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Meters vs. Rap_Criminal (the real version)
Alright...n00b didn't know how to make this a pollable battle
so i'm fixing it up. I fucked it up too but that's not the point. Heh. Honest votes would be appreciated if you're reading this. (HIS VERSE!!!!!!) Aiight...Yo.. Meter's Ya Be Feeding Of My Lines Like an Obese Fetus// Have You More Shook Than Mobb Deep Makin Margarita's// Ya Could Rhyme For Free N People Would Still Stone You// You Cant Rock a Mic Bitch The New Guy Gunna Fukin Own You// Could Carry Half A Cone And You'd Think Your Dope// This Bitch probly Gunna Skip outta Battlin Me Like This Was Jump Rope// Spittin So Tight Its Like I Saran Wrapped My Lips// Words Writtin So Dope When U Read Them You Get Trips// Bust Out Wicked Combination Of Devistation For Closure// I'm Killin you So Hot The Fire Brigade Gotta Hose Ya// |
MY VERSE!!!
I'm compelled to teach you rapbattles.com terminology/ You're a 'n00b' and i just 'merked' you because of your 'herb' psychology/ Your skills are make-believe mythology, so you should consider getting out of town/ Or else il'll expose you for a bridal gown wearing clown that resembles uroboros chowing down/ My rhymes could jay-walk with a dead body full of bud and not get penalized/ While the first time you opened your mouth, rap became universally criminalized/ You're a real live wire, electricity surges through you i can tell/ Which is why i came to shut you down like my name was Alexander Graham Bell/ Rap_Criminal, your street cred is at best minimal/ I could leave your health critical by only using the subliminal/ Notes: Uroboros is the snake in mythology that eats its own tail so it's like his rhymes kill himself. Alexander Graham Bell invented the telephone. |
Somebody vote on this.....
Anybody vote on this...... vote on this? uppin 1............................ ...................................... |
aight well
meters takes this with harder(but still weak) pounches elevate both of you new to rb meters wanna battle me??pm me if your up to it vote meters peace |
yo meters i'll pm you with the rules and stuff aight
holla back at the msg wen you get it peace <>?<>?<>?<>?<>?<>?<>?<>?<>?<>?<>?<>?<>?<>?<>?<>?<>?<>?<>?<>?<>?<>?<>?<>?<>?<>?<>?<>?<>?<>?<>?<>?<>?<>?<>?<>?<>?<>?<>?<>?<>?<>?<>?<>?<>?<>?<>?<>?<>?<>?<>?<>?<>?<>?<>?<>?<>?<>?<>?<>?<>?<>?<>?<>?<>?<>?<>?<>?<>?<>?<>?<>?<>?<>?<>?<>?<>?<>?<>?<>?<>?<>?<>?<>?<>?<>?<>?<>?<>?<>?<>?<>?<>?<>?<>?<>?<>?<>? |
criminal had better meeter but meeters merked him with personals and better punches........................................... ..........................
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.......................... I admit that it's not the most interesting battle but do you want it scarring the board forever? heh .................................................. . |
i don't know why people are saying this battles sucked
it is one of the good ones i have read meters came alot better with fllow and personals vote=meters ╛╪Æ ╛╪Æ╛╪Æ╛╪Æ╛╪Æ╛╪Æ╛╪Æ╛╪Æ |
My vote goes to Meters for stronger punches.
Vote: Meters ----------------------------------------- |
get at my battle plz
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this iz tha best verse i seen from meters...nice opener..you did'nt really have no heat on ya barz but ya punches landed betta..you had a touch of creativity also...good flow
rc first line was his only good line...the rest was very basic..did'nt have no good punches...ante up kid!! vote meters |
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fuk off he merked me :S wtf... Man This Is Bullshit... But W/e...I Aint A Bitch...So I'ma Take It...Coz I Aint Wastin My Skill On A Bitch Like You
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^ Hate to say it but your verse was the bullshit.. all you had was structure flow and allright vocab.. Meters takes rest
Vote=MEters |
METAPHORES - Meters
VOCABULARY - Meters PUNCHLINES - Meters STRUCTURE - RaP_cRiMiNaL CREATIVITY - tie PERSONALS - Meters OPENING - tie CLOSING - tie MULTIES - RaP_cRiMiNaL FLOW - RaP_cRiMiNaL OVERALL - Meters Return the favor: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=94506 |
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