Vylent Stalker Vs. LooNey_Boi
 

Ill be spittin in a sec.................................HolD ^

don't hate my first battle on the site......I was the king of another site I was on


UK KILLIN THIS FAGGOT CUNTIN COCK RIDER

//Looney boi? Man You must be, battling an ill newbie//
//New man comes and kills the Loon, For tryin to fuck me//
//Cos I come equipt with venom I spit in every direction//
//Claims to be hard and can’t Even gain an erection//
//Cos I’m a Metaphor King, I eclipse losers like Night//
//My punchlines KO ,while yours scratch the surface like girl fights//
//You’re a boy of only 13? Yeah Cunt I read your Bio Blud//
//Young n’s get nervous and stutter kinda like Elma Fudd//
//Cos I’m extra-ordinary while Looney Fag stays plain//
//He’s kinda lame after he’s tamed,kid ain’t got no game//
//It’s quite clever, When I Flow N I slay this PA hombre//
//Go and play Scrabble n pictionary, get some real wordplay//

o0 Yea Your a "vylent stalker", sittin on Rb all-the-time//
I mean, I just threw one punch in and you already-cried//
Read some of your old ryhmes, they sound like a joke, fereal//
If your mom had a choice, you'd be another repeal!//
And by the way, you sound like a dude who don't get pussy//
"Vylent Stalker" what little girls? damn you's a rookie//
Dude, couldn't get a real bitch, I seriuosly bet//
Here lemme take ya to the kennel and the vet//
And you STILL COULDN'T GET NONE//
What don't you get? You could way million pounds,YOU AIN'T BIG PUN//
Cuz you can't rap, period...I'm seriuos//
My rhymes are ill and left you delirious//

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C'moN PeePs Vot3!
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oops wrong thread srry!
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But Yea VoT3 PeePs!!
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one sided battle.im givin this one to vylent.his verse was a bit stronger and more complex.

vote-vylent stalker

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UppIN Fo Votes ((1st time))








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i liked lonies better

Flow:Loony
Coplex:Vylent
Punches:Loney or vylent =tie
rhymes that stay on the beat: looney
Overall=looney

opener-vylent
punches-vylent
flow-loony
closer-loony
overall-vylent
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mc bruta

aight wasnt feelin this battle that much nuthin 2 amaze me

stalker....
flow was off man damn whack flow well thats how i seen it....punchlines were ok some nice 1's,not much wordplay used n no personals....n this is a battle right?? well is it me or did u just big ur self up all the way through...shud just concentrate on diss'n the opponent....

Flow....5
punchlines....6
wordplay....4
personal....2
overall...............6

Looney

not much betta man wordin 2 simple...but u had a nice flow through out punchlines were decent wordplay was poor but had sum personals

Flow.....8
punchlines...6
wordplay.....3
personals........4
overall............6.5

vote- Loony....his flow won him this battle uva than that just little finks made it different

Yo... we need more votes.....
wut should we do?
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looney, nice try but vylent merked ya dog. his punches were better and came harder. he had nice personals too. both need to elevate, but botha yall have real potential.
vote-vylent stalker


hit up my battle against slipt honestly

Ill tell ya the truth i would say his was better... but it dont make much sense but.......its your opinion not mine

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flow-loon
structure-loon
punches-loon
personals-VS
complex-VS
vocab-none
multis-.....none
wordplay-loon
overall-loon
My VOte=Looney_Boi clos ebattle tho-

aight let me see...
Breakdown-
Punches-Vy
Flow-Vy
Structure-Vy...even tho i dint like
Metas-Tie..but loon dont used cried lines..thats wack
Creativity-Vy...easy
Complexity-Loon
Overall-Vylent Stalker...

this was much of a one sided battle eally
Props to both tho pz

yo............... lets get this battle over wit sum1 make the last vote
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LooNey_Boi DQ'ed For Uppin Way Too Much... Read The Rules.
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