Slik Shadow vs Rap~Jesus~
 

8 lines max...u spit first

u got 15 mins to spit and i got anotha 15 after that

5votes
no dk
no crew
no hate

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My Verse:

OPENER:
U called out ne1 wit a lot wins//
I got 5 now get ready to turn my 6th victim//
Heating up:
I'll cracke u skull with my gun and leave ur brain Xposed//
Send to to da grave sowing no sympathy nor no remorse//
The way i'll burn this nigga my signature should be 666//
Ima make u famous-cause afta this battle i be the only reason niggas kno u exist//
Its 2000 plus-its must-fa cats that hear me bust-put on teflon earmuffs//
Enslave this nigga wit lines-shackled wit rhymes-like im spittin handcuffs//
Finisher:
Don’t die on me dawg, I’m still not finished diggin’ ur grave//
Ur options are to sit and behave or spit and deprave//

peace

iight...u did 10 lines when i said 8..stupid fuck..learn how to read..but what ever..i matched it

iight...

Kids Forgotten, Like Bein on da Back of my mind but on da tip of my tungue
Catch dis biter by Track in ya Lines, Do ya Like Bullz in Rodeos and leave ya hung
Like Acids in da belly of da beast Burn this fruits cuz I be Increasingly drastic
Hes like Stop Bein so great, Cuz My Flow just stole da Show Like a Burgalin Actress
this kid comes weaker than fist in slowmo, almost 300 post 2 n he still has no struct
call his rap a bomb or dinomite,cuz like he did wit his otha 3 losses he got blown up
I got this kid Wishin I was in his Crew, How can u expect to beat me when ur terror clique dude
And dogg keep me outta ya flows, Im not tha one u write Suicide Notes 2

come on we need some votes up in here

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holy fuck.....its been 1 week and still not a single vote...god damnit

can somebody please come up in here and drop an honest vote

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silk shadow took this one, rap jesus didn't flow as good but hit with a few good lines, tight battle but silk shadow took it because of an overall better verse, rhyming and punches

peace

I was feelin rap jesus on this one, silk had way too much vocab and not enough hard punches at all, rap was more complete and he actually threw sum ight disses. vote=rap jesus

peep my battle with j-yo and vote, thanks.

Theres a 10 line minimum.
Can't vote but heres a breakdown anyway.
opener: Slik
Closer: tie
Flow: None
punches: tie
personals: Slik
Win: Slik
Slik wins by my breakdown, but Rap should win by DQ since the site line min is 10 No hate, jus a vote. hit this up http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=100235

i gotta give my vote to rp jesus because his shit was more struytured and he had a couple tight lines in there

but silk shit i didnt even read because the structure was so horrible....so my vote goes to R.J

flow-jesus
personals-silk
punches-tie
disses-jesus
consistancy-tie

vote-jesus he came a little bit harder, a little bit more direct, silks bars are a little stretched it kinda throws off the flow, crammin too many words between rhymes, other than that not bad keep at it, btoh can use some elevation..jesus took this with an edge

return the favor hit this up we need votes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102040

^^ damn herbs voting

one more newbie herb votes on my battle ill murk all of you

uppin

and damn..this was a wack battle

fuck...one damn month ago

get some votes

noabuse.....what the hell is he on?...o wait.....rap jesus has 100 posts.....maybe he'll return a dik ride vote......

its pretty evident that slik took this here.....he dominated in structure, punches, flo, meti4's, and wordplay........he just brought more to the table......Wasn't that great overall....but Rap jesus just basicly suck'd horrificly.....

vote- slik

and the 10 line rule was made after i dropped

thats why

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Yeah Thanks For Lettin Us Know..

Recycled Punch. Everyone Uses This.

Heating Up...Yeah..Okay...Okay Punch.

Good Punch.

First Line Sucked. 2nd Line decent punch.

Once Again..Thanks For Lettin Us Know This Was Your Finisher..Cause If You Didn't Tell Us..Yeah..Decent Closer. Nothin Special.

You Got Some Work To Do. Decent Verse..Your Structure Needs Some Work.


Haha. Entertaining. Good Opener.

Not Too Bad. Slight Improvement From Last Punch.

Solid.

Iffy Closer. A Little Biting Perhaps..Nevertheless...This Closer doesn't affect the verdict.

Decent Verse. Seen Better.

Vote: Slik. Good Job.

^^ no in 8 mile he said

" Im sorry you have to be the one you commit suicide too"

not suicide notes

Opener: Tie (Both were decent)
Punches: Both hit about the same...(Tie)
Personals: Slik came harder with personals as they connected nicely
Structure: Tie (Jesus ur structure started wack and Slik ur lines were 2 long)
Flow: Slik's rhymed better (Ive never heard of 6 6 six and exist rhyming
Vocab: Tie
Closer: Slik

Well close battle in most catergories but Slik takes this ~

wow.... rap jesus got merked....fix up ya structure friend......even out them lines.......punches def....slik....more creative then RJ....
metas and wordplay i also give to slik....much better.....Rj just needs to elevate.....in all aspects

vote - SS