C-Lo VS C Rocka
 

8-10 line, anythang goes spit ur shit playa............................................. .,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

checkin in................................................ .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ..........

lets do this,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, good luck man, rock ur shit,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

Watch how I make this bitch disappear like magic/
Grave stone dug up,his body in a cascatte/
This kid is about to be lunch,damn im starving/
attack you from behind,creep through the trees like Tarzan/
While you be internet thuggin i'll be in your house muggin/
He makin people vote for him because he can't get luvin/
I spit poison,you about to taste this/
got him tied up like lacess,leave him faceless/
Stop copying me punk erase the C from your name/
C-lo about to get hit high like a nigga on mary-jane/

c-rocka aka cock blocka, man hes vile
motherfucka sucks cock like its goin outta style
end up walkin that aisle while baggin groceries at super walmart
i know ur new man, but im the heater,the street sweeper,
glad to meet ya sweet heart, i didnt mean to stop u before u start
my rhymes tight like a virgin was
im slick like a surgeon when he puts on his gloves,
and its time to operate, if ur lucky i wont fully casterate,
ill leave u about half what u came in with
so that will be what about 3/4 of an inch bitch?


Fuck it Im out-

nice battle rocka, upppppiiinnnnn this shit.......... hollaaaaaaaa......................,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

yeah this is a good battle mayn......uppin this ish.,............................................. .................................................. ......

.............uppin................................ .................................................. ........

uppppppinnnnnnnnnn,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, fuck lets get some votes in here

i know......i wonder who gonna take this.............................................. .................................................. ............................

Gonna break it down like this..
flow - C rocka
punches-C-Lo
multis-C-Lo
metas-C-lo
closer-C-Lo
overall- C-Lo
good battle both C-lo just spit it a bit more veteran like both of you might wanna look at some veteran battles to get some ideas of the kind of things people look for....one.

thanx dawg appreciate the honest feed back i will work on it................................................ .............................

Flow weak
Metas multies, weak
Punches weak
open close. weak

overal this was a weak battle, not bad for newbs but you could elavate in some areas just keep at it and try tobe creativer but im gunna have to go with c lo his was a tad better overal peace

can sum 2 plz vote......................uppin................... .................................................. .........................

u.p.p.i.n.n....................................... .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .....

aiight koo good votes and can yall please tell me what i need to improve so i can work on that becuz i will be working on sumthing that i'm good at and i'll get all mixed up you know

hey ya'll thanx for the honesty,,,,,, lets get some more votes in here aiiight? ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

yeah dawg lol u winnin sall good though...................waitin for ur ass to get online............................................ ...................................

haha wud up man, ya im just checkin in to see how its poppin, u battle any1 else tonite?,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

come on lets get some votes in here so we can close this battle....... holla at me,,,,,,,,,,,,,, peace

c-lo you are fucking weak want a rematch bitch my vote goes to C rocka just because he has a better name

ICU MAN U WHACK AS SHIT, haha i beat ur ass before u Bitin bitch..... itd be embarrasin to battle u again.... where u gonna copy ur shit from this time??

aiight thanx ya'll that voted how about we finish this shit up.... drop a few more its appreciated playa..... holla..............

aiight can we get some votes shit,,,,,, 3 -5 more and its done and we can close this shit somebody holla at me,,,,,,,,,,

hey i need 2 get some votes in here...... holllllaaaaaaaaaaaa at me,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

C-Lo took this

vocab - c-lo
wordplay - c-lo
rhyme scheme - c-lo
structure - c rocka
creativity - none
metaphors - none
punchlines - c rocka

this wuz a weak battle, but ima have to go wit' c-lo.

phayme good lookin out, ill work on it,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, thanx for the vote................. couple more will close this biaaatch,,,,,,, holla

this battles gettin slept on, i need 2 votes drop em.......... peace,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

come on shit, just drop 2 votes so i can get this bitch closed,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, i appreciate it

yo come on we need 2 more votes in this battle and its over with, some1 holla fo sho so we can close this,,,, thanx,,,,, one

this battles gettin slept on somebody drop a few votes plz........ holla,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,

haha come on yo drop a few votes and lets close this bitch aiight??? holla at me C,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

come on ya'll C and i tore this battle up, drop somethin on here and let us know what u think, holla at me,,,,,,,, one

god damn, ya'll this has been slept on again, some1 wanna holla............. ill return the favor on ur battle...... one,,,,,,,,,,,, holla at me C

upppppppiiiiinnnnnn this shit, someone wanna drop some votes get at me,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

both are DQ'd for upping more than 5 times...nobody wins

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