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Axiom 12-02-03 07:45 PM

Diss The Person Above You...
 
Six Lines MINIMUM. It Will Be Deleted If Otherwise.

Walter Wall 12-02-03 09:39 PM

Im back to say that axe is wack, its as simple as that
cuz like his sig says, it's Time To Take Out The Trash
I know Im not com'n hard but your ears are still buzzin
After all ure a nice guy...... to put up pics of ure cousin
Forget that and relax matter of fact me & axe are cool
but I just scroll past your posts...like koncept at school

Walter Wall 12-02-03 09:55 PM

No rigid competitions exist'n that can step to walter
so Im proud to top me......like a 13 year old's halter
I'm bored, so yea I went back to being back again kid
Now Im sonning myself, like kids being independant
yea, I've read other verses and fact is they bore me
this'll be dope... as long as no one posts before me

osiruz 12-02-03 09:57 PM

whats with the gay avatar nigga? lose it...
your rhymes sound like another comeback for country music
when we meet g i'll throw you off of mount fiji
that way youll land at the bottom of mrs ricci
but it aint her ass loser, its her feet see...
it'll take the rest of your life to figure out how to defeat me.

Nitemarre 12-02-03 09:58 PM

Alcohol had to be the reason behind 'Walter Wall'
Lez face it yall, U smaller dawg, Linkin Park but U shouldn't crawl
I kick at body balls, when U drop from exhaustion and panic
so cram it cuz this what happens when abortion leaves the planet
words are F r AnTiK , havin a hard time articulatin' the structure
Wall's a joke ya head spins cuz there was a rupture when i punched ya-avy

osiruz 12-02-03 10:09 PM

you dont seem to like illness i guess your a rebel
cuz that sucked and your spittin at a heavyweights level
your represent the wrong goals to these mcs...
so i threw ya at a place too far for me to reach
now man listen to this flow and try to take head
nitemare? thats occurs when we try to spit ya rhymes to a beat

TrEbLe 12-02-03 10:36 PM

This nigga has no meaning no point in being alive
Nigga would turn gay if he was prieved by 5 guys
But to me he's been dead in my eyes
Break down every important piece of ya life and dats 2
Born on tha corner tryna "get off" eeww
Be a man don't give in 2 peer pressure
if he was jus hittin puberty he still couldn't "cum-fresher"

shizz 12-02-03 11:11 PM

dude name is treble, i take it he sounds like like a bitch
couldn't pound on a chick. skinny or round or with a dick
he woulda been gay, but no-one woulda butt fuck him
with a butt plug in , his ass all tucked in
the only nigga in the world that'll go to jail for sex
and couldnt get raped so he go's to the next.........

jon wayne 12-03-03 10:58 AM

only way you talk big is when you press caps...
couldn't sell ya flow even if it was crack...
i'm a top shotta like the nigga name dangles...
i'll blow ya lights out as if it was candles...
i'll step all over you as if your a door matt...
don't be 50 cent nigga,you should clap back..

80SHOTS 12-03-03 11:14 AM

john wayne
 
john wayne i fort u was dead, u some fake bitch
the way you fucking rhyme, man u sound like a snitch
first sign of trouble u ready to ring 999
mother fucker when i'm in trouble i blow my doggs nines
tricking like u a superstar u try so hard to sell yo music
but nobody feels it, i got doggs hullering you bullshit
nines hoes druggs and cars all u spitting gay wayne
fix up yo lyrics pussy, you elton john u aint no john wayne

Thunda_Rhymes 12-03-03 11:21 AM

yo ma man 80shots came out first
is trying to rap but he sounds like Fred Durst
i was dissin join wayne
cause he tells is a hustler
thaz the only way to get laid
80 shots's only satisfied when they put dick on his ass hole
whwn they do it he juz feels like he wons SUPER BOWL
(edited cause 80 shots came out first n i didnt knew)

Marvell 12-03-03 02:37 PM

If your gonna talk on the cypher boy get off/
Look at u explaining yourself thunda_rhymes I new you was soft!//

So basically I'm calln' you fruity/
You're the typewho go to jail on purpose justto get humped in the booty//:hump:

Tell the truth dude I know the facts/
So Im a give u time to make your confession and i'll be right back//

YoUnG-sUsPeCt 12-03-03 06:27 PM

u cant spit for shit Dawg i hate to tell u ya wack
Ya structures' a "train-wreck", not to mention ya flow is "off-track"/
See my confidence-soars knowing that half of ya post cant compete wit my drop-on-the-boards/
But forget it i'll still jostle-ur-corpse until ur trochlea's-torn and ur flesh develops abdominal-sores/





My Rhymes are "Mail-Men" with "Anthrax",just cuz when I spit I "Deliver Death"/
I have this Fag so "Shook" soo bad, that when I see him he wont have no "Shivers Left"/
Fist makes ya face a bigger mess/

TrEbLe 12-03-03 07:54 PM

Dude is rappin in terms he jus learned
barely hit 6 lines and this "Suspects" case is ajurned
now when will you learn My lyrics like heat from a blow dryer
ya flows like a mobb deep you need 2 retire
and prior 2 ya scheme i could develop u son
neva even touched a knife so i dont wanna here u say gun
Kid i'll murder you dude betta yet leave u shooken
I aint "Stevie Wonder" but i'll kill u wit out lookin

benster09 12-03-03 09:23 PM

I'm gonna teach some lyrical prose to this snot nosed donnie brasco pop those broke hoes imposto's to this rap thing go ahead and say it its real white in the rap game somebody better tell treble he aint on my level you don't want to battle the beast that reaps the streets keeps peace wit heat tooth for a tooth eye for eye have this bitch ass stevie wonder building castles in the sky

osiruz 12-03-03 10:01 PM

its a fact bitch, all youve taught him is wackness...
lemme teach you about scratching once you write a rhyme that shud happen
if wackness was considered dark then your vader
next time consider writing rhymes with a nice clean eraser
i can murder you but iam going less Ill to settle
cuz its the truth dawg! you got less skill than treble!

jego 12-03-03 11:59 PM

u fucking herb, do u actaully have the nerve
to overly conserve your weak verse to a 2 line spurt
your the fucking worst, and u just dun broke the rules man
6 LINE MINIUM CYPHER.......idiot you should be banned.
your the kinda of idiot that ruins this forum
so when newbs like you post i just try to ignore em
but sometimes i cant i just gotta fucking rant
cuz i have the guts to tell you to stop flowing cuz you CANT
piss ant, read the fucking sticky post
fagget, im laughing, your lifes a prissy joke
quit now before you get voted RB's biggest herb, fagget
actually fuck it ull be banned before the next fucking ballot

K-Dubb 12-04-03 12:07 AM

That was some nice shit jego, now will you please leggo my ego
cause that's not how we do it down here in the ghetto/
You call yours a big bad cypher.....idiot i should make you get on ya knees and become my ass whiper/
Ya lucky I'm only makin this six line short/
gives me just enough time to snip off ya last wart/

FreSh_EmCee 12-04-03 01:00 AM

bitcht ddnt u read da rules
minimun of six lines
dunno y dis site keeps such fools
fuck u and ur mutha fukn rhymes
under six lines and u think ur gud
check it, im from da hood
understood? homie juz leave dis forum
ur gonna get warned, probably deleted
fukn wif me and u'll be bleeding
exceeding ur skillz and wot u call talent
u rhymes are weird as if u were from da different planet

Born To Kill 12-04-03 01:45 PM

Dappa Rappa more like Parappa tha Rappa, nothin but a game...
To be played, cuz he's dismayed, and all together lame.
Another English bloke proven ta be a joke, man, what a shame...
Cuz the Queen Mother bout ta get smothered, cuz her guards are so fuckin tame!
And that would be you, the turn of a screw, ain't never seen a flatter head...
Good for resting drinks, while I sit and think, and you get heartily fed.

Yeah, gross, but so what!

bouncedoggydog 12-04-03 09:05 PM

Genuis and Converse Stop being fucking herbs and read the rules. Six line minimum fucken noobs!

You sorry fucks, with Cracked lines like Tweaked CLUKz/
Brainless ~N~ bitch stuck, dope-less all hopes Fucked/
Quit now ~N~ throw towels wave flags ~N~ ring bells/
Get it right cuz Shit Smellz, who ~told'ya~ Crap Sellz/
Whack cats 'CoNvErsE' bout Prick Swellz/
Genuis ContraDICKS wit, like DuMb Bellz/
Killed ya with ya own Newb Stylez, time 2 limp back across 8mile/


(get your shit together before posting in here!)

LoCo 12-04-03 11:06 PM

yawn

nigga above me wacka then people in the potery-section
this fak'd-homie-got-an-erection, wen he saw me postin, just a suggestion
nigga be a wack M.C, 'walk cross 8 mile', hes whtie but thinks hes black- hes in denial
meanwhile, im smackin his mom up wit barred-nuckles
fat like the dough boy, gettin raped by his "scar'd-uncles"
pick u up and chuck u, like to finish it off wit a fuck-u..
pz

Feeble Minded 12-04-03 11:30 PM

time to show these little kids how to freestyle.

^Loco's a hoe.. & reps a wack crew, my bomb'll hit this kid
while the only people that respect NUCLEAR CONCEPTS are atomic phycists..
your shit, says a lot for the newb bunch you belong to..
& actually the only reason i rip things off...is to clonk you
ur from chi-town? fuck *drifts off.. seriously.. this is old & played*
^ shit... i just described hios text career... ill fold this gay

Phoeniix 12-05-03 03:40 AM

you didnt show any kids nothin dawg
cept the fact that you cant rap
im going to clear the smog
and that is that
whats whack you are! yeah bitch
i said it, i dont care if i cant spit

criticalrican 12-05-03 09:13 AM

Wow im neva on this site but i jus decided to take a look
I didnt kno that i would witness the worst emcees that eva grew
Im left to diss when my spits hit and my beams rip
The only u'd be "hot" is if u lived in "phoenix"

Im defined as the one to exterminate when my conversion breaks
And ur turn will take as im left to diss this "guys first time" like when "a virgin breaks"
Im not even tryin dun im jus in class and really bored
It seems ive scored against this bitch when ur frees adjourn
I break the "seams" galore in the "thread" defeat on weaks is wats endured
BLAH.....i can go wayyyyyy harder......
i'll prob log on later.......1

CoNvErSe 12-05-03 01:37 PM

*ring ring* officer we jus found a person n 'critical' and hes puerto 'rican'....yo bouncedoggydog wants me not to b a herb,but i dont kno him n dont give a fuck, so i dont c y he speakin'....get off my nuts,im new to this so im 'exlporin' like 'dora'...critical rican new to this site to...he dont ko shit he jus 'crossed tha border'....you say u smell shit well so do i with u rican cuz ayll both frauds.....I'll leave this sixth line for you cuz,cuz im bout to 'bounce' doggydog....

Peace

-->FreeBasE<-- 12-05-03 02:07 PM

My words are the sting ya face feels hittin the pavement
U aint a buisness but U rollin around wit a mission statement
Strive all u want excellence is like breast way outta ya reach
Like literacy, CANT U READ, a cypher dont mean write a speech
U need to learn, cuz yer gettin burned up like unchecked toast
we smell the roast, take my advice and try to think B4 U post

CoNvErSe 12-05-03 02:37 PM

shit my clips keep you low to tha ground neva make it of tha pavement....yea i got got a mission statement,but thats how i succeed n how my rhymes get so flagrant....i dont try to write much but get bitched at i dont so yea ill spit my speech.... and you 'free base' huh?,make sense cuz tha rhymes you spit r cheap(base is crack)....yo i dont care if dis a cypher,i'll rip you how i rip and wont give a shit.....haha,yea i smell tha roast,but it aint hot,n i dont gotta b literate to kno that bitch....

~BRIGGZY~ 12-05-03 03:26 PM

u can still ''strive for excellence'' but u aint gonna make~it
kid u wanna start beef,well heres the recipie go on Bake~it
y u up in this joint?with a flow harder to ''Find'' than ''Nemo''
with no wordplay ur rhymes r whack n older than ''Benzino''
im known 4 droppin Bombs on sites everytime i click ''Reply''
smoke u dog n mix ur ash's wiv weed,to get me ''High''

criticalrican 12-05-03 04:10 PM

Back to rip all the textcees who try test the best now lets see
Briggzy? might as well call u bitch cuz judgin by ur battle records ur weak to me
Im neva on this whack site as i surpass height and the wrath will ignite fights
Not even goin half ass and i'll still murder u cats right and demolish cuz im thinin all u fags bite
Shit now i have to lower my ability to diss this whack emcee
Who lacks the frees, the only way "u'd be nice is if u passed as me"
I casting death upon pitty foes as urselves i trash ur stealth
I have to slash ur health and then the omnis wrath is felt
Briggzy's best is not even my weakest spits the leash has ripped
Which now means ur free to go without protection like when the codom "seams" to rip
I suck life out like dreaming ticks which seems at this
I have to finish u off and step on u like the beaten chics

IM NOT EVEN GOIN HALF ASS......THIS IS THE REASON
Y I NEVA GO TO THIS SITE.....but blah....this aint my hardest.....

geezy 12-05-03 04:16 PM

record edit highlight and circle me
you dont like mc-ing, you like waking up with purple knees
my raps get deeper than your boyrfriends gerbals bee
you couldnt see me even if i was erkle b
so dont diss R's shit
you aint a rapper
your a fuckin pixar kid
your not a man why dont you show us where you tits are bitch
so re-rereply and try dissing me
ill slow roast your ass like rottissery
and like your boy buzz im gon take this to infinity and beyond
cause you weak and we strong

Phoeniix 12-05-03 04:26 PM

geezy when u spit, no ones dreadin u
thsi ur first post? while im 6 a head of you
come on man, is that best you can spit
you should jsut quit
im the shit, yeah im tight
you suck at flowing like a dyke

bouncedoggydog 12-05-03 05:08 PM

If you're the Phoeniix than I'm the Spynx... breath of fire while your's plain Stinks/
THE RISE? With bars that fall, putrid lines each and all, out of 'Gear' like a 'Shitty' Ger-bal/
Dr. Sues would say this cat's Whack, far behind the herbs of the pack ~n~ dat's a mat'R-A-Fact/
Like the old site...ya just been Hacked, 'N-Talks-A-Kate-Did cuz your Ryhmes been 'Cracked'/
You've been 'Son'd' like Wings of Wax, Ancient Myth like Ecirus, ya best 'Chill-axe'/
Beat down in Six lines, Crunched like Pork Rhines ~N~ Burnt like Dank Kindz __ ~~ __~~/

Fixed Your HTML :)
-Axe


(Thanks just got back from Bare Elagance, kind of faded)

Phoeniix 12-05-03 06:18 PM

bounce dog seems u need to find a fucking life
usin some "bold" tactics in cypher stead a frontlines
you need to die, acting like your fuckin tight
remove the slick ~*~'s and ur verse is a nursery rhyme
spiced it up with puncuation cuz u cant do it wit skill
cant spit ill, all fills nothin to kill

Silentz 12-05-03 06:40 PM

ya rappin with rhymes that barely rhymin/
its like a midget vs shaq, i aint even gotta be tryin/
ur brains like old washin machines, dont work but rattle/
phoenix be ya name cuz ur burnt after every battle/
end up battling me n its like runnin into a brick~wall/
and ur shit dont hit, rubs like a feather n gives a tickle/

bouncedoggydog 12-05-03 06:50 PM

Aimed @ phoeniix

So ^ this is your interpitaiton of skill? That's down right ill/
Not a punch not a meta nothing to feel? What's the deal?/

My heated ryhmes ignite like Gas and Flint at the flick of a Light/
Burn'n holes deep thru ya chest melt'n kevlar death is ya plight/
I errode mic's with acidic spitz, you rode Dicks cum give it a Lick/

Just one verse you can call it a curse, vodoo 2B specific N extra explicit your ranks will disperse/
We should change ya name 2 Kleenx cuz ya soft 2da touch, like me inside of ya lady's gutz/
I bust and knock off the rust, hitting places you Aint never even touched/
You plus me in front lines equates to broke spines and just like ya Bitch "That ASS is Mine"/


What?

Dev 12-05-03 07:49 PM

bouncin doggydog is what you be when i rip ya rhymes straight
i seen more skill with blind men watching porn tryin to masturbate
i aint got hate jus seen new catz who can elevate
faster than you when snortin speed, ya not bill gates
ya cant type or make flows like snipped dawgs cant impregnate
get ya self home ya fake, too many posts like ya name sake...
........BOUNCE....lol

bouncedoggydog 12-05-03 08:10 PM

So you dare temp'd ya faith, like third in ryhme not even second rate/
Ya shallow style can't hold wieght with no depth to stimulate like delayed cycles ya way too late/
Jus a quick dis before I step, soon to be gone just like your Rep/
Regergitating played out lines since when did shit try hard to shine/
On my sac like Hooks to crack Deva's smoking pipe from front to back/
Ya got heat, but in the form of a rash ~n~ hott from friction that smells like ass/
Taken one too many blasts way deep in your back stash/

Ya dribble when ya spit like that curd infesting ya clit so we know you'll neva cum wit a lick/

( I got's to go now, have fun kids)

Dev 12-05-03 08:31 PM

i cum harder than you when im with ugly women
sumthin you aint used too, unless in ya lines cos ya fill them
ya stretch them like ya nob when talkin to the finer
cos ya packin meat like ya rhymes a one liner
quit saying ma name, attached to yours ya bring it shame
wish i could say im play'n but im not ya in the frame
for taking newbs but fraid ya record dont say the same

ravynzero 12-06-03 03:04 AM

this nigga here call himself nitemarre
but i can gurantee this fool cant pay bus fare
he say their wordz r frantic but his wordz r wack
he sounds like a house pet blazed on crack
dont ever post again thatz y yo shit is banned
my shit is hall of fame, yo shit is canned


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