PineCone vs 1liner
 

8-12 lines however many you need





due in whever i'll even drop tonght and let U feed off my verse
AND I DONT CARE IF YOU FEED


holla

Pine Cone is Tryin to come after my throne- but -my 9's blown
I'm Times own`` CYclone`` to Grind Bones`behind Those who punch` With blind Throws
PINE Spoke of High HOpes- --- Till the 1 line Smoked this roach and left his Spine Broke


He's THINK hes Ballin -N-tough but hes stallin 2 touch
The 1 liner cuz he's Callin ya bluff---------Now ya Crawlin ta Duck
Every Punch ~~~but thats just Pushin ya luck---
even if i got a wack line-my Phat Rhymes are enough cooshin ta Fuck up

i can see str8 threw this Dike like spikes threw plain ice
His style is more like a loose pussy cuz it sure aint tight----

k, nice finisher, but your structure is still kinda odd to be, 2 lines make a bar not 3, but whatever, i'll drop tomarrow around 10-11, somewhere around there, nice finisher tho. and some good multies

yo, this guy calls himself 1liner, but writes 3 line bars,
here is my prediction, 1 liner ko'd, its written in the stars!
like brian adams my verse CUTS LIKE A KNIFE,
no holds bars, i'll leave you with scars, to ugly for a wife!
like old television soap opras, your lines are re-runs,
and this fool thinks he can make a pun, coach sayin sorry son!
1 liner, this is my one timer, leave you singin in L Minor,
with a record of 12-16, mabie you should consider canadian tire!
WTF, you are Wack, so why complain about it like a bitch,
i was writeing better lines while you were barely an itch!
hit the kill switch, back that think up befor you hit the ditch,
on a downward flow, my lines leave you black and blue!
thats the colors of defeat, remember them well,
you'll see it ofter, rap so Wack,your records wont sell!
but dont get me wrong, your rap was decent,
i did like that one punch out of that 9LINER!
so now i leave you all tatered and bruised, with line so wack,
pick up the slack get off your back, and run cause pinecone back!

-yo, here is da explanation,
-itch, he was an itch in his daddies pants when i was writeing raps.
-L minor, he is a loser and a minor
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uppin 1, lets get some votes here.................
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uppin 2, and notice how i didn't feed off his line, contrary to what he wrote in the first, ............... .........
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yo, and my line was over 12 lines but he said however many i want so i went over a lil bit.........................
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uppin for votes to put his dude were he bleongs^^^^^^^^^.................................. .................................................. ........................

I dunt got enuff votes to vote but... Pine cone won this fairy easily...

1liner's style is practice more on flow than actual punches, its been used by many and successful by some. He had better wordplay, flow and imagrery...


Pine came better with worser flow yet harder punches...He had sum nice lil personals here n there....



yo, this guy calls himself 1liner, but writes 3 line bars,
here is my prediction, 1 liner ko'd, its written in the stars!

but dont get me wrong, your rap was decent,
i did like that one punch out of that 9LINER!


Pine cone won in result of harder punches...

i agree with the newbie pine got this! this is not a crew vote i'm just voting on this battle cuz pine told me to take a look at this wack S.O.B and now i see what he means!

metaphores- pine
punches-pine
creativity- 1liner
flow- pine
structure- pine
multies- pine
vocabulary- pine
overall- pine

yo 1liner wtf's up with the 3 and 4 line bars? fuck that shit is wack

damn thing won't let me vote on her i need the registration for this!............................................. .............

blah all u needed was like 2 or 3 punches from 1liner he would have took this battle... bloody is right all u had was flow and wordplay no real hard hittin punches or personals.. which is the point of a batle to diss the other person..anyway pine was pretty weak and the closer was weak but the lines they qutoed was the 2 lines that won this battle


vote- pine



ps VOTE ON MY BATTLE WITH BLOODY

yo, thanks for da votes, people, and mofo, when you get to be a regestered voter hit up da poll.......................
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yo, we need some votes in here, so "i can but this guy where he belongs"as 1liner said................. lmao.......................
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vote people............................................ ..
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we need votes to close this off..........................................
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battle was jus a bit....mmmmmm!!! i dont know
Breakdown-
punches-pine
flow-pine
metas-pine
creativity-1
enjoyment-both
vote-pine

MAKE SURE YA HIT THE BATTLE W/ SPITACULAR IN MA SIG PZ

thanks for da vote.................................. lets keep them comming............................
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Jus make sure ya check the battle in ma sig and post an honest vote..its the Spitacular battle pz................................................ .......

already done.................. thanks for voteing..............
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METAPHORES - p.c.
VOCABULARY - neither
PUNCHLINES - p.c.
STRUCTURE - p.c.
CREATIVITY - neither
PERSONALS - p.c.
OPENING - p.c.
CLOSING - 1l (even though it's played)
MULTIES - p.c. (he had a few)
FLOW - p.c.

OVERALL - p.c.

HES &&&^^^^^^^^^^^^^ A DICK RIDER FOR REAL how u can say he had more multi's is beyond me this is why nobody posts in here
cuz all the voters are usually d/r HAD MORE MULTIS THAN ME
ur fuckin crazy faggot

dude, your the one that talked all the shit then came with 3 line bars and played lines, its your own fault, and people have the right to vote......................

yo lets have some more votes, 2 more til i put this guy where he belongs......................................
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pine loses for excessive upping..pine read the rules.@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@ @@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@