1liner vrs Hit'Panik
 

10 line max

ima drop this weeken cause thankgivin but hollaz

you drop first

aiht dawg cuz i dropped my verse 2 you like 4 days ago but i'll repost it


holla

no beef!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!............................... ...................

and now my fuckin POST is Erased Gdamnit i guess i'll redo

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^^ My Bad Homie You Should Of Pmed Me................................................ .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ......................

i tryed dawg but ya shit was full so ic ouldn't i told token to tell you but i guess he never did \

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Yo

I'll Send A shock wave ~Single Handed ta damage ya GiGantik ~ Butt chin ~
to leave u like Elderlys Stranded ~ Demandin to Hit A'~Panik
But-ton~

Hit the KId till his head shakes like he's understandin somthing
U beat Me~~LOL~~ Token threw his best punches and~~ LANDED NOTHIN~~~

1liner came out and tore ya skin- U took ya brain out-cuz i said u need ~More2Win~
And i got more in ~Store4Him~ and its ~Stored With-In~

Cuz i'm predictin this Will Be same outcome of ya battle wit ~Or~I~Gin~
Cut this faggot attack` back in half with a sword to his chin




"Todays punch of the DAY:

Ps !!!!!!!!

Its fate LIke my 'weight' that i Slit you down the Middle~ with this Riddle
Imaginin YOU A great is hard To place ~Like~ a Little boob with out a Nipple

Ok This Cat Thought He Was Hot But I'll Murk You With One Line...
Playin Tony Hawk's Game Only Way You Can Handle Bars N Grind...
Why You Lyin On Your Sig...Definition Of IllNess....Is Not You......
Take This Fag Serious..How??...When He Purposely Drops Stools...
Your Not Cool...I Murder You With 1 Sentence....Rape You With a 1 Liner...
Have You DesperatlyCryin In The Backroom Sayin I Just Bin Sund And Shakin Like Alzheimer's...
You Just Read The Webster Dict. Before Drop And Thought You Was Hot With The Vocab....
It's So Sad...That I'll Smoke This Herb Quicker than A Dro Bag....
Let Me Give You A Lecture Trick..Token Let You Win Cause He Felt Bad For Your Wreckord Bitch..
JustFor The Record Bitch.. If Rb Was A Nice Fat Pussy And You Had A Big Dick...You Still Couldn't Pleasure It...

both cud av been beta ere but eres the breakdown-

structure-yu bin
flow-yu bin
personals-1liner
punches-1liner
flow-yu bin
opener-neitha
finisher-1liner
enjoyment-1liner
overall-1liner

honest vote, very close n gud from both, gud read but 1liner jus takes this!

cud ya hit up the battle in my thread dawg, thanx!

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aiyo 1liner...its envy skillz (i changed my name)

i dont know whats up wit you being in my crew or not....so respond to this...if your not i will drop a vote...

if u are then im sorry for the freepost....

opener- yu
closer- 1
punches- yu
flow- tie
structure- yu
wordplay-1
multi- 1
meta- yu

close battle but i feel like Yu took it wit the harder punches and i liked the dro bag meta alot. 1 you had some hot lines in there and some good multis but i just felt like Yu hit harder..

my vote YU

could yall hit this up?

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=98091

Aiight.......

OPener:neither
Punch's:yu
Flow:yu
structure:yu
wordplay:1line
Vocab:1line
enjoyed:1line
Closer:yu
Overall:yu

Vote:yu bin sunned

Close battle but i feel yu takes it by a little!!........nice battle!!

my vote is overall yu binned anywayz no hate vote he had more punchs and personals thats all...Can yall vote on this battle i have going down here
its being slept on!
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=97328

Yu BIn had slightly better metas and wordplay

not a bad verse from 1liner i just didn't think he did enough

Yu BIn Sund

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yo close battle
1liner had me rollin once again
flow=1liner
punches=1liner
vocab=none
structure=Yu
wordplay=1liner
metas=Yu

Vote=1liner

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uppin ths shit 2nd time.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .......

uppin this shit 3rd time.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ..........

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ite yu got this 1,
with,

punches,
personals,
wordplay.

good verse but your shit seemed 2 complexed,

1liner good shit man just work on your structure and punches.............

.put an honest vote on this plz http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=98490 .......thx.........pz