Feeble vs. Koncept
 

yea, my first in a while... good luck koncept, we can both get some practice for the LLL tourney...

rules:

12 max...
im first u tomorrow.

Iight, It's KiNda Late Here
So Yeah, I'll Be Here Tommorrow
Good Luck NuCCa!

kid, you aint shit, cuz its only few net thugs ur known with. .
& elite tried to leave the wackness.. but u called in homesick
a known bitch.. simple win to me - but cepts whipped & fell
& its apparent he hasnt recovered from our recent bout in triple L!
besides that tried to join my crew, & please explain it to the site
he waited to be added, & waited *yawns* ..through the night
we fell asleep... a simple task to enforce my plain styles
cuz its evident hes still awed by em's performance in 8 mile...
fljkfgkljsdrgjlksrthlkjrtshljkn?? plz cept, use ya time best to cuss..
cuz ^^^^ thats ^^^^^ what ya text means to the rest of us!

Feeble, I'm Not Even Gonna Try, Cuz I Already Know What Works
YOUR WHACK<---- Killed You, Cuz Well Know That The Truth Hurts!
Who Sent This Dumb Fuck,What Did U Actually Think That Battlin Me Was Prudent?
I Always Tower Over The Feeble Minded, Like A Class Full Of Gifted Students...
Kid's A Joke, He Can't Beat Me, And Watch As I Slice His Throat.
I Told This Dumb Fuck To Pay Attention But, He Cried 'I'd Be Broke'.
Enuff With The Chatter,Leathal Punz R Causin This Bitch To Scatter.
I Told This Kid Drinks Are On The House, Well
...................Feeble Went To Grab A Ladder.

I Went 8 =( Writer's Block.
My Structure Sucks
Oh Well......
Votes.....

yo, i'm swaying towards feeble on this on.............. yo feeble i want a battle vs you............................. aight, pm me, and i'll set it up.................. my vote feeble.........................................
opener- feeble
punches-tie
metas-tie
personals-feeble
closer-feeble

I love a good dope battle...

First bar...

FEEBLE MINDED
kid, you aint shit, cuz its only few net thugs ur known with. .
& elite tried to leave the wackness.. but u called in homesick

KONCEPT
Feeble, I'm Not Even Gonna Try, Cuz I Already Know What Works
YOUR WHACK<---- Killed You, Cuz Well Know That The Truth Hurts!

Great openers by both.
Great wordplay by both.
Nice hard opening shot by both.

I guess creativity is gonna take this one and the edge goes to Feeble. Koncept used a played, well, concept, but made it his own and it worked. Still, for straight up originality, Feeble

Second Bar...

FEEBLE MINDED
a known bitch.. simple win to me - but cepts whipped & fell
& its apparent he hasnt recovered from our recent bout in triple L!

KONCEPT
Who Sent This Dumb Fuck,What Did U Actually Think That Battlin Me Was Prudent?
I Always Tower Over The Feeble Minded, Like A Class Full Of Gifted Students...

Good personals on both sides, but Koncept only used a name personal and Feeble came with some reality, throwing his LLL loss in his face. Nice. I'd say that Koncept took the wordplay here, but didn't hit as hard. Feeble

Third Bar...

FEEBLE MINDED
besides that tried to join my crew, & please explain it to the site
he waited to be added, & waited *yawns* ..through the night

KONCEPT
Kid's A Joke, He Can't Beat Me, And Watch As I Slice His Throat.
I Told This Dumb Fuck To Pay Attention But, He Cried 'I'd Be Broke'.

Nice personal on one side, but I felt it was delivered with alot of filler, killed the punchline totally for me. On the other side, another played concept that he really made work as his own. Good shot, nice humor. Koncept

Fourth Bar...

FEEBLE MINDED
we fell asleep... a simple task to enforce my plain styles
cuz its evident hes still awed by em's performance in 8 mile...

KONCEPT
Enuff With The Chatter,Leathal Punz R Causin This Bitch To Scatter.
I Told This Kid Drinks Are On The House, Well
...................Feeble Went To Grab A Ladder.

This was nothing but filler, I feel, on one side. Weak punch, weak personal. Not impressed at all. On the other side, fantastic closer. Great fuckin wordplay and punch that had me laughing out loud for a second. Real nice. Real nice! Koncept

Last Bar...

FEEBLE MINDED
fljkfgkljsdrgjlksrthlkjrtshljkn?? plz cept, use ya time best to cuss..
cuz ^^^^ thats ^^^^^ what ya text means to the rest of us!

KONCEPT - Didn't throw one.

Great closer for Feeble. Nice shot, good humor, nice way to end this. Feeble

So who won?

I'm a have ta say Feeble, more brought to the table.
And what was brought was damn good.

Hope that helps.

Great job from both slingas.

Props to this battle.

Peace

^^^ Thanx For Voting Man
Good Battle Feebs

0-2 Feebs.

yea nice battle. a few more honest votes would be appreciated. thank you.

Feeble:shyt wus hott!!......flow wus there,punch's were hitting basically erything wus on-point in ur verse good shyt keep it up!!

Koncept:shyts wus hott!!.....i wus feelin da flow,punch's were good,structure wus sloppy but other then dat good shyt!!

Vote:Feeble

Reason:I feel he came a lil bit harder wit his verse as an overall count!!

Good battle both of ya'll..!!

It's 1-0 Feebs ...That Otha Guy Pine-Cone
Was Banned I Think Plus We Wasn't Elite.....

still 1-0... flowz lucious isnt elite either...

Ups......................
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You know that we got to give
this battle to my mans feeble
from his flow, meta's and his
punches SORRY Koncept but
I just did'nt like your rap
like them other one's you
wrote.

GOOD BATTLE FEEBLE

>>>>>PEACE TO THE MIDDLE EAST>>>>>

Who Are You?
It STILL 1-0 Lol....

dont vote if your vote wont count people. . even though theres no polls it wont count. . uppping . . uppppppinnnnngggg...

Both of y'a'll have elevated but Feeble has gone through the roof... hmm... feeble keeps gettin better n better.

vote - feeble

His lines were more original
and witty. Koncept came well
for Koncept but Feeble came
well period.

closed. . it appears that i won by the current score and its been a long time since the last vote came in. if you really want this to continue pm me and i'll open it again. .