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[ - Bash Is Back - ]
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My Enternal Emotion is Filled With amazing grace I Left R.B For a Minute So Look At What Been taking place Patiently waiting till my Ghost Detaches Watch Your Soul Surpasses Till Your Brain starts to Leak Out Matter Slain wit Popes in Gathers Your Skull Gets ShaTTer , Because Bash Is Back!! ( 2 Times ) [ Verse One ] Metamorphosis balanced on the closed wings of a Golden Eagle… While weight shifts dishevel flows in the course of pure upheaval… Emcee’s are feeble in dismemberment of pure microphone mastery… Everlastingly free, question my Legend of existence? That shit is blasphemy Shifting wavelengths in 8 strengths, decibels become measures of speed… Dispatch bullets while holding the hammers, suspending your inevitable pain I clasp hands while soundbarriers are broken around my frame Forming equations from the stem of my brain, causing these waves sent from the depths of my pain pouring the rain wept since ya all never remain… Evolution consequencial to life of sinfull expression of character… Punishment of dissent to devils overcome by temptations that damage-ya Malevolence is a key element manifested in personas of anarchist minds… Growth of following makes forthcoming domination and allying wise Precarious preparations amount to nothing they get visciously torn… Hilariously growths of potency extend, your very constituency seams forlorn Verbally bashing through cranial expanses your pitiful reactions are hopeless… Unstable factions disrupt and blow from the inside like clasped explosives Off The Edge In Visions Of Being Dead.. Once Lead Loyal Men, Yet Disobeyed Me And The Allegiance Of Each Pledge [ Chorus ] My Enternal Emotion is Filled With amazing grace I Left R.B For a Minute So Look At What Been taking place Patiently waiting till my Ghost Detaches Watch Your Soul Surpasses Till Your Brain starts to Leak Out Matter Slain wit Popes in Gathers Your Skull Gets ShaTTer , Because Bash Is Back!! ( 2 Times ) [ Verse Two ] Collaborations seam meaningless, relapsed as I trash the whole populas… Simultaneously inflict fractures, attack from all angles, so Ya all Can't stop us… Memory lapses as haemorrhages float to the surface and defenses collapse… I watch nations fall, as aneurisms burst I’ve slain you before your last retract Walk Into My Shoes..You Wont Barely Grasp..And Just Fairly Clasp..all these kids Breatin Heat On Me..but yet i 'Rarely-Gasp' Dripped In Basalt....And Really Put The Czech To Your Dome..Wreck His Phones...Piss All Over His Tomb just to Disrespect His Bone's The Microphones I Rip It..The Stones I Break It...The Flows I Spit It...The Throne I Take It Imbue Into You Dudes...and i'll Take A Broom To The Tourney..Becuz i'll 'Sweep' 'Through-It-Too Leave 'em Fighters Slashed...Fast to Raise-The-Stakes..and not Praise-Mistakes....I Got Perfect Words Programmed To putta Rose To These Herbs..and really Bouquet These Fakes I Got More Rhythmic Than Tendicies For Instance Persistence Kills An Existence These Bars are Resistance Keep Wishing Pencils Exploit Crucial Incisions Blurs Theses Raps-Vision With A Sentence We Rap Flames Rapid..Attack-Quick like Rabid-Rabbits Conceited Life Of Dishonesty, But Honestly, Deceiving Is Harming-Me Real Niggas Up , Faggots Down Because I'm back On R.B!!!!!!! |
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HOOK NEED WORK
THE VERSES THEMSELVES WERE SOLID AS HELL I LOVE THAT SHIT AND YOU BEEN MISSED TWIN WHERE IS WEST NOW |
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Thanks...Shit wasnt my best....I havent did an open mic in a while |
yo good vocab on this peice right here. original rhyming words...really enjoyed the chorus it seemed to tie the song together well.
good subject as well |
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Thanks dawg....Upping |
that was killer song, the hook needs some work but your verses were great, nice ta c ye back...keep up the good work...can ye peep me and R-Ts collab its in my sig thing...thanks man pz
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Aight I'll peep your collab... |
yo you bk....so...jus hope ya more mature this time!!!
this is another alias so dont mock the start date!!! not a bad piece..1st verse was messy but hook was not bad then ya came strong in 2nd...overall=7/10 pz keep goin dawg |
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Thanks dawg but who are you??? |
yo your verses were aiight..i like your vocab though...but your hook needs a bit of work... overall great peace...keep at it dawg
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Yea, Your back dawg, good to see it.
Your vocab here was tight, but you went over the top a bit, this would be extremely difficult if you were using this for audio, but for a text piece this shit goes way beyond dope..l0l You had good structure, however the hook was off flow..it just lacked something, but the rest flowed smoothly like silk, first verse i felt was superior..but they both were dope... 4/5 - dope.... what was the comment towards me all about..lol? |
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Thanks Fam....I really appreciated your feedback...And that comment towards you was nuthin dawg...I just looked at ur name and realized that I could have made a line using it..So I did it....One love fam |
Damn Bash,
this is disapointing..why you've to bite me? i'll get links |
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lol...Ok |
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Lmao@Redragon trying to get me ban but in the process getting himself ban |
I wasn't really feelin this... it's just my taste of preference, I don't really like when people write straight out the dictionary.
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That was nice homey. Keeep spittin that hot shit. check your pms
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Thanks dawg |
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YO MY NIGGA THIS SHIT WAS HOTTTT.
BUT LIKE EVONE ELSE SAID THE HOOK NEEDS WORK, OTHER THAT THAT THIS PIECE WAS FIRE. YOU CAME HARD ON THIS NIGGA, VOCAB WAS OUTSTANDING, FLOW WAS PERFECT, MULTIS GREAT, OVERALL A GREAT PIECE, I GIVE A 9/10. YO CHECK THIS LINK OUT AND DROP SOME FEEDBACK ON THE PIECE THX, PEACE. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...6826#post946826 |
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Thanks man.....I will check out your open mic right now |
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i thought the vocab on this was like 'wow' you used some exceptional wordpla also.
this drop was a nice piece of work, second verse outshone everyhing else about ths track. aiight peace |
^^^Thanks......Straight To The Top!!!!!!!!
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Damn Bash, It's been awhile. good to see u back. This wuz a good drop. U had nice vocab and ur verse were on point. U need to work on the hook tho.
7.5/10 We were s'posed to collab on an open mic, back when my name wuz Anonymiz Jonez. That wuz awhile back tho. Get at me if u still wanna do that. |
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yo Bash...welcome back dunny...this was a nice piece...vocab and flow were on point...basically the only thing that needz improvement was the hook...but the hook was still aiiight...stay up fam...holla...
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yeah the verses were allright....solid chorus.......................................good lyrics............................................ ..............................great flow..........................good vocab.............
Nice peace.......Nice to see you back bash........................... |
Well we know your back in Open Mic..
Pretty strong return overall, but your complexity was crazy and it made my feeble mind confused at times. It's good to see you back in here, I just say to shorten your bar length cuz at times they were all over the place, lol. But yeah, this was a strong piece and a nice way to return. |
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Thanks...This open mic is kinda old.....I posted it the first day I returned... |
I didn't seem to notice....I haven't been in open mic in about two weeks.. I just came back yesterday
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