TAG v. jego
 

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Blind spit.
Verses due within 20 minutes after we both check in
No hate/crew/DR/etc
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chinktastic? dont hate on ya self, leave that for me
cuz i'll crack ya back easier than a fortune cookie
you just a rookie.. why your crew wearin 'black ties'?
oh! cuz its funeral time, TAG about to fuckin die
ya lifes a fuckin lie, rappin cant be your hobby
when you probably spend half ya life practicin karate
any topic im on top of it but this clumsy bitch drops it
the extent of your skill is like ya dick..one third of a chopstick
i got this...cuz youre "herb," like deep in my pocket
smoked him like roach and saw his own bitch's head noddin!
her head bobbin, damn this shit doesnt get sicker
tags girl like tellin me "wow American cock really is bigger!"



explanations:

most is pretty understandable.....

-tag just joined the crew 'black tie'....ppl dress in black at funerals
-his hobby says: rappin

everything else u should get

This kid is nevous, flushed and scared and his voice is kinda shakin
His face is redder than an Indian covered in blood whos sunbathin
I'll tear ya apart like Tommy Lee to Pamela's pussy
This battle is over look how little effort it took me
Your like an action figure, right down to the definition
Once they pay for you they can put you in any position
I beat ya so bad man, it's like I up and killed ya twice
That'll put ya back to .500 surprised ya didn't put up a fight
You a dumb bitch , writin stupid rhymes aint I right jegs
You though bowling balls were actually black people's eggs
I "smoked" ya dawg cause your rhymes are just "Black & Mild" bitch
You and your lover were in a sleeping bag thought you were a giant Twix

Explanations:
Indinas are called Redskins
Tommy Lee went out with Pamela Anderson
Two losses will put him at a .500 win percentage
Think about the Twix line lol

hmmm that was definately not a good battle for TAG
personals and punches..Jego
wordplay...jego
overall ..jego

i'm not gonna break it down fully cause its pretty obvious my vote goes to jego

Good battle. Both of you had filler lines which is kinda gay, especially in the middle of a verse. Tag had two which really jarred my enjoyment of his verse. Some of tag's rhymes were clever but not really PUNCHING and ATTACKING Jego enough in my opinion. As for Jego, he made up for things like wordplay and metaphors with being on the attack the majority of the verse. SO i gotta vote....

Jego.

Tag, hit up Meters vs. Unleashed Dragon
and Meters vs. Rhymes

If you have the time. Nice battle guys.

UPPIN FOR SOME VOTES>>>>>>>>>>(1)....drop ya link!


forgotten explanation....

above tags avatar is says: chinktastic


p.s.

im a white boy

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close::::tag


punch:::tag

tag merked it once again keep puttin it down homie

Explain Vote Better... Gone.
-Axe

opener:tAG
closer:Tag
punches:tag
wordplay:tag
overall:tag

yo dawg are you dissin up black people in this?
the black peoples eggs and the twix

good battle dawg can u vote for this?
vote for this?:http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=95731

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flow/tag
rymescene/tie
personals/tag
punches/tie
opener/tag
closer/tag
meta/tie
multi/tie
my vote/tag
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Uppin fo the last time.............................................. .................................................. ............... Leave a link and we'll hit it

I seen both of ya do betta than this but Tag did win in all areas both of ya check out bitched slapped

peace

Explain Your Vote Better... Gone.
-Axe

I gotta agree, cmon Tag get back into ya groove hommie.
I know you got more than that. Keep elevatin hommie

--> Please return the favor and vote on the battle in my sig

OUT

-High Class a.k.a Confusion

Quoted Vote... Gone.
-Axe

lol this battle was hella funny, every line and punch had me rollin daug..................but jegos clownin was the best.......i cant poll vote yet but i wanted to voice an opinion............ayo if i could poll vote id give it to jego.........lmao 1/3 of chop sticks

Whack Vote... Gone.
-Axe

nice spit tag you had nice personals a good opening and had a nice flow ''''''''''''''''''''''
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upppppppiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnn

drop ya link and i'll hit it up honestly...

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Opener-Tag
punches-Tag
personal-jego
metas-tag
multies-tag
flow-jego
finisher-tag
overall-tag

this was and ok battle but as you can see tag got my vote...not hate-props to both..

return the favor: check my battle..

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=95838

PZ

jego got this, just an all around better verse. He also had a better flow then tag's. Tag your disses were okay, but not hard enough or witty enough to beat jego's here and work on the flow too. My vote as you allready know jego.

wats up you'll

voting explanation

opener tag
personals jego
pounches tag
flow tag
closing tag

overall vote for the poll TAG

peace

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Battle ReOpened At 3-4 Due To Whack Votes Not Some Not Being Polled... Each Battler Has 5 New Ups.
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Wow, close battle...

Punches: Jego
Disses: TAG
Wordplay: TAG
Opener: TAG
Closer: Jego
Metas: Jego
Multis: Tie

Vote: hmmm, Jego wins for a more consistant verse. Nice job both, keep it up!!!

Vote: Jego

aight, break it down...

punches: jeg...
multis: neither...
metas: jeg...
opener: jeg...
accuracy: jeg, cause jeg is white, LOL...
closer: tie...
flow: jeg because of the end of tag's fallin off...
winner: jeg...

good battle though but jeg was a lil better in most catagories...

peace-