Mista Raedar Vs Jego
 

8 lines
check in
1 hour to spit
no CR,Biting or,DR
good luck

checkin in.

8 lines u need an hour? lol

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checkin in....................naw but u might lmfao............................................. .................................................. ..................

this bitch hits hard as 'mist', straight up ya game aint tight
how u gonna fucking spit a verse if you cant spell ya name right
radar?....reader?....what the fuck u sayin now
if 1st grade wasnt too long ago, why cant u fucking sound it out
ya perception is misconstrude u musta takin psylocybin
cuz how u gonna "lock on all dem hataz" without a drivers liscense!?!
and youre a 15 yr old "Thug Starr"? maybe on this rap site
and u cant get off my fuckin dick, but you arent a fag right?


explanation- hes 15 years old.


drop it bitch

This bitch jego,about to get eatin up like Egos/
rippin this bitch apart peice by peice like Legos/

I'm a monster like the signs,bitch you shoulda stayed offlline/
Leave 8 lines,in your spine,Like the Lakers,this win is mine/

Why you got a mic for your avatar,all you can do is text/
Smack this kid until he retarted,make him change sex/

Kill him with a hollow.now he really "lay's low"/
Like Fat joe running a marathon,You just SLOW!

oh and "THUG STARRR" IS HIS CREW.


AIGHT, SPIT IT DAWG


its only 8 lines ;)



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alright dropped my verse......and it aint thugg starr lmfao but its all good////.................................................. ..........................................

ps I DO AUDIO

thast why i have a MIC

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p.s -got any music? lmfao............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ........

ps avp pdq both can stop with the aol chat room ling, mista raedar, specially you you supposed to be a guy whos 15, butyou sound like a little bitch

how da fuck duz i sound like a bitch i asked for music bitch shut up................................................ .................................................. ....................

i have a 15 year old sister who say lmfao lmfao lmfao at every thing, shit i member you, aint you that boy who was sleepin in jacksons bed, you need to get off dicks serious, be for ppl here turn your record into your favorite time of the day 4-20, thats a "im banned from this site cuz i suck record"...ONE homeboy

jego def took this in my opinion NO thats not hatin is she was just tighter, but dog you dont' need the explination really voteon my shit

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=95469

i don't care are you telling me i should make friends so they vote for me....fag if i'm ill im ill if people don't want to vote for me then don't that means yall just be Crew voting or dick riding which wuld get u banned...one cuzzz

ENUFF OF THIS LETS VOTE

ok then, im not im lettin you know the facts man thats all...................................-----------------------------------------------------------------------------

UPPIN FOR SOME VOTES
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I break down like this
opener-reader...i onno
personals-jego
flow-jego
punches-jego
closer-jego

if your gonna make personals about him reader...ionno..make sure they make sense his fucking sig says try audio..so..saying he's only textual is just stupid good battle for both.

Opener: Raedar
Closer: tie
Flow: Raedar
Structure: Jego
Personals: Jego
Punches: Jego landed more
Creativity: Jego
Winner: Jego..barely
That battle was weak. Both yall need ta work on your punches and personals, cause a lot of them didn't land or were played

Opener: Raedar
Closer: tie
Flow: Jego
Structure: Jego
Personals: Jego
Punches: Jego
Creativity: Jego
Winner: Jego

Mista, okay drop i guess but try to minimize the filler you put in your verse. Everything Jego said was attacking you but i felt you could have cut down on the amount of filler words.

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DROP YA LINK AND I'LL HIT IT UP HONESTLY

UPPIN FOR SOME VOTES
UPPIN FOR SOME VOTES
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DROP YA LINK AND I'LL HIT IT UP HONESTLY

yo jego....................ur shitz hott............1st TAG then this yung ass nigguh.......ur lyrics got me rollin daug, but i still cant poll vote.......J took it easily KO

UPPIN FOR SOME VOTES
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DROP YA LINK AND I'LL HIT IT UP HONESTLY

opener:jego
closer:jego
punches:jego
structure:jego
overall:jego

Jego took this lol.........ok battle though,,,mista work on ur structure............

check this out....................:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=95869

jego got this, he had better punches and flow. Mista had an ok verse but the flow wasn't there and the punches needed to be better needed stronger personals rather then dissing his picture of a mic, and the diss wasn't creative at all.

yo jego hit my battle up with K and Diverse in the sig, peeps are sleeping and i hate it.