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nitro vs. spekta
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You spit first 6 lines No biting:gfy: <- He says your fucked which means your fucked |
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I'm flippin' ya script before it's spit, ~ya ripped//
but unlike (Miss) 'Cleo', I'm tellin' ya 'fortune' ~ya sick// -but You can't be ill throwin' up on tha mic and ya might not like~// How I'm pullin' ya covers,Nitro discovered lovers -some dude wit his wife at night// You like "sunsets, and long walks on the beach" -you say in ya bio// No wonder you changed that shit, now you callin' yaself NITRO??// |
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Uppin for that verse Nitro. Still ain't seen ya shit, son. Get up boy -but I guess it WOULD take you that long to PREWRITE...
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^ Fuck you I wasn't prewritting i wasnt home i was in N.Y so fuck off
Checkin in go fuck a smiley :sex: |
lmao, damn, PERSONAL! Tryin' to get your best. ........................................:::::::::: :::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::
Ya Varse? ... |
^Writers Block.. Spit later tonight... (theres no limit)............................................ ..................
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talkin bout my shit being prewritten when yours was shit//
ill make u spit blood and teeth after this battle spit// Your gunna need yourself, Spektaculsto see ur dick// this kids got a shroda as a dick, its as thin as a toothpick// must be a new thing for people.. 4 rhymes in one line// im strangling u, cutting off your lifeline// Uppin People............(0) 0-0 |
Explanations..
Line 3. Shroda-A dick skinnier than wider Line 5. 4 rhymes in a line--In his rap(4th line) |
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spekta..ur verse was pretty decent...not great but had a decent rhymescheme and ur punchlines in a few lines were ok...I wasnt' feeling the closing tho...but it wasn't too bad.. nitro.u came pretty weak...I expected u to come harder cuz u was delaying it so much...u didn't have any lines that stood out to me really n ur rhymescheme was really simple.. overall I think spekta took this...not by a whole lot but it wasn't a close battle either... vote-Spekta drop a vote on this if u can http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=95010 |
^ Ight i know i came weak cuz i still got writers block... 1-0 him uppin !!!!.............................................. ..................................
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Uppin (2) C'mon peoples just vote,............................................. .................................................. .....
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opening - spekta
flow - nitro struct - nitro personals - nitro closing - spekta overall - nitro.... wack battle....u both need to elevate and spek change ya struct up |
opener - nitro
closer - nitro punches - both weak personals - none wordplay - none overal - this was a weak battle but somebody has to win so nitro wins since he had a better closer and opener |
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^ Thanks I hit it up..... Uppin (3) 2-1 me!!.............................................. ............................
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Nitro
talkin bout my shit being prewritten when yours was shit// ill make u spit blood and teeth after this battle spit// ^^^i liked the second line 6/10 Your gunna need yourself, Spektaculsto see ur dick// this kids got a shroda as a dick, its as thin as a toothpick// ^^^pretty wack considering the time you had 4/10^^^ must be a new thing for people.. 4 rhymes in one line// im strangling u, cutting off your lifeline// ^^^first line was aiight 6/10 Spekta I'm flippin' ya script before it's spit, ~ya ripped// but unlike (Miss) 'Cleo', I'm tellin' ya 'fortune' ~ya sick// -but ^^^nice 6.5/10^^^ You can't be ill throwin' up on tha mic and ya might not like~// How I'm pullin' ya covers,Nitro discovered lovers -some dude wit his wife at night// ^^^wack 4/10^^^ You like "sunsets, and long walks on the beach" -you say in ya bio// No wonder you changed that shit, now you callin' yaself NITRO??// ^^^last line could of won it for you, but you need to come harder with ya closer 4.5/10^^^ Nitro 16/30- you need to elevate, i thought you would of come harder. Spekta15/30- you need to take the ~'s outta ya lines and just keep elevatin. |
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1-3, NOT me -get some HONEST votez & feedback in this shot...
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Holla FOR SOME MORE HONEST VOTES.... UPPIN............................................. ....................................
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yo...this was a nice battle by both cats. both came hard..granted they coulda come harder, but overall it was a nice battle. nitro, you had nice punches, and multis. but you had one wack line that shouldn'ta been there. that line bout a dick skinny as a toothpick? no, don't use that again. its wack. spekta, same to you, don't use lines about fuckin his wife or any shit related to that. it don't work. it was tough to decide who won but in the end , nitro edged it out. again, nice battle by both.
v-nitro |
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Quoted Vote... Gone. -Axe |
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Hit this shit wit' some honest votez, & they'll be returned when I hit 100 posts. |
LIKE I SAID, Y'ALL ARE A BUNCH OF DICKRYDIN' FUCKIN' PUNKS. FUCK YOU. WACK-ASS-WANNA-BE'S .................................................. ..........::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::
EAT-A-DICK ALL Y'ALL'S CREW AND THIS SITE TOO. |
This was a close battle, ya'll tried real hard to beat each other but nitro edged this, just barely.It looked a bit rushed for a middle-weight. You ouhtta show newbs the way man, it was too close for my liking. Spekta, you gotta elevate a lot. Honestly voting.
VOTE: NITRO |
I vote who got merked right? not who won? Nitro won so vote spekta got merked............................................ ........................
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if i voted wrong tell the mod to change it, and make the option question better next time.................................
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This battle wasn't of a great standard..I expected more from a middle weight like Nitro who seems to always be on the computer at all times...
Personally wat i think is your battles are just too short so u don't get your point across.I find it hard cutting down my battles to about 15 lines max..Maybe that might be the reason why these two were o closely contetsted.......Nitro almost lost this one, he just barely scraped through.... I don't know but thats wat i think.... Feel free to post wat you think on my battle against walla.... |
Like I said, FUCKA VOTE- Y'ALL ARE WACK AS FUCK, AND FUCK YOU... Your best can't compare wit' my free-flow key-style, ya chest-flow, inflictin wounds...
SUCKA-DICK, SUCKA |
kiss my ass fool, its only honest, why post if you dont wanna get critiqued?........................................ ..............................................
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ite nitro has took this 1
punches= nitro flow= none structure= nitro creativity= nitro enjoyed= spekta vote = nitro spekta you r pretty good but that shit about wanabees will fuck ur votes up if were all wanab's, what r u? huh! yo nitro u dint vote right on my battle can u hit this up again ite! |
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