...::ËMËRGË::... v.s. playboydojo
 

10 lines
No bullshit

You spit first i spit when i feel like it.

voting

opener
closer
punches
personals
wordplay
vocab
overall

It's clear who'll win this battle's over before it begin/
'Cuz basically, facing me, EMERGE is facing his end/
So how bout this? You can tell cats that when I was smacking on you/
Trashing on you, and bashing on you it was just practice on you/
So it was all in fun when my fist rushed in, your ribs crushed in/
When my primal urges EMERGES and leaves your blood gushing/
So after my verse is spit, in the earth you get/
Murk you quick, next time I hope someone EMERGES who's worth my wit/
Someone who's only hope aint to take my verse and surgeon it/
Verdict's in: EMERGE just typed "hot rhymes" into Google now he's searching it.

ill vote on this when the other cat spits yo can yall hit my link in my sig up please thanks_______________________________

*sighs*

blah...i am not gonna battle newbies anymore...none have potential so here goes my half-assed verse;)

*cues up WHOA! and flexes fingers*

Boy it's evident I represent...everything you want to be
Seriously, even if you were harlem you couldn't shake me
Immortal punch you through portals I'm hitler & you a jew
Sucks to be Dojo it's sad...even midgets look down on you
^By that claim it makes your name an opposite retraction
I don't know how a "small man";) can get so much action?
Ya wack dog I take it back you're right you are a played boy
You are gay literally...I just 'ripped' you and brought you joy
I beat you with my first bar...rest were for show like my car
I recommend you go to a shrink cuz i got you mentally scarred

vote beeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeyatches!!!!!




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Dojo - You started out a little iffy, but seemed to keep hypen it up. I was feelin 2 of your punches real nice. Nice word play, not the greatest verse, but you hit it good.

Emerge - You came with puches, but most where all played out. Could have used better word play, add some multies maybe. I honestly expected you to win befor I entered the forum. It was a straight verse, he just had some pretty good punches...

Vote - Dojo

OUT

-High Class a.k.a Confusion

lop sided battle tbh.....emerge took it by far, really should battle someone hu aint newb tbh....

emerge took all categories

vote = emerge

high class you just proved how much of an herb you are...
my shit was not played i dare you to find something that has anything that i used...you are a moron seriously...
My shit was packed with mulites and wordplay what a fucking fag!

opener:emerge
closer:playboy
punches:emerge
personals:emerge
wordplay:tie
vocab:emerge
overall:emerge

playboydojo, your verse started off weak but it did pick it up towards the end and your closing line was good. emerge came a little weaker than usual but he did say he was gonna drop a half-ass verse but even still his verse definitely took the win.............

HMMMMMM....
Breakdown-
Punches-Emerge easy..High class is a punk..but Hitler line is played
Personals-....
Metas-Emerge
Enjoyment-Emerge
Flow-Emerge
Complexity-Emerge
Overall-Emerge

even tho emerge dint try he easily beat the other guy in all aspects....well merked him..sum noobs aren't bad..he wasnt that bad..had te structure jus need to edit a bit pz

MAKE SURE YA HIT THIS UP PLZ BEING SLEPT ON PZ
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=96273

i already dropped my vote on this and polled but i forgot to post this link to my battle.....if you could return the favor and vote on this it would be appreciated...sorry for the free post

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=96799

I know I can't vote yet, but I hope that aint how it goes down around here. One head votes for the newbie and get hate for it. That's some bias shit.

Breakdown-
Punches-played
Personals-....
Metas-Emerge
Enjoyment-Emerge
Flow-Emerge
Complexity-Emerge
Overall-Emerge

Ok...

Why was dis rule in the battle?

Quote "emerge"
10 lines
No bullshit

You spit first i spit when i feel like it.



kk, right their Emerge, u gave urself the biggest advantage anybody could have. 2nd...

when battle thread was made - at 11:48 PM

when dojo spit - 11:56 PM

when emerge spit - 08:07 PM

Why did you have to spit a full 20 hours and 11 minutes after Dojo did?, now this leads up to my next comment...

Quote "Emerge"
*sighs*

blah...i am not gonna battle newbies anymore...none have potential so here goes my half-assed


Ok, how the hell is dojo a newbie when u have to spit 20 hous and 11 minutes after him and he spit his verse in only 8 minutes, i think dat makes him the better battler, then u have the nerve to claim ur post is half-assed, i think dat is pure bullshit, i think u just spent that entire time making your post better just to top his.

So because of those reasons, my vote goes to
Vote - PlayboyDojo

ok moron lol you are gay i might just have to merk your ass for that...you dont know how good i am im proven here dumbfuck so before you go talking shit newbie why dont you try to know something first...if i would have spent all that time i would have ended up with 50 bars so go away faggot!

If u r so good, then y didnt u need so much tyme to post?
If u are so good, why did dojo go first and not u?

Im sure that if u are as good as u claim dat u r, U could of easily posted a verse in under 8 minutes. Since Dojo is a newbie, u must b able to produce sumthin 2x as good in 5 minutes, am i wrong for believing that or are u an idiot for assuming my assumption is false?

no...i posted when i had time to post idiot...i did the battle and he agreed to post first and i dont post first anymore cuz people see my shit and no show...i went out with my friends and i posted today when i woke up...if you post one more reply on this you will be banned for freeposting i already talked to a mod about it:)

uppin#2 vote vote vote vote

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opener=playboy
closer=emerge
punches=emerge
personals=neither
wordplay=playboy
vocab=emerge
overall=emerge

I think this was actually close, playboy dropped a pretty coo verse. But didn't have the hard enuff punches to take the win, He defintely took flow though, and emerge some of your punches were played dun't front..LOL Truthfully this was probly the worst verse i seen from you, but you still won.

/\lol hence the half assed verse never again though lol





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Aight, look here Emerge. I did your thing. I let you get away with bullshit. We were both on at the same time, just how long after I first put up that verse did you tell me I made the thread wrong? You started the new thread, let me put my verse in, then went into the lab on some hater shit, even though we were clearly on at the same time. Play by my rules now.

Rematch:
20-30 lines.
24 hour reply.
No feeding off lines.
You make the thread and YOU go first, bitch

/\ how about this you go and get 5 wins then i will give your rematch whatever rules you want dont matter...

anyway uppin#3

Alrite, i placed my vote, would really appreciate if it ya'll hit me up wit an honest vote at

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=97040

thx.

blah...weak battle


opener+1-Emerge....playboy u coulda worded yours better
closer+1-Emerge
punches+2-Emerge
personals+2-none
wordplay+1-blah...both were weak...
complexity+1-Emerge
multis+1-Emerge
originality+1-Playboydojo
cornyness-2-neither
enjoyment+1-Emerge

overall...playboydojo (+1).....Emerge (+7)------Winner..no hate

look imma break this down...i think dojo gave this a pretty good go. But on the real side emerge came with better wordplay and punches...I know emerge can come harder but he took this with flying colours...

Punches-emerge
Personals-....
Metas-Emerge
Enjoyment-Emerge
Flow-Emerge
Complexity-Emerge
Overall-Emerge

vote emerge...