Ras-kiLL VS. SLIPT
 

Drop Ya Verse Here And I'll Follow ~

Aight ~

alrite, my bad with the other thread!!!!!! a mod needs to have it deleted... peace!!!! 10 lines, here we go.

U SPITTIN OR NOT DAMN!

ALL THIS PRE-WRITTEN SHIT~

JUST POST~
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where you be at? I DISS LOCATE ya JOINTS//
cursing at your dead end carrear,
I could STAB you an you still won't get the POINT//
I Rap Banana's, dude tripping on my skin//
watch SLIPT slip an SPLIT, makin' you look like a amputated twin//
exaduate ya lines, like a documentry turned action movie//
But I'd knock the BLOCK of you BUSTERS, no film can shoot me//
you're eternal wackness no match for my giftd uniqueness//
you so ugly ya face has methaphorical features//
Man, you useless,
I could think of more uses for a SOLAR POWERED torch//
ya house is so small you walk in the front door an fall off the back poarch// sheading comparision to ya style, ... falling off//
you couldnt paint a DEF lyrical scripture if you were VAN GOUH//

Hit me bk...

Tell me bout pr-writtn, pre-written meaning its already wrote so it'll tak longer to type out ya shit like now as I'vee done... yo takin yo time man, reply already???

Da f*ck u @???? don't leave m hangin'??? ................................... I see you not browsing dis forum... come on man get ya ass bk here.........................

//~This bitch floating the boat, ma style sharp and swift,
too fast rhythm, words of water, catch my drift ~//

//~Im expellin shells, herbs shot up, deleted to the waste
garbage dwellin, call me elmers cause ill paste ya face ~//

//~Alternatives are pacing, time wasting, cant see ma wonder
my hastly greed, is to succeed, your creed is six feet under

//~My rackin-da-clips, is crackin-ya-hips, shin-splints, full of tears
eyes-sqiuints, swimmin fears, cause i drown this bitches ears

//~Fold ya neck in creases, oragamy, accordian-lookin-features
got ya spine in peices, preachers cant pray for him to beat this

//~He's afraid, ass constapatin, but pussy ovulatin, left stranded
hes a degrade, hand down his pants, caught red-handed

//~Enough embarassment, im finished, nice try ma son
but stick a fork in em this bitch is done ~//


Things to Know:

Drift=Boats Drift
Elmers=Type of Glue or Paste
Creed=Big Hit (Six Feet Under)
Oragamy=Paper Folding
Acordian=Old Instrument (All folded up)
Red Handed=Pussy Ovualtin (Blood on his hand)

IM SURE MOST OF YOU KNOW ALL THIS STUFF ~ BUT BELIEVE IT OR NOT SOME PEOPLE DONT ~ SOO THATS WHY I PUT THOSE UNDER EVERY BATTLE IM IN ~ PEACE OUT ~

your's is longr than mine man!!! I said 10 lines!!! .........................

narrow it down to 10 lines................

or shall I post 4 mo lines???????????????????????????? ....................................
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I MIS-READ YA LINES - DONT SWEAT IT -

so listen...i can't vote yet...damn near 100 posts...but i was wonderin if you or anyone would be willin to help me close this battle out...it's bein slept on...i will gladly help you guys out with votes within the next day or two when i hit 100...thanks..one.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=95946

UPPIN~
FOR VOTES~
DONT SLEEP ON IT~

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yo slipt verse got me floating

opener slipt

//~This bitch floating the boat, ma style sharp and swift,
too fast rhythm, words of water, catch my drift ~//

flow slipt
injoyment tie
creativity tie
structre slipt
closer slipt the other boy was good to

overall vote goes to SLIPT

great battle

peace

My extra two lines...

I'd crack ya head open like a circumsision//
dis nigga couldnt SHYNE If he was going to prision//

Come to Rap on the internet to get DISSED connected//
you couldnt beat me if I had a pair of two's,
an you had a king an a ace to concept it//

UPPIN (4)

1-0

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Fair enuff Rhymes... Da names Raskill........................................... ..... as in Ra (skill)
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my initials

WHAT YOU TALKIN BOUT ?

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lol... hey, dis was a decent battle, i coulda come harder tho... no matter the outcome I wanna battle u again!!! ok???

YEA, THATS STRAIGHT

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yo, s got dis one, congrats you beat a newbie. lol. my vote goes to him, .................................................. ........................... s

whateva!!! Fu... erm, Ras ain't no newbie jus tierd with a low post count!!! that vote was nexplained so that don't count!!!

UPPIN (3) MORE VOTES

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well, mak sure you read my EXTRA LINES at the bottem of thread 1 b4 voting!! .................................................. ........

U BITCH TO MUCH ~~ CHILL~~~LOL

PINE JUST TALK ALOT~~
HE TOLD ME I WAS A NEWB TOO~~
DONT SWEAT IT~~

Well, I gotta say not bad boys. I give the battle to Slipt. He had a betteer flow to his drop and the punches were clean.
I liked raskill's drop too but it was a lil shaky with the structure.
Vote Slipt

WHY ISN'T HIS VERSE COUNTING ???
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no prob, I don't think I deserve a TKO, come on peeps... I ain't never battling when tierd again!!! ..........................................

UPPIN VOTES
COME ON
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nice battle but i thin slipt took this better flow,
structure, punches,... n i like dhis opener n closer...

Ras-Kill u had a good verse too but slipt came harder yo
myVote=Slipt i cant poll yet tho but couldn anyone vote on this battle in my sig its tied n slept on

fair enuff .......................... I'ma com bk I promise, I still don't deserve a tko, come on uppin' .......................................

opener- split
flow slipt
injoyment tie
creativity tie
structre slipt
closer slipt

overall split. my vote goes to him.............................................

UPPIN

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yo there ya go, the mods can give it back now.............................
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UPPIN YALL
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yo slipt you got dq'd if a mod see's this u upped more then 5 time u ass fuck man learn who to do the uppin shit dawg. next time put it like this:
uppin(1)
uppin(2)
uppin(3)
uppin(4)
uppin(5)

ok dawg i know rite know ur gonna get DQ'd

HOLD ON I DONT UNDERSTAND~~
WHAT DOES THAT MEAN~~

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