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1liner 11-26-03 07:10 PM

1liner Vs -Technician-
 
6-8 lines

due 30 min after check in



May the BEst Mc Prevail:gfy:

Ambitious 11-26-03 07:16 PM

check in...............................................
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do it.

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Ambitious 11-26-03 07:33 PM

First off dawg look at your merked list it's pitifull
Ya verse is soft shook and 1 line jerked you literal
Got you fallin' left and right, i'll just split you apart
Callin' your chest the light, punches lit up your heart
Your Losin' more ground than back pedal racers
I'm Abusin' your sound the Track's metal scrapist
Mental Rapist, Sent to change his, record placement
Put Necks to pavement, beatin Tech than you a great escapist

Ambitious 11-26-03 07:40 PM

uppn for your verse.....
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v,mdv

Young P 11-26-03 07:43 PM

Would One Of You

Mind hittin up my battle wit AMEND wit a fair one. I'll return da favor. Thanks.

-Igglybuff

Ambitious 11-26-03 07:47 PM

well now he's offlihne.........writing his verse.........i'll hit up ur battle p...........

uppn for you to spit you homo....................

it's been much more than a half an hour you should get dq'd......
punk ass biotch

1liner 11-26-03 07:48 PM

My TEX's Itchin to begin splittin ya Chest till ya Breaths Twitchen
And leave an incision inbetween the Visions of this Teknician

Sumbit Reply~I'll click it once and just like that~BOOM~ Ya 6-n-1
U were so Quick TA front so i Griped ya Lips and Slit ya tounge

You met Me and got left with lead teeth--Cuz I'm deadly
Cuz rippin this Cat is easier than givin fat people Wedgys








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Ambitious 11-26-03 07:55 PM

uppn..........for some votes...............

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Slim Thug 11-26-03 07:56 PM

Opener: Tech
Punches: 1L
Personals: 1L (Sumbit Reply~I'll click it once and just like that~BOOM~ Ya 6-n-1) Nice line
Flow: Tech
Closer: Tie (Neither were that Great)
Win: Well this was a extremely close battle but I like to here punches and personals and both of those went to 1L so thats who gets my vote.

1liner 11-26-03 07:59 PM

Nice verse Teck about time i battle Some skill

uppin fo votes............................................. ....................................

Justin Kredible 11-26-03 08:01 PM

1 liner came wit that humor.....that shit was dope kid...........both were good verses.......................

Ambitious 11-26-03 08:11 PM

uppn..........for some votes...............

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da'ldmsalmdaldmalsdmlsamd
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1liner 11-26-03 08:32 PM

uppin ...............100 things............................................ .................................................. ................

aguhny 11-26-03 08:34 PM

this was a aight battle both kinda slept on da punches i think:

1liner nice opener decent closer structure was good overall you were nice

technician for a person with a record like yours i would expect for you to have ill punches you slept on this battle to me

my vote goes to 1liner cause his verse was betta and thats who i felt won da battle kna mean holla

.Iknoevel. 11-26-03 08:47 PM

opening - technician
flow - 1liner
compexity - 1liner
punches - both
wordplay - 1liner
multis - 1liner
metas - technicain
closing - 1liner
my vote - 1liner

Ambitious 11-26-03 08:49 PM

wow.....u been waitin for that hate vote for a while huh?^
jk...........................uppn................. ..... man........ur lucky i went easy on you fag.................................

1liner 11-26-03 09:07 PM

uppin 2 .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ...............................................

DeadlySpitta 11-26-03 09:19 PM

1Liner got u on this one kid... he took u on in most of tha categories that were available to be taken from an mc and shit. but y'all both had decent shit. Keep up ya good work and shit y'all. VOTE - 1Liner

1liner 11-26-03 09:23 PM

Callin me a fag and took it Easy ON me When i wrote 6 lines and U wrote 8
more like i took it easy on YOU

but anyways thanx for the Thought

Rap~Jesus~ 11-26-03 09:36 PM

opener: 1
flow: tec
punches: 1
multies: 1
structure: tec
creativity: 1
enjoyment: 1
closer: 1
vote: 1liner
nice battle1

peace


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