Split-eyez v.s. OpticalIllu$ion
 

10 lines max
no hate/crew/d/r votes
drop 30 min after check in

this is my check in...good luck.

aight checkin in
about to slay this lady

gud luck

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Take off ya wig and those fake nailes cuz I’m leaving you ‘vibrated’
It’s all about skills but you rather have me leaving you ‘penetrated’
Only a new identity would give you the balls to step to me with bravery
You ain’t throwing much at me like run away handwalkin men in slavery
Whateva, screw ya… put ya skirt back on and ‘Hu-La’
Cuz you battling me isn’t surreal… even ya ‘fans’ boo-ya
They should call ya ‘69’ cuz you were conceived at the mouth and came out a crack baby
You wack lady… the only way you beat this ‘bunch’ is spankin Brady’s

I attack this herb, thought I "punched behind you" the way I "gashed-back"
This kid’s verse is like a thong , a line... , than the rest half-assed

had this in ten mins
so hit me...

IF YOU DON'T GET ANY OF THE PUNCHES DO NOT VOTE!!!!


Split'lll talk shit through chest holes when I tickle the gauge
After this face-off, you'll be penniless, nickle-less, caged!
I've seen your battles, and it's nothing to torch this user
So you'll be spinning out this round, like wheel of fortune losers
How can you underestimate me? You readin me wrong
You blind fuck, use some brail, you good at feeling them balls
This is too easy, I'm leaving this kid black and blue
Crackin whips on you is like my skills, both are just beating you!

break down

disses-OPI
punches- OPI
multies-OPI
ending- SPI
start off-OPI
personal- non


SPI had some good punchs but he wonder off a bit while OPI just had diss after diss. Thewre wasnt any real built5 up punchs but OPI had a sweet first 2 lines .


MY VOTE OPI

peace hit me back and my battles

no newbie votes
just poll votes

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This was a weak ass battle but heres the breakdown

Opening: Tie (Neither appealed to me )
Punches: Split cause half of OS Punches I've used before myself
Personals: Neither
Flow: OS
Closing: Split
Vote = Split

uppin for votes..
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Opener - Blah
Punches - Split
Personals - blah
Flow - Os
Closer - split
overall - Split

return the favor and hit up my battle honestly...

My battle

thanks

^^d/r

he's got 400 posts and can vote on your battles...that's why your voting for him.......knew this shit would happen.
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i feel you optical, you told that bitch wasup, and i thought you kept it real, "it sucks being a rookie in the game, you can spit the illest shit,and all you get is complains."

^^^go suck a donkey's dick

still uppin

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Opener - Blah
Punches - Split
Personals - blah
Flow - Os
Closer - split
overall - Split

return the favor and hit up my battle honestly...

Opener - Blah
Punches - Split
Personals - blah
Flow - Os
Closer - split
overall - Split

The Hell Koncept... I Thought You Were Better Than This... Vote Gone... As Are All The Others... Kids Only Voting Cuz Of Post Counts...
-Axe

^you are a d/r, that was a quoted vote, and thus will not count...
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uppin.........
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honest votes..........

vote on this kids........
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yo Op, you took this one, an left that other dude right on tha curb.
cuz of the metas, structure, wordplay... my vote= optical

uppin for the near-last time....vote you fuckers!!!!
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uppin for the final time.......you people love to sleep huh...
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