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Pine-Cone vs Violent~Wordz
8-10 Lines
Drop Today Since You Pm Me And Said You Were Done..With Ya Verse YYesterday So Heres The Thread..Check In Fo-Fo Normal Rules (No D.R, Crew etc....) Awaits You |
huh, done yesterday? what..................................
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yo ok checkin in........................ didn't know about this til just now so, here goes, kinda short notice............................................ ..............................
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yo, this guy calls himself viloent words, what an oxymoron,
cause his lines are bleak, weak, and played like last week! he says he cant get girls cause he is from Uno, fo sho, but i know, he dont get girls cause of whats below! like a played out record your lines are repetitive, all scratched because my skills are destructive! with more skill than austin powers, you'll cower, commin with lines that make you crumble like the twin towers! like a science teacher lookin for a molecule, i will leave you there, microscope, lookin for your tool! you fool, this aint cool this is a rap battle, and i'm leaving you in a sea of words with no padde! |
there i dropped a rushed line, enjoy...........
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yo, you called me out and made me rush my rap and now your a now show, wtf............................................
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yo this guy has chocked there for is dq'd, shut er down..........
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My Bad Yo...Been Busy...Was Gone Most Of Ta-Day.....
And I Didnt Rush You To Post A Verse(You Pm'ed Me..Back Telling Me To Set The Battle Up And Thats It..Figuring That You Already Typed Ya Verse But Seems Like Y a Didnt)..... But Anyways.. Do You Want To Post A Different Verse R Just Keep That One? *I'll Wait Ya..If ya Do..If Not I'll Just Type My Verse Right Now...And Post Up..In A Couple Minutes* Awaits Your Reply..b4 Typin *Hurry up* |
yo i dont care, its not a big deal just type ya verse.............
. this poll will close soon............... |
How The Poll Gone Close...
But Nehow.. Typen..something now.. Tried Out For Elite...And Chrit, 13th Disciple Declined This Fo... But Like Fat Slow Kids Waiting To Be Picked Up...Nobody Wants You... Kid Is Through.. Dude..I'll Tell You To Catch Pussy..But Ya Might Drop It... Its Aiight Though.. Cause Your Life Like Junk Email..Just Full Of Shit... Full Of It..Almost Missed This? I Pmed You The Link..Did That Slip Ya Mind... I Heard Of Moving Up..But This Dude Going Nowhere Like A Group Of Mimes.. Forget Pine..And Don't Let This (Die)t Down Kid..I'll Leave Ya Breathless... Pine Cones Keyboard - $5.00...Internet Service $100.00..Beating Pine - Priceless.. Blah Blah..wateva vote up… |
yo nice finisher, but i wasn't feelin the rest, to me it just didn't flow,,, but tis aight...................... uppin................... adn yo violent you wannna join D.I?
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yo violent wordz got this just better structure and flow!
pine man u gotta take a lil more time lol vote violent wordz |
this aint letin me vote some i can't hepl it violent wordz u would of had another vote!.....................
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opener - words
closer - words...funny punches - tie none that stood out and kinda played personals - words wordplay - tie overall - words...another close one pine you aren't as bad as ure record seems you are close to being ok enough just try to be a little more witty and you shoud win some |
yeh, thanks, i was rushed a lil, should have taken that second chance, but what the hay, its all good..............................
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hhmmmm ima have to sway the other way--
altho Words had better punches he dint seem to excite or grab my attention..... Punches=words flow=pine origanality=tie enjoyment=Pine Structure=Pine metas=words overall=Pine both ya'll dint grab me but pine had a more fluent flow HOLLA BK AT THE BATTLES IN MA SIG OR I'LL KEEP BUGGIN PZ |
yo, thanks for da vote.............................................. ....................................
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check the bloody footprint battle in my sig pz..........................................______ _________________________________________________
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yo, it will be done.............................................. ......................
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^^The Both Of Yall Just Return Favors When It Comes To Voting And Shit Right? @ Pine And Phil M Up
Any Ways..Dont Really Care...^^ |
yo, its just return the voteing favor..........................................
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Both came wack
But Words wins this with better structure and harder punches Pine most of your verse was filler and the rest were played punches... Weak battle V. Words http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=93908 |
yo thanks for voteing........................................... ...................
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i feel pine cone rush it and didnt really take words serious so words got the best of them so my vote goes to words
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PINE-Cone Is DQ'ed For Being In Three Active Battles... Read Up On The Rules Next TIme.
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