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TAG v. Tökën
8 lines max
No crew/hate/unexplained/BS/DR votes I'll spit now you spit when ya can |
Tökën, When I toke ya you'll be blazin: Smoken
Your spirit will be like ya muthafuckin neck: Broken/ This leader of the Black Ties is a waste of my time dude Only time I'll wear black is after I Lyrikally Murder you/ At your funeral, You boyfriend might toss a rose on your grave I'll be like Rambo dawg and toss a fuckin hand granade/ Like in an arcade Tökëns are a waste of money fo pleasure A couple quarters and this kid will suck ya dick forever |
You stuck your text in a light socket just so it'd spark
But like pencils without lead you're not leaving a mark Like boxers without gloves.. I'll take this with clothesed fists (boxers= clothes) You can't even kill yourself.. Like depressed cripples without wrists You're it.. Just like every Tag leader.. Everyones running from you Ashanti had to put a jewish cap on ya.. Just so she could rock wit jew You're just not dope.. Like drug addicts smokin a ciggarette You cant run with the big boys.. like racers with torn leg ligaments |
Holy shit. Well both of these guys are my home boys so im gonna lay this out catergory based.
Punches: (Tie) Personals:(TAG) I didn't see many personals from Token Flow: (Token) took that by a little bit Opening:(Token) You stuck your text in a light socket just so it'd sparkBut like pencils without lead you're not leaving a mark Closing:(TAG)Like in an arcade Tökëns are a waste of money fo pleasureA couple quarters and this kid will suck ya dick forever Creativity:(TAG) He got this catergory just because he used a few personals. Token had a few punches i've seen before where most of TAG's where personal so it was a little more creative. Win: So overall after a close battle im gonna have to say my vote goes to TAG ( Hard decision ) |
lol sorry about all the faces I did : an ( so it came like dat .
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He had closer? Sex lines are played as fuck man... what u smokin?.. i hate newbie votes... uppin 1..............
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Punches-Token
Flow-TAG Peronsals-TAG Wordplay-Token Structure-Token [TAG / is bad] Opener-TAG Closer-Token Overal-Token Not a bad battle at all, Token dident really seem to give a shit, buth e still won, props. Hit this up for me: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=89126 |
thank you... you forgot to poll vote... uppin 2................................................. ...........
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Well as i predicted Token Came out hard and Did his sdizzle
Tag you came better than normal but Tokens verse was str8 illness Anyways Nice drops by Both Vote=Token Due 2 a entirely better verse |
METAPHORES - neither
VOCABULARY - neither PUNCHLINES - Tökën STRUCTURE - TAG CREATIVITY - Tökën PERSONALS - TAG OPENING - TAG CLOSING - Tökën MULTIES - neither FLOW - TAG OVERALL - TAG (Close battle though) Return the favor: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=93392 |
Opener-TAG
pucnhes-Token flow-TAG structure-token wordplay-token closer-Token Good Battle -.-Token Came Harder.. Props to both |
That shouldnt count. Its a big time hate vote haha good luck token and TAG .
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FlowTag
Personals Token Punches Token Metas Tag Creativity Token Enjoyment Tag I would say a tie but it has to go one way or the other Vote=Tag |
Opener-tag
Closer-token Punches-token Flow-tag Peronsals-tag Wordplay-token Structure-token overall-TOKEN nice batte peeps but thats my breakdown of the battle. plz return the favor and vote for the battle in my sig!!! |
Flow - Neither... felt like each bar was individual
Personals - TAG... attempted one Punches - TAG... coupla kinda fresh ones Multis - Neither Meta4s - Token Originality - Both/neither Structure - TAG... consistant bar length Opener - Token Finisher - TAG Vote = TAG Kinda close all round but TAG takes it based on personals an punches. Good battlin fellas... hit this upp now plz: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91262 . ... ..... ... . |
uppin fo some fair votes .................................................. .................................................. .......
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Uppin(2) fo some votes. Leave a link and it will be hit............................................... .................................................. .............
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I wanna see who wins this so SOMEBODY vote on this shit hahaha. .
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Hurry up and vote so I can see who won this shit !!! haha this was a clean battle very nice and if yall dont mind vote on this 1 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=94597
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Flow - Personally I think TAG's flow was a little bit better..
Personals - Pfft.. neither really Punches - TAG.. just a few. Multis - once again.. neither.. Meta4s - hm... Token Originality - Tag.. just thought his wasnt as played.. some of the lines anyway. Structure - Tag.. his bars weren't all different lengths So overall my vote goes to Tag.. his just seemed better to me, and punches, to me, really wins a battle.. and I thought TAG came harder.. so he gets my vote. |
opener - token
closer - tie punches - token personals - tag wordplay - meh overal - token nice battle thought not bad |
Thank you... uppin............................................. .......................................
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You stuck your text in a light socket just so it'd spark
But like pencils without lead you're not leaving a mark Like boxers without gloves.. I'll take this with clothesed fists (boxers= clothes) You can't even kill yourself.. Like depressed cripples without wrists You're it.. Just like every Tag leader.. Everyones running from you Ashanti had to put a jewish cap on ya.. Just so she could rock wit jew You're just not dope.. Like drug addicts smokin a ciggarette You cant run with the big boys.. like racers with torn leg ligaments ight im feelin token alot more on this his rhymes definately came harder... his punches had me like whoa when TAGs didnt do the same effect although tag your verse was still ill and woulda beaten alot of cats on here ...... This was an ill battle nice and short ..... keep spittin both fo sure coz this battl;e made nice reading Like boxers without gloves.. I'll take this with clothesed fists (boxers= clothes) You can't even kill yourself.. Like depressed cripples without wrists ^^^ was nice |
TAG... ur the 1st person that had me snoring while reading your verse....
vote= token __________________________________________________ _ p.s /<- - - get rid of those and add more multis |
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