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Ape .vs. LM
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3-0 KO 4-1 TKO 5 wins No hate, crew or dr votes No feeding No recycling Due by Saturday |
Checkin' In. I'll drop by later tonite probably.
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Alright dawg I'm checkin in. I'll drop before saturday. Fuck it...I'll just keystyle somethin here and now. I'll post ASAP.
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Here's my verse:
Dawg you so whack I find it amazin you've actually got a win... Coz muthafucka your bout as much use as a shark with no fins... Due by saturday so you can search my profile for things to spit... Well I'm gon' bring some shit bit by bit coz your punches dont hit... Your a fuckin pussy, just quit, leave here while your unknown... Your in a whackness league of your own, your in your own zone... In your home you sit alone measurin out lengths duct tape... Coz your plannin rape on apes just to say you've screwed animals in bed... Oh shit have I let your secret out, dont get embarrassed and go red... Oh yeah I forgot to mention, I read your two battles, haha you verse fed... |
You better drop a good verse after all this waitin............................................ ...
Peace!!! |
LM straight verse, hard punches nice floh good structure.......
overall nice verse....... i'll drop a poll when he replies........ http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=95085 but drop a poll here........ |
^^^ Yep, another dick rider on the loose.
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^You just need to Drop a verse, i'm giving feedback and asking you'all to peep a battle, nothing is wrong with that... Like I said, Go ahead and drop a verse.
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^^^Yep, another vote swayer on the loose.....bitch stop compainin and get this battle finished........... |
After Im done, the Alphebet will now and only have 24 Letters/
My verse will Piss you off so bad, ya pants will just get Wetter/ I ate all of ya Punches, good thing my favorite was Wild Strawberry/ My punches knock out ya teeth, call me the Tooth, but you still the Fairy/ K and N will be Peeling you off the ground from my Bannana Clips and shit/ Paradox liked ya verse, but to me, it seemed like ya Computer had Glitches/ How you sopose to Throw Punches when it looks like ya typed with a Machanical Hand/ My verse translates to the Bombs, have you more Blown Up than the Michelin Man/ The way my rhymes Sun you, people think you came from the Equator/ I will easily hand you a 8 in ya lose column, faster than a group of Tony Hawk Sk8ers/ A little something, I'll have my votes by tonite. |
Damn nigga, I tore ya verse up! Okay, let the voting begin folks.
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punches came better with ape
flow came with both personals came with LM Ape had the more interesting verse, with more metaphores and shit like that for ex. "I ate all of ya Punches, good thing my favorite was Wild Strawberry" < thats what i like to see voté--== Ape |
1 up me. Have to use my old name since I fucked around with Ape and did some shit to it. I'll have an Admin. get it back for me soon hopefully. But I'll use this name until I get Ape back.
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LM...man u got over 1000 posts and still no talent...not hating just being honest....u had punches..but they were weak..ur best line was basically like a filler line...and u have over 1000 posts so you have to have some kind of experience....there's no excuse for that verse.....
Ape..ur verse was pretty weak too...but u had an excuse to slack off b/c u saw what you were up against..u also had a few decent punchlines....nothing special tho....but u took it.. vote-Ape |
Psh! Get outta here with that link.
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Uppin'.
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Get your votes in LM. I'll have mine done in a few.
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my vote goes out to LM.. i was feeling his verses more..APE yours was to original a 9 year old could of came up with those lines.. NO HATE...overall LM's verse landed and hit harder than APE's
APE get rid of the bold letter..if people dont understand what yours saying its their problem..no need for bold letters Overall-LM |
Your pretty funny. I merked him so badly. But its a vote and Im not going to cry over it. Uppin'.
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Alright man close battle
flow/tie punches/lm personals/tie wordplay/lm multi/tie vocab/ape injoyment/lm overall/lm my vote goes to/ LM ((((((((((())))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))) )))(((((((((((((((((((((())( |
Wow, you both are fucking blind huh? Would the people please read each verse and not ust quickly look at who the person ahead of them voted for and just doing the same. If you want to cheat like that then look at the first vote, he/she obiously read each verse to vote. Broken down votes are better, try doing that for now on.
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Ape got this cause he was consistent and his punches did more damage than LM.....LM u shouldve came harder than that i have seen u do
Vote:APE.............. |
ehh nigga dont be mad cause the 1st person "thought" your verse was better..that was just his opinion..just like mine and It's opinion's we just thought that LM came better than u did...dont get mad over a simple fact...
like i said your verse was original..you had some great punches...sometimes punches isnt the only thing that can win a battle..next time you might wanna keep that in mind LM had a mixture of a bit of everything..thats what gave him my vote PZ |
Okay, his didnt make sense, but okay. 3-2 me. Uppin'.
I HATE THIS 100 CHARACTER CRAP!!! DAMIT!!! |
Uppin'.
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weak battle
i am trying to figure out how the hell LM got all those wins stop battling herbs and elevate man... Ape your shit wasn't that great either but at least it wasn't elementary as LM verse ape get rid of the bold words...we can see your punches and wordplay no need to highlight them... both need to elevate but my vote goes to................ -APE... out |
4-2 me. Uppin'
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Uppin'.
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Give this guy his win, he deserves it. Dont sleep............................................. .......
Peace!!! |
Hit This Up And I'll Vote On Honestly On Ya Battle.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=95247 |
LM got abused in this battle (like you did in ours ...... but you still won????????????)
Apes verse was dope ..... original and funny punches..... better flow the alphabet line was ill Ape props uNo |
I cant even remember our battle so shut the fuck up. If I got abused why'd I win bitch, I won it fair and square so shut up, stop runnin your mouth.
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LM....
Dawg you so whack I find it amazin you've actually got a win... Coz muthafucka your bout as much use as a shark with no fins... Grr... Played [B/] Due by saturday so you can search my profile for things to spit... Well I'm gon' bring some shit bit by bit coz your punches dont hit... [B] Filler [B/] Your a fuckin pussy, just quit, leave here while your unknown... Your in a whackness league of your own, your in your own zone... [B] No..... [B/] In your home you sit alone measurin out lengths duct tape... Coz your plannin rape on apes just to say you've screwed animals in bed... [B] Not Bad..Ok WordPlay Could Have Been Worded Better [B/] Oh shit have I let your secret out, dont get embarrassed and go red... Oh yeah I forgot to mention, I read your two battles, haha you verse fed... [B] Its A Personal But It Was Garbage [B/] Ape After Im done, the Alphebet will now and only have 24 Letters/ My verse will Piss you off so bad, ya pants will just get Wetter/ [B] Worded Bad, Played But I Shows That You Know Wordplay I ate all of ya Punches, good thing my favorite was Wild Strawberry/ My punches knock out ya teeth, call me the Tooth, but you still the Fairy/ Not Really Feelin This [B/] K and N will be Peeling you off the ground from my Bannana Clips and shit/ Paradox liked ya verse, but to me, it seemed like ya Computer had Glitches/ [B] Not Bad How you sopose to Throw Punches when it looks like ya typed with a Machanical Hand/ My verse translates to the Bombs, have you more Blown Up than the Michelin Man/ Decent The way my rhymes Sun you, people think you came from the Equator/ I will easily hand you a 8 in ya lose column, faster than a group of Tony Hawk Sk8ers/ [B] Ok..Good Personal[B/] LM...Too Much Filler And Ya Puns Didnt Hit Hard All... Ape...You Had A Few Played Conepts But You Have Potential You Also Need To Word Your Punches Better. Vote= Ape |
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