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WORD~PERFECT 11-29-03 03:54 PM

NUCLEAR CONCEPTS:nuke technology
 
replied to:POTIENT
yj
KLIPZ FOR MURKEN

YO YO YO.....
My saliva glands are a quarter fluid and 3/4 isprophonal-
thats liquid condensed within 80 proof alcohol.
i produce the active component-
saturate flows foaming....
on m.c.'s then ignite them to insinerate opponents.
an m.c. with the brain mass that surpass the physical vast- of a whale-
whith the trojected velocity as fast..........
as a bullet sails breaking barriers measured by a richter scale.
my lyrics spell-the notes in acpell-
to a beat-the rhythm of defeat- and foretell-
how fast i can send you to hell-
punchline strike mics and hit you ass wipes till your take flight
with the force of how a helicopter propells.
basically if you aint got my fathers semon in your genotype-
then you will never be as hype-never share the same blood type.
never fallow my foot steps.
cause you cant walk in my shoes-
never do what i do how i do..you have no clue-so fuck you.
yall some ass backwards-inttellectuals that lack~words-
let alone the imagdry- it takes to even compare to me.
my vocabulary alone should band me from microphones-
im prone to stick bone and rape in predicate-
to say the least i stay fucking the english edicate.
and i remain conatant with consinents-
and use words to carry the plague i deliver across continents.
its like mailing anthrax through fed ex-
scailing building to understand how im complex-
with metaphorical sintex-on open text-
script lyrics so violent they battle the wax ....
and pin the dj to the mats with a suplex.
see to be the best you have to be vicious-
the strong eat the meak so is survival of the fittest.
smashing your pumpkin like billy corgain-
usen wu tangs 36 chambers to puncture your 36 vital organs.
NUCLEAR CONCEPTS aint a slogan-
its an excuse to make it mandatory to wear trogans.
we give birth to the end of civilization-
and commit abortions on those not sutable for inhabitation.
why the name NUCLEAR CONCEPTS-
cause we bomb sets and disinigrate potential threats.

Kclipz 4 Murkin 11-29-03 04:15 PM

WOW straight illness on this peace vocab was there and it shined awsome flow was insanely decent I relly enjoyed readin this peace but sum words damn i couldnt understand sum words
Vocab-8/10
Flow-9/10
multis-7/10
over all 23/30
good peice bro keep lookin for your peices keep them comming

WORD~PERFECT 11-29-03 04:51 PM

what words i'll clear them up for you KCLIPZ

rule 11-29-03 04:57 PM

damn...your vocab was hot you had a good concept i liked the hole climax of it very well writtin great drop pz

Spike Sanders 11-29-03 05:48 PM

YO WUS ^ WORD, THIS PIECE WAS STRAIGHT UP FIRE MY NIGGA.
VOCAB WAS EXCELLENT, THE FLOW WAS PERFECT NEVA LOST IT,
YOU HAD GOOD MULTIS AND THE CONCEPT WAS TIGHT.
GREAT DROP NIGGA I GIVE IT AN OVERALL A 9.5/10.

CHECK OUT THIS PIECE, AND DROP SOME FEEDBACK ON IT THX. PEACE.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=95302

MD_killa20 11-29-03 06:02 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by Kclipz 4 Murkin
WOW straight illness on this peace vocab was there and it shined awsome flow was insanely decent I relly enjoyed readin this peace but sum words damn i couldnt understand sum words



i agree with this statment.... everything ya spit was on point word for word, line to line. bar to bar, the whole verse... good ish dunny

i was feelin it... ya put goot point of ya vocab abilitys in there too spittin thru ya neck... keep gamin it dunny...on3

WORD~PERFECT 11-29-03 06:26 PM

thanks twin

Dev 11-29-03 08:03 PM

nice concept and executed well.......tight vocab......"BUT I DIDNT UNDERSTAND SOME OF IT".........Lmao....lol......pZ

WORD~PERFECT 11-29-03 09:19 PM

what you mean

Dev 11-29-03 09:22 PM

kclipz 4 murkin.........jus laughing at his response.....Pz

WORD~PERFECT 11-29-03 09:49 PM

lol

LoCo 11-29-03 09:58 PM

straight illness like anything ive ever read from u
Vocab 8/10
Multis 7.5/10
Flow 9/0

all togheter 9/10

WORD~PERFECT 11-30-03 03:39 PM

THNKS TWIN THAT BOOST A SPICS CONFIDENCE

pot1ent 11-30-03 04:39 PM

dope piece.. flow was great, that was a major aspect that made this a good read, some good wordplay, you could possibly word it/ or make the concepts better.. But overall an fair way above average piece.. = )

WORD~PERFECT 12-01-03 04:14 PM

TANKS POP I APPRECIATE FEED BACK

Formula 12-01-03 04:53 PM

Yes Sir Word Perfect, This Piece Was Highly Dope. Definately On A Diff Level Than Some Cats That Spit Here. Flow Was ON POINT, God Bless You For That Shit. Made The Read Enjoyable. You Didn't Over Do The Vocab This Time, You Jus Kept It Fresh And The Words You Used, And Better Yet, How You Used Um, Made This Piece Even Doper. You Had Some Good Multi's and Decent Wordplay. Like Potent Said, You Could Word Some Shit Better, But I Overlook That. Great Drop WP.

-Formula.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=95344
^^ Feedback Appreciated Cuz.

WORD~PERFECT 12-01-03 06:55 PM

thnks twin

Split. 12-01-03 07:39 PM

u just crush mics bro, every mic fears you, any keyboard, god damn, since i left and came back, you have gotten 10 fold better, and im bein serious as serious gets, ill drop, just like em all, you gotta write something shitty some day so i can have something new to say lol

WORD~PERFECT 12-01-03 07:41 PM

WHEN WE COLLABVING AGAIN POP


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