Phayme vs Rule
 

no dickridn, crew, alias, hate votes
5 votes to win, 3-0 is ko, 4-1 is tko
12 lines, due tonite. checkin in.

about time we get to battle....lol...checkin in................................................ .................................................. ...........

Hey rule can ya poll your vote in me and Paradox's battle? Thanks man http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=95542 I'll hit this up when it's done

aiiight. u hear that rule? go poll your vote.
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Phayme aivater half naked cuz the girls in real life long resistance
His image is revolting even his rhymes show pathetic exsistance
Duplicate him, times it by two and you'd have a repugnet twin
Then destroy the procedure gladly then go to church for my sin
This kid set this call yesterday then avoided promply untill now
Should'a stayed in the shadows cause your win record went down
I'm spitten at tempatures of zero and your just a lazy proton
Even if ya was conductive ya wouldn't be at my level..get it moron
Disturbed is the word that i heard when you spit your verse
It was obsurd a retard cud'a slured an not sounded lyricaly cursed
Phaym spelled correctly is fame how come nobody no ya name
Remind me of'a broken photo off the wall and out'a the frame

there ye go...pz

nice wordplay i'll hit this battle up when payme drops but until then hit up my battle holla............................................

alright wheres ye verse man you said you were droppin yesterday .................................................. ..............................................

I did .. I have to drop later cuz the site pulled a crash on me. I couldn't log on yesterday. .................................................. .................................................. ...........................

ye man i hear ye it did that with me 2 lol......just drop when ye can sometime with the day....g'luck..................................... ...............................

uppen for ye verse-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

alright seriously how fuckin long do you need to prewrite.......................................... ...............

Rule 1:

Lyrical gesture & rule, equal disaster of RB lemme put this head in a fort!
because he couldn't catch sicc'ness, playin wit' cancer in a medicine court
Your battle record is porr, according to your post-count, now the saddum is felt
I would' of faced you ghostrider but..sorry: Phayme jus' doesn't battle himself!'
most his' battles' ain't felt, like Bushes Speeches, Phayme cut this dumb in sections!
Cuz when throws his greatest hits, their dropin weak like Micheals No.1 collections!
rule need a critical work through, his spits' more pathetic than mayman circles
even his girl said he has a the face of a child in those aids' commercials!
newbies praise his work too, like he's the futuristic image of them!
so I'm lyrical massacure his work, an say here: a little bit of his crumbs!
c'mon son, you ain't elevating, it's a staircase of life, an your stepping backwords
your verse is trash herb, I'll take out rule like avengist actors!

blah...

bout time mayn lol....uppen for some votes............................................. ....................

dayum mayn i gotta give this to rule mayn sorry dawg but he just came harder

opener : rule
closer:rule
wordplay:rule
punches:rule
overall:rule

lol. don't hate.

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phayme it took you awhile to drop...but i gotta give you props for that chick in your sig...damn that ass is fine........................................

i knoe dawg i was lookin at it and i was like....DAMN but good battle yallzzzz.......................................... ...............................

i gotta go with phayme, i liked his style, and he had it flowin, nice punches and flow, but Rule man ur verse was tight 2, i was just feelin phayme, u got it playa

ight ima break it down...
No drin or hate but rule took this easy
Punches: Rule
Wordplay: Rule
Flow: shaky - but both
Creativity: rule

Damn, for real THATS AN ASS!
umm, no one took it easily but ehh... I was feelin' Rule a tid bit more. U know theres no hate cuz I can't drop it officially
but its jus my opion.
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Hit up my battle with an honest vote, if ya got tha time.
PEACE.

this was a hot battle kna mean

opener/phayme
closer/phayme
punches/phayme lmao
worth battling/both
worth reading/both
overall/phayme

i thought after reading rule's verse he would have my vote but when reading phaymes shit he was hitting bar for bar not to mention his funny ass bars kna mean holla

he also took 2 days to pre-write....where as myn took 15 minutes.......................uppen to finish this battle

Yeah this was a pretty good battle..
Punches: Rule
Flow: Phay
Structure: Rule
Wordplay: Rule
Overall it was a good battle butmy vote goes to Rule...Props to both though but vote goes to Rule.

thanks man..uppen for 2 more votes............................................. ........................

hey. stop talkin about my gurl!!!! ...fuckin come ya'll houses an kill you! lol..3-1 rule.

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Hey, this was a pretty tight battle, but overall, Phayme came harder wit the, "sickness ~ medicine court" and the "Ghostrider ~ battlin myself" lines. There was a lot more to it, but those lines edged it out.

opener : Phayme (second Line took this)
closer: Phayme
vocab: Rule
wordplay: Phayme
punches: Phayme
overall: Phayme
Vote: Phayme

Hey fa real, hit this up wit an honest vote:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=95243

why the hell do kids do that if they can't even poll vote....?????????????????????????????????????????? ??????????

lol forreal? 3-1 rule.

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Phayme sure does have some nice pics going...

Rhymes? Eh.

Rule takes this with better vocab, complexity, punches, and flow...
Some of those multi's were pretty sweet.

Work on making ya shit a bit more personal...

But other than that, nice work.

Phayme...

Nice work, but way too simple and with stretched ass lines.

Stretched lines hurt flow...

Especially when some of ya rhyme scheme's a bit off like yours was.

Some of ya punches were ok, like ya "battle himself" line...

But even that's a bit played.

Peace

thanks man...an yeah i'll work on that.....uppen for one more vote.............................................. ...........

<--- lol, keep your goddamn eyes on the battle!!
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^^^^but that babes hot---------------------uppen for one mor vote---------------------------------------------------

opener:Tie
closer:Rule
punches:phayme
wordplay:Rule
structure:Tie
overall:phayme

harder punches took this battle, i, surprised bt how good you both were, and i wonder why both y'all dont have records to match your slills??

tight uppen for one mroe vote....cc''mmoonnn--------------------------------------------------------

lol tru .. I got the 3 losses for puttin three battles up while I had two active battles .. otherwise my battle stats would be (1-1)

shit man that sucks....you had some good battles to man............................................... ..........

ite rule had this cus of flow and structure really.....................................da otha dogg had gd punches but not gd enuf gd battle.......................yo rule could you hit my other battle up now with an honest vote plz cus its bein slept on....thx http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=95725 ...............pz