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dw vs brutalizer
6 lines
all rules u spit first |
iight ill hit this shit up later....
but dw u neva checked into our battle in elevated....its all set up and i already checked in...just waitin for you could you also hit up the too battles in my sig...thanks ill be waitin for ya checkin...then i will start writin my verse |
ight ill spit.......................________________
________________ mc bruta........................ ............................................... |
ll rearange ur face............
have u like michael jackson with your nose displaced......... this guys so wack ill battle him with half the keyboard.......... battling me u get pumpled u should have declined bfore........... u little uk bitch................ my rhymes are better and urs have a glitch............... |
lol^^^thought u sed u ad experience!
take u out of the game..shame this bitch is about to feel pain... yes i'll take the blame...take ur verse n burn fuck a frame... holdin heat in hand like statue of liberty thats how it stands... land ya 1st loss ere by popular demand... BT shud be put in administration 4 sellin u broadband.. quik few lines 2 show u up...be-head u then hold it up... try to win by wriitin shit verses then boldin~em~up... atleast u showed up to be placed in ya coffin... no spittin jus coughin...brutalizer dawg..u ain't nothin...// |
opener:dw
closer:dw punches:dw structure:dw wordplay:dw overall:dw aiiyo your name be my initials, you owned this dude, what you doin brutilizer, goin after a cat wit just over 80 battles. will one of you please hit up the second battle in my sig!!!!!!!!!!!! |
thanx uppin this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!
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opener:dw
closer:dw punches:dw structure:dw wordplay:dw overall:dw pretty lopsided battle........................................keep elevatin brut.... |
2-0 uppin this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!1
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DW merk'd this guy...no need ta break it down, cause it's obvious tha' DW won...no beef...
Overall: DW Yo, can ya hit this up? it's bein' slept on...thx... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=96438[url |
uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!1
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This was a pretty sad mer --uh battle. DW made this fool look pretty bad. went over 6 lines, -n- it wasn't even needed.
Pretty decent lines, DW. Brutalizer WAS Brutalized. Br: read up, get some punches and metaphors. You've got a long way to go to improve ya verse. Had some good starts of snaps, just refine 'em and make 'em more interesting -n- creative, not so simplistic and easy to see. Vote: DW (easily) |
Here's the active links -return the poll wit an honest vote, cuz they're gettin SLEPPPPTTTT...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=96175 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=95464 |
^^^thanx uppin this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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METAPHORES - dw
VOCABULARY - dw PUNCHLINES - dw STRUCTURE - dw CREATIVITY - dw PERSONALS - dw OPENING - dw CLOSING - dw MULTIES - dw FLOW - dw OVERALL - dw Return the favor: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=96557 |
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