e.coli vs 1liner
 

5-6 bars (10-12 lines)

1 hr time limit

no crew.........hate........d/r votes


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aiyo ill hit this battle up later when u both post but could you please hit up the too battles in my sig wit an honest vote..there gettin slept on...thanks alot yo...ill be back later and hit this up honestly

Aight Checkin in Dawg


let the best one prevail

hollaa 100 thing s 1oothings.........................................

things to know........i already beat 1liner.......his crew is doi------definition of illness.........thats about it

1LINER SIT BACK AND ENJOY YA MERKING

wit ya record.....ya oppenent has a better chance of winnin then u do....
its thanksgiving....im handing out L’s go ahead take number 2...
like a virgin wit out a dick in this battle youll never score...
he compares himself to a faggot wit aids....
...now he thinks he has ill metaphors...
youre stuck.....like ya flows ya merked list just dont add up....
1liner is a bitch...u just cant tell cuz she is sportin an A-cup...
1liner plus e.coli equals merking...this battle is gonna get gory....
hes been gettin his ass kicked since birth...now thats his-story...(history)
1liner gets no action....before he dies he just wants 1 kiss....
ya crew is an antonym...they are the definition of whackness....
with the multiple L’s im handing u....u can say im a generous giver...
like a bitch who cant get pregnant in this battle u will never deliver...

MERKING COMPLETE

I' spit Fowl Vowels inta ya mouth-to chew threw ya bowels
EatN ya Stomach OUT like NIGHT Owls on the Prowel

E.coli-more like a She-4-life- diseased infested With 3-more-types
of GENES injested-Yes u guesd it- 1line's gunna bleed this Dike

after this battle wE can shake and make A-mends/
I may break ya FACE and say you MAKE no sense(cents)
But if i steal ya~Gate~ Then Dont take a-fence(OFFENSE)

My mission is the divisoins of incisions/ in his visions
So i Box-in this Exibition till i Stress his Condition
till he look ugly'r than a modern art masterpieces artist Rendition

yo here is the break down,
opener-tie
personals-tie
punches-e-coli
metas-1 liner
structure-tie
closer-e-coli
overall-e-coli

close battle, 1liner if you hadn't of had those 3 line bars than you prolly would have won, close. but overall e-coli one this, my vote goes to him.

oh shit, i forgot to explain why structure was a tie, at first glance e.coli's structure looks good, but he has a half bar,and goes over the line limit he set, so thats why.......... props to you both.......................................

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pine cone..........that is not half a line it is all 1 line.........and there is no way personals were a tie.........thanks anyway.........and justin kredible u bitch get the fuck out of my thread u garbage ass newbie suck a dick

^ha this nigguhs madd cuz i diddnt vote for him............nigguh get a prozac 1liner ripped u, and sorry if you cant see that

first off ya stupid ass vote dont count anyway...........u need 5 wins to post in here newbie.............and i didnt get ripped homo

stop postin in my thread u are gay and garbage

Heres How It Is

Flow: Tie
Punchs: E
Metas: 1
Structure: E
Enjoy: E

Vote: E-coli

Wasnt feelin 1liners style..forced multis and punchs wernt to strong he just had some nice metas...e-colis got the better verse..more structured..better punchs..much easier to read

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=94835

hit that up

should be 2-0 me

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dont sleep please

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damn........someone hit this shit up.................uppin(3)

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METAPHORES - 1liner
VOCABULARY - neither
PUNCHLINES - e.coli
STRUCTURE - 1liner
CREATIVITY - tie
PERSONALS - e.coli
OPENING - e.coli
CLOSING - tie
MULTIES - tie
FLOW - tie

OVERALL - e.coli

Return the favor:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=94506

aight thanks for voting..........should be 3-0 me


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Aight, now how about hitting up that link I left above
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i hit it up cuz........give a brotha time to read the verses and do a breakdown............

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yo e.coli had the punches, though good drop by both. 1liner it would have been closer if you punched more, but both verses were worth readin

"youre stuck.....like ya flows ya merked list just dont add up....
1liner is a bitch...u just cant tell cuz she is sportin an A-cup..."
^^LOL

vote = e.coli

peace

This was pretty lob sided.

Punches- E
Flow- E
Structure- Definetly E
Enjoyable- E
Overall-E

1liner... You did not beat me twice... I want a battle now. You done pissed me off.. i'm coming hard this time.

way to hate vote Token LOL

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lol, funny as hell close battle like i already said, 1liner needs to work on structure and better metas and punches, averall elevation, simple as that................

why did u post again?????????????


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spectacular did, so i did, .....................................
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bitch this aint a freepost thread


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sorry................... i wont post no more..........................
......................................... hit up my battle vs 1liner in elevated,.................. i'll let you freepost if you want lol

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please vote honestly...........only 1 more vote is needed someone close this

uppin(5)

its 4-0........someone please vote on this.............leave a link do whatever just vote please so this can get closed...................

opener-tie
personals-tie
punches-e-coli
metas-1 liner
structure-tie
closer-e-coli
overall-e-coli

could you please return the favour and hit up the battle in my sig honestly...thanks alot