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TAG v. Chem
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Hey this kids rhymes are useless and old jus like AlChemy
I asked for an easy win and Chem is what was sent to me You and rap don't mix like "Evil" scientists you got "Bad" Chemistry Like a nerdy Chemist to Bruce Lee you can never best me I'll "mix" ya up with the rhymes I tend to spew out They'll burn ya like acid when my shit comes about This battle is finished, like Chem's rap it's over 5-0 KO is what the final is I told ya |
First I wanna Battle TAG and still Im left a survivor~
Ill Leave you Fucking Flat like breast sex with minors ~ Disect your dialect ''your a free agent'' wreck your effect~ Or if fiction were fact Tag's an unwanted Reject ~ Ill 'change ya views on this game' like i juss pressed select~ Surprised yo advisor didnt advise ya in a lesson-on-hats ~ Or is you dubbed PIMP (haha) in tha' STIKS -of-CHIN-TAT ~ *He's A Free Agent *Look at His Avy (Visor) *Chintastic in His Title |
Opener-Tie
Punches-TAG Flow-TAG Structure-TAG Enjoyment-Chem Closer-Neither Closer-TAG ive heard 5-0 KO stuff in other raps and stuff so i didnt like it Closer-Chem u should make ur lines equal length.. better structure and easier to understand Vote-TAG |
it was equal but it fuked up when i was bloding the shit . lol...
thanx fo the vote neways man .................................................. .............. |
thought this was quite an evenly matched battle, but tag took this one...........
punches=tag personals=tag flow=tie structure=tag but both were sloppy wordplay=chem creativity=tie neither good vocab=chem overall=tag there it is,.............Pz |
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punches - tag
personals - chem flow - tag structure - tag vocab=chem overall - tag my vote - tag |
pretty even tho here my view..
disses. TAG punchs. CHEM multis. TAG word play. CHEM personals. HELLA nice for both but TAG overall am saying TAG TAG.. nice overall the ending part tho * last 2 lines* werent great tho CHEM.. Nice overall set up was a lil wierd but ddint effect the out come > Vocabulary u need some more working but nice tho PEACE |
man iono what ya'll was thinkin...in my eyes chem took it...he just had better punches...and since neither of em had much for multis, rhymescheme, and other shit..I gotta give it to chem....to me his very first 2 bars were better than tag's whole verse...
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punches - Tie
personals - chem flow - tag structure - tag vocab - Chem overall - Chem Vote = Chem I felt that he came more personal. Even though he only had two good punches, they matched up with Tags. This was a pretty hard battle to vote on. Ayo, return the fav and vote on the Battle in Ma sig hommie's... OUT -High Class a.k.a Confusion |
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OK so this was really close i lost your flow towards the end chem but nice shit in the beginning so i'll give you the opener. TAG came with way better punches and metas though so the overall is gonna have to go to tag....good battle by both
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damn...hard to choose who won....Tag had more personals....but not as many punches as Chem...but Chem had some indirect punches...and when he did have a personals it was kinda weak....the bolding u both used just needs to be rid off...Chem had better wordplay....but Tag had a better structure and flow...u both tied in vocabulary...so i think i gotta do a breakdown for u two....
BREAKDOWN Personals - Tag (his were harder and a bit more direct) Structure - Tag Metas - Chem Wordplay - Chem Flow - Tag Vocab - Tie Punches - Tie (Chem would've won this...but some were indirect) RhymeScheme - Tag Overall - Tag gets this just because he had more on the breakdown...lol...no hate to either of u....good read from u both....no hate...just a vote... peace 4:20 |
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