Explict vs Cata_Strophix
 

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Cat-Strophix - the badest prophit-caughs shit till his -spits smash one-a-ya lungs
Take a picture of neck and mug --GUz like phots-this Fags about gunna get hung

X trys to spill shit that ill`` but his skills are missin + non-existant
him beat'n my asss is like a one legged man at a ass kickin competition

every shot you shoot -will be branded ya best and str8 miss me
like pac with a vest u'll get left with a granite chest and a Face of swiss cheese

kid became a theif on the loose -and startin hate me cuz i copped this art
PLEAZE I"LL leave u more confuzed than a starvin baby in a topless bar.

Ur like birds with stomach aches from rhymes~~ cuz ya droppin aint Fly
kids styles about as amuzing as spendind time ~~watchin paint dry

This bitch thinks he's the shit--cuz he posts a Few numbers-Its Nonsense
i'll leave this kid more abused than a huge cucumber in a convent

I take a deep breath before I beat cata with a spleen stretch
Battling me takes three steps: Step up, get stepped on,
and step off with a cleaved neck.

you dissappointed me with your battle verse
you spitting with tattered words, I'll splatter herbs
bodily structure & writtens to see which shatters first.

his bouts a jip when I shatter your earth & made your mountains shift
So who u doubting kidd my massive blows will cave in ur raps & flows
Detach ur bones and leave ur blood drips as judgement for cats who flow
like passing colds I'll spread sickness to collapse the globe
my army of rabid souls with heightened senses.

Cata, just give it up before you get ripped and cut, I spit to snuff,
so quickly run, before I slit ya gut
Maybe when I knocked you out,you slipped and fucked ya head up
so bad that now you thinkin your shits tough

I'm just going to to stand back and laugh
when your damned craft get devoured in venemous sand traps
The (applause) for your writtens are non-existence like armless children
giving hand claps

This bouts a jip when I shatter your earth & made your mountains shift
So who u doubting kidd my massive blows will cave in ur raps & flows
Detach ur bones and leave ur blood drips as judgement for cats who flow
like passing colds I'll spread sickness to collaspe the globe
my army of rabid souls with heightened senses

sorry for the long verse.. i was in a really good mood..and felt like takin it out on somebody..and Cata was the lucky 1..

sorry i posted the same verse twice the last verse shouldn't be there...because it is also the 3rd
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well as far as entertainment goes- Cata
as far as flow goes- Ex
as far as punches are concerned- Ex
As far as metas and what not -tie

i'm a give this to X i don't why he spit the same thing twice guess he just liked it alot good battle to both vote-X

Heres my verse over again so it doesnt confuse ya'll even more...


I take a deep breath before I beat cata with a spleen stretch
Battling me takes three steps: Step up, get stepped on,
and step off with a cleaved neck.

you dissappointed me with your battle verse
you spitting with tattered words, I'll splatter herbs
bodily structure & writtens to see which shatters first.

his bouts a jip when I shatter your earth & made your mountains shift
So who u doubting kidd my massive blows will cave in ur raps & flows
Detach ur bones and leave ur blood drips as judgement for cats who flow
like passing colds I'll spread sickness to collapse the globe
my army of rabid souls with heightened senses.

Cata, just give it up before you get ripped and cut, I spit to snuff,
so quickly run, before I slit ya gut
Maybe when I knocked you out,you slipped and fucked ya head up
so bad that now you thinkin your shits tough

I'm just going to to stand back and laugh
when your damned craft get devoured in venemous sand traps
The (applause) for your writtens are non-existence like armless children
giving hand claps

Uppin for votes (1)..nice verse Cata.............................................. .................................................. ..........

LMMFAO how this cat on this SITE wit wack words HAHAHAH!


X LEAVE THIS SITE go to iLLhiLL your garbage HAHAHA lmao @ 4-6 hahahahaa

LOL..get out herb..this aint a place to free post..if ya wanna talk trash we can settle it..other wise dont ever post in any of my battle..

uppin on some honest votes (2)............................................... .................................................. ..................

ehhh.....
^^lol...2x...u copy and paster u...lol

but...either way...i think Cata got this....merely because if u understood his verse....he had a much better flow and punches...i say u were both pretty equal on personals...but explict might've gotten a lil' more...but none were really hard hitting...also Cata had a much better structure......so i gotta go with Cata on this...no hate to either of u though...good read...no hate...just a vote...

peace
4:20

aiight joka thanks for your time and your vote.............................................. .................................................. ..............

damn i see no reason that cata won
i like yer style explict, its kinda the way my style is fo real
flow/tie
punches/ex
personals/ex
wordplay/tie
style/ex
opener/ex
closer/cata
vocab/ex
enjoyment/ex
structure/cata
multi/tie
meta/bout tie
sickness/ex

my vote/EXPLICT
Vote Gone... Your Opening Description Was Enough... But Your Breakdown Also Furthers My Suspicions That You Didn't Read The Verses.
-Axe

only a faggot ass dick ryder would say this :::::::::::::damn i see no reason that cata won
i like yer style explict, its kinda the way my style is fo real


just for being a D/r take alook at ya battle dawg
pz have a nice day?

Cata

Cat-Strophix - the badest prophit-caughs shit till his -spits smash one-a-ya lungs
Take a picture of neck and mug --GUz like phots-this Fags about gunna get hung
(Nice, graphic)

X trys to spill shit that ill`` but his skills are missin + non-existant
him beat'n my asss is like a one legged man at a ass kickin competition
(Funny shit, made me laugh. Decent punch.)

every shot you shoot -will be branded ya best and str8 miss me
like pac with a vest u'll get left with a granite chest and a Face of swiss cheese
(Decent.)

kid became a theif on the loose -and startin hate me cuz i copped this art
PLEAZE I"LL leave u more confuzed than a starvin baby in a topless bar.
(Lol, shit fucking made me laff....)

Ur like birds with stomach aches from rhymes~~ cuz ya droppin aint Fly
kids styles about as amuzing as spendind time ~~watchin paint dry
(Decent)

This bitch thinks he's the shit--cuz he posts a Few numbers-Its Nonsense
i'll leave this kid more abused than a huge cucumber in a convent
(Nice closer)

Explicit

I take a deep breath before I beat cata with a spleen stretch
Battling me takes three steps: Step up, get stepped on,
and step off with a cleaved neck.
(Good opener)

you dissappointed me with your battle verse
you spitting with tattered words, I'll splatter herbs
bodily structure & writtens to see which shatters first.
(Mostly filler, but decent)

his bouts a jip when I shatter your earth & made your mountains shift
So who u doubting kidd my massive blows will cave in ur raps & flows
Detach ur bones and leave ur blood drips as judgement for cats who flow
like passing colds I'll spread sickness to collapse the globe
my army of rabid souls with heightened senses.
(^^ This was pretty nice overall, had to say it to myself to get the flow but its nice)

Cata, just give it up before you get ripped and cut, I spit to snuff,
so quickly run, before I slit ya gut
Maybe when I knocked you out,you slipped and fucked ya head up
so bad that now you thinkin your shits tough
(Decent)

I'm just going to to stand back and laugh
when your damned craft get devoured in venemous sand traps
The (applause) for your writtens are non-existence like armless children
giving hand claps
(Decent closer)

VOTE -- Cata
His shit was more amusing to read and had a lot of creative punches. Both verses were tight, Explicit had some nyce shit in his but in my eyes Cata's came harder and was more entertaining.

aiigh dawg...plz if u dont have enough posts to poll vote DO NOT post in battles..its just a wast.. and there really is no point...Thx for the breakdown anyways dawg

just addin my $0.02 sorry bout that. ill keep that in mind and start hittin up all the little crap in the forum to get me up that high.

I was feelin ya verses a little, I liked the wordplay on Explicits and the punches. My vote=Explicit

yea i agree with Axe..i think that IT.. didnt read neither battle..but just randomly voted on the perosn that had enough posts to vote back......

rhymes- catastrophix (close tho)
punches- explicit (neither had many punches but cata used the played ass kicking competition line)
vocab- catastrophix
multis- catastrophix
structure- explicit (was easier to read)

my vote goes to catastrophix

aiigh cool dawg appriciate your time and your vote./.................................................. .................................................. ....

i was feeling cata more in this. Both had good flows, and different styles. Cata took the flow and multi's though, and it was bout even on punches. Vote catastrophics

Look int he sig thanks.

appriciate your time and your vote.............................................. .................................................. .................

ummm.. can ya''ll plz not sleep on this battle...ite been open for
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I had to go with Explist, although it was very close. He had punches and great worplay that gave him the win. I liked Cata's style and his good vocab. Holla at me Cata on a PM. But I thought that Explist took this one. Nice job both, keep it up!!!

Vote: Explist

aiigh cool thanks for the vote and your time dawg.............................................. .................................................. .........

^LOL... No He's Not... Did You Not Check The Polls? Kid Didn't Vote For Himself Nor Attempt To Do So.
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how did cata get that vote.............................................. .................................................. ...i dont see an explanation...

I Polled Rapidfire's Vote
-Axe

this was a tight a tight battle
opener Ex
flow ex
creativity tie
injoyment tie
pounches ex
closer ex


overall vote EXPLICIT

peace

thank you for the vote... i appriciate it.. but we still need more votes this is final day cause the Poll will time out...

PZ

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k like htis


the flow- it was even between both

the punches, i was feeling catas alot and ex's was ok but not that hard

the personals- didn't really cath sum

but to keep it a lil short i think catastrop took this with a better verse

his starving baby line was nice

good battle

i think that explict took this battle.

punches-EX
personal-EX
Wordplay-EX
vocab-tie
creativity-Cata
overall-EX

not a bad battle but Ex had a better overall verse..Cata yours was pretty good to but i was feelin Ex's More..

Thank You.Bye

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Opening: Cata
Punches: Cata
Personals: Tie
Flow: Cata
Wordplay: Ex
Vocab: Ex
Structure: Cata
Closing:Ex
Overall: cata

Cata jus came stronger...I didnt like Ex's style sorry..