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pine-cone vs tag
yom, rules are 5-10 bars, no line merking, no hate votes, no dick riders votes,,,,,,
voteing criteria, intro- punches- metas- structure- personals- finisher- line merking is a loss of score. |
my lines make you dizzy like a guy bag TAGED,
stumblin structure like a newbie with a KEG! leave you wondering weather to neg, takeing it from a guy named bubba, FAG! brain freeze make your thoughts lag, confussed, bleedin like a girl all over a rag! with construction worse than a midget NIG, meant for something BIG, but still came up short! with rap waves so quick, your vision i will distort, like a gym teacher, i cut ya, sayin sorry sport! like school bocks your lines are tired and used, so boring and stupin they make ya wanna snooze! and like a jew with a star in a history mag, smile cause you've just been fuckin TAGED |
yo tag you better hit dis up sometime soon, 4 days to vote......
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yo tag must be chokeing cause i sent him a pm with the link like 2 days ago............................................... ...........
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FUck you why would I choke? I've beat you twice already. I was home fo thanksgiving where we dun have the Internet. Checkin In
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ok dog, i'm cool with dat, just had no clew if you were commin or not...............................................
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shit i forgot to post an explanation for my verse,
k here it is -nig=neigger -rap waves is a metaphor for light waves, the quicker and shorter the light waves the more damageing they are, expecially to eyes -and jewise people are tagged with a star on themselves, called the star of david |
This kid is whack his rhymes are played man, fuck this snow-cone
Cause his lyrics are cold like Vanilla Ice, bet they come from his outdated drone (his sig) Get your losing record outta RB, if ya care at all fo your health This battle is mine the only chance you'll win is if ya set up a battle wit ya self. You called me out piss-cone and a vet stepped up Like a virgin you bout ta get ripped da fuck up I'm the light in the night like weed I'll leave ya blazin Amazin how you got cracked and smacked by an Asian |
alright verse, i've seen you de better, adn in my oppion your finisher was weak, but ok, let the voteing begin, and yo tag, me and this_mofo_aint_playin are starting a new crew, "MC's'R'US" i'm giving you and invatation, ive seen you put out some dope shit.................if you wanna join pm me, if not, thats ok as well
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I'll think about it. uppin (1) .................................................. ..................................................
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I will vote in this piece as soon as somone votes in on of the battles in my sig, aight hommies. And nice verse Tag, still doing the damn thing LOL...
OUT -High Class a.k.a Confusion |
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My vote goes to TAG, because he came with accual punches. Cone, ya verse was straight. But I felt that you didnt attack him enough. Your structure was straight. But in battles, punches are what wins it. Go hit my battles up and make a vote on them hommie. there in ma sig.
Vote = TAG OUT -High Class a.k.a Confusion |
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uppin 4. Please hit this up .................................................. ..................................................
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yo TAG u keep rippin em' and rippin em' he needs to get a clue-and back up off you..........................
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intro- both
punches- TAG metas- kinda both structure- TAG personals- TAG finisher- pine-cone [a lil bit] VOTE - TAG Y'all both had a decent verse but tag took this wit his punches by a few inches. I enjoyed both verses. But I felt tag's more yo. Keep it up and stay active y'all. |
yo... im not tryin to hate but pine cone i dont know what the hell your spittin about. It makes no sense and your fuckin crackin on the Holocaust. Please hit me up so we can battle. Tag your verse was straight, you got my vote
Vote=Tag |
Iight, using your breakdown, weak battle.
intro- Tag punches-Tag metas-Tie structure-Tag personals-Tie finisher-Tag overall-Tag |
lmao tag took this without a doubt...pine-cone man I expected more from u...u voted on my battle n acted like u was ill n shit..so that p.o.s that u posted dissapointed me really....ur entire verse was fucking simple..not only that but u went back to like 1920 (when hiphop was really invented ya'll LOL) and just put a damn word at the end of ur line to make it rhyme with the other line...
"leaving you wondering weather to neg// taking it from a guy named bubba, FAG..." ^ that is the worst 2 lines I have ever seen...first of all..what the fuck does 'neg' mean?? lmao....2nd you fucking threw the word FAG in there just so u'd have something to rhyme....and u even fucked up the flow when u did it....ur whole verse was like that man...u seriously need work...this looks like something I wrote in 6th grade (I'm dead fucking serious too, i'm not exagerating) Tag you were kinda weak too..but I see what u went against....lmao @ calling him snowcone tho...that's corny as hell but I laughed...and I'm NOT in a good mood right now....so u get points for that..the rest of your verse was really basic tho but let's say u were rapping on a balance (like one of those seesaw looking balances...) -1= WHAT THE FUCK? 0= just basic +1= good... Tag stayed in the 0 area...while pine-cone went into the WHAT THE FUCK?? zone lol.... ok n I'll use his gay voting system too.. intro-tag punches-tag metas-tag structure-pine-cone (atleast his LOOKED pretty) personals-tag finisher-tag blowout battle... vote=TAG |
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=94609 drop a vote ill return the fava.......
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Flow: Tag
Punchs: Tag Metas: Tag..barely Structure: Pine Enjoy: Pine Vote: Tag like a gym teacher, i cut ya, sayin sorry sport! lol..liked that line...pine came weak tho..make your lines longer..Tag's punchs hit slightly harder..he gets this http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...15&pagenumber=1 hit that up witta vote and poll |
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