big boys.. like racers with torn leg ligaments


ight im feelin token alot more on this his rhymes definately came harder...

his punches had me like whoa when TAGs didnt do the same effect although tag your verse was still ill and woulda beaten alot of cats on here ......

This was an ill battle nice and short .....

keep spittin both fo sure coz this battl;e made nice reading

Like boxers without gloves.. I'll take this with clothesed fists (boxers= clothes)
You can't even kill yourself.. Like depressed cripples without wrists
^^^ was nice

Dimez 11-27-03 09:49 PM

TAG... ur the 1st person that had me snoring while reading your verse....


vote= token


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