Irv Vs. BugZ-BunNy
 

yo here chekc this heres his verse...

Dont come at me, Ill move quick to blast ya/
I keep the heat tucked like I was moving to alaska/
Dog, ill grab the heat/
Dont need beef, ill go elmer fudd style and hunt me some rabbit meat/
So you wont run into trouble, ill stab ur feet/
Im a vet, you a newbie to this game/
Ur rhymes is just as looney as ur name/
I put u in a moment of silence, u aint gotta sing the national anthem/
u can't see me in this game so u can call me the phantom/

heres my verse now...

yo kid look at you Mike jackson as your avatar//
your tryna make it in the rap game but you aint goin far//
ima murder you in this battle im the killer//
u ran into the ugly tree n u look like jackson did in THRILLER//
look kid u bite so hard i see ur ghost-writers rite threw you...//
you couldnt touch me in this battle if u were literally stuck to me with glue...//
i may be new to this site, n the rap game but im only 12 years old...//
but youd have to -freeze~to~death- for your rhymes to be sick or cold...//
tryna battle me puts ur chance of winning at High~riSk//
for you to be Ill you'd have to catch the West'Nile~ViRuS...//

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dont no yo this wus a pretty close battle i think bugz threw harder punches n personals n had a better flow but i liked irvs verse too so my vote = TIE hit the links in my sig up yo....

sorry yo i cant poll a vote yet but please hit links in my sigup yo thanks alot Peace.................._______________________

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vote - bugz

punchlines - bugz
structure - b ugz
wordplay - bugz
rhyme scheme - bugz


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damn cannabarz when u get 100 posts poll your vote on hear dawg i hate that 100 posts rule man i need peopel to vote on this battle its takin to fuggin Longg.....

flow-bugz
punches-bugz
entertainment-bugz
opener-bugz
closer-bugz

hmmm, my vote goes to----bugz

flow=Bugz
Punches=Bugs
Complex=bugs
Punchlines=bugz
Simple spit=irv

overall=Bugz


good battle

I liked your flow Bugz 12 years old? Nicely fuckin done than. It was a nice flow you had goin and I liked your punches and metaphors. Good job though both of you.

Imma have to go with irv on dis one, i just liked his verse more than bugz, it really made me laugh when he went

Dog, ill grab the heat/
Dont need beef, ill go elmer fudd style and hunt me some rabbit meat/

Dat was a good punchline, but styll a very close battle, so my decision was made by that punchline.

Vote- Irv

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=96491

Return the favour by voting here plz

iight bugz gets this he had a way better verse it had harder pucnhes more creativity more more over all just a more acedemic verse...

yo coulsd use hit up my battle in mym sig and my one against flows thanks pz

rule ur battle in your sig um Rhymes got banned so is there a point in voting n um i voted alrdy anyways at least my opinion i dont got 100 posts yet dawg

personals=bugz by 2 lines
flow=Bugz
Punches=Bugs
Complex=bugs
Punchlines=bugz


overall=Bugz


weak battle keep elevating

Flow-BugZ
Structur-BugZ
Punchs-BugZ
Personals-BugZ
Volcab-Both ( it was Pretty Weak )
Wordplay-BugZ


Overall-BugZ

Bugz Is DQ'ed From This Battle For Goin Into Noabuse And Infinite Skill's Battle And Tried To Be Cute By Saying... "Hit The Battle Up In My Sig." Read The Rules.