rule (Soft Focus) vs LM (D.O.I)
 

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Verse Due Dec 9th.

Topic: Unimagineable Nightmares

Good Luck.

chekcin in................................................ .................................................. ..

good luck LM

I'm unprepared haunted by mercyless demons
Leaving me in aginy my soul itself is screaming
Trapped in a fantasie of the devils hate children
I can't adapt to visons of how people killed 'em
Although I close my eyes I see the lost flesh
Ghost asking my dreams to resurect death
Minds losing piece by piece by lose of sleep
I was a rose from concrete now a lost sheep
My peddles falling my medow is a graveyard
Hearing souls calling think it was braveheart
All because of the scene my mind repeats
Over and over of sleeping with dead beats
Fetish to see beyond normal who now dwell
Help comunicate with souls trapped in hell
Struggle in my mind why this painful torture
Did I do something to provoke the dead culter
Is this a blessing to talk to souls from the past
A gift a chance to break the obscene glass
Closing my eyes is dandersous or so it seems
The devils work? Or god like angel like beams
While I sleep I can't answer different questions
Tryen to understand dead is my godly lessons
Theres no bliss while i'm asleep i'm worried
For am I even alive or actually really burried
All in all thus does not matter but i'm gifted
My resting curiosities I vow to keep restricted
They ask me questions of how tobe reincarnated
Jeezus has spoken to me an why god retaliates
With thunder from the oceanly sky
Every drop of rain another human dies
Crazy I can hardly believe it myself
Horryfing me it's preventing my good health
I'm losing hold of my bodily control
Let the spirites free why am i consoled
Leaving me sweating grasping for air..
Good and evil trapped in my mind..im scared
Unprepared i'm losing my thoughts of christ
Blood over love I hate my p.m to a.m life
Trully believe i encounter the spirites of god
Who didn't make it hell or heavon lost in the fog
I pray that these souls be free sent up stairs
For i'm dieing in my sleep....
From these Unimagineable Nightmares

hope this is good.....

I've just found this I didnt know it had been set up. I'll post ASAP.............................................. ........

All these devils and goblins surround me every night...
It's a relief when I open my eyes to the mornin light...
Coz my chest feels tight everytime this darkness falls...
The worst place is inside these 4 bedroom walls...
But exhaustion calls so I've got to be brave...
I've got to sleep or I'll go to an early grave...
A good nights sleep is all I crave but it doesnt come...
They say god punishes people's sins, what have I done...
All I wanna do is run and never stop or look back...
Coz it feels like my dreams have been hijacked...
Once, my life was intact, I was a happy child...
But that changed when my sleep became more wild...
All my fears piled on to me and now I feel like I've fell...
I've sliped, stumbled all the way down to this hell...
And It's hard to tell If I'll ever make it up to heaven...
Coz my nights have been like this since the age of 11...
My membrane has been severed, and I'm loosin concentration...
I hate to shut my eyes coz I know these will soon be comencin...
And I'm sensin that these unamaginable nightmares...
Are always gonna be there...

Peace!!!

uupin for votes on this crew battle............................................ .................................................. ...................

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good battle...nice reads by both

but honestly i think rule won with better metaphors and vocab that was precise...no hate at all

hit this up wit honest vote please
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=93220

apreciated...but ye need ta poll vote...

uppen

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ask a mod to edit the poll.............................................. ...................................

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I pm'd Ed so hopefully he'll fix it

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yea..........rule just had better punchlines.........and they was more consistent

punchlines - rule
flow - tie
structure - tie
topic consistency - tie
vocab/complexity - tie
metas - lm
opener - rule
closer tie
overall - rule

hit this battle up honestly

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=97408

vote doesnt count - punches in a topical????? i believe u didnt read. -feeble

dammit thats two of you now who didnt post a poll......assholes lol............................................... .................

I just wanna know what punchlines have to do with topicals.
Anyway....uppin and dont forget to poll........

Peace!!!

no idea about the punchlines considering this is a topical battle............................................ ..............................

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uppen for votes.
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punchlines in a topical..wtf are you talkin about..that's the stupidest vote I have every read....uppin..

yeah thats fucked

uppen to get this battle over with.............................................. .............

punchlines - rule (lol j/p)
flow - tie
structure - tie
topic consistency - LM
metas - LM
opener - rule
closer- rule
overall - rule

Vote- Rule

Not a bad battle

Okay I really liked this, can't consider it close cuz rule did rip this. Rule got this wid story telling, imagary, staying on topic and consistent flow. Nice shit from both I enjoyed LM's metaphors. Overall vote goes to rule.
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Here's a link to my battle vote on it please :) It's 4-3 me and its been up for 2 weeks can't up so this is how I have to get votes :( Thanx, nice battle to both.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=96666

tokens and eye ques votes dont count under suspicion of hate vote..... -feeble @@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@ @@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@

^^^^^^^hahahahah we've been waiting a month on these votes...making them not count is unethical mayne..theres no hate in their votes...seriously thats messed up.....


they may not count on record they still count in this battle...

4-0 uppin for rule
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Yo mods, due to the circomstances of the crew battles, WL and D (crew leaders) talked about the battles and said they should be closed and the person with most votes gets the win even if there isn't 5 votes...so could you please close this and give me the win...thank you

this is suppose tobe closed an i get the win............................................... .................................................. .................................................. .....

If LM Posts And Agrees To Takin The Loss... I'll Close This Battle... But Until Then... You Just Have To Wait For The Votes.

^^^I'm agreein coz rule got this fair and square. Good battle rule, congratulations. It's fair if you get the win dawg........

Peace!!!

^Good Sport... Done.
-Axe