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5hifty 12-06-03 09:47 PM

5hifty vs Obstacle
 
15lines max

No-feedin
No-biting
No-Recyceling


all vote must be explaing crystal clear
you spit 1st


Good Luck!

Obstacle 12-06-03 10:17 PM

if you were women and children you still wouldnt come first
this faggot is just screwed up like a nail drilled reversed
ill never run out of shots like a Legasus bow and arrow
ya flow cant come at me, it's like 5hifty's dick is Starril
ya cant brake my fall like building fire evacuation mats
bitch you make me wanna throw up like graduation hats
i'll easily drop you like appliences carried by Urcle
ya lines r even cheaper than Mr Allan Commercials
gettin bossed, ill have lossed like ducks that flew east
5's twisted and crooked, he's British Sets of teeth
u couldn't 'hold a win' if u made ya verses save on a disk`
this kid is even more played than brand new`radio hits`
like obese joggers ill leave this kid sor-fa-win
he could basket air and still not score a win

5hifty 12-06-03 10:53 PM

Merking in progress....

I see defeat blinking missing visions of vivid teachings,
till your interest is peaking to the point that your computer
screen seems to be breathing.
My Divine Scriptures Intertwine Mixtures of Mind Pictures and
Sinister Quotes that don't Administer Hope cuz you're Fucked when
I Drop like a Prisoner's Soap, I'll take this basement alchemist
confront his face with scalpel fists and watch his Peak Performance
when I toss his waste from mountain tips
Merc this herb with shards of thermometers chalk, his parts in
compositors he'd only flow off keys when I rip his HEART THROUGH THE
MONITORt, this is your final act and you won't survive the cut
when I carve open your abdomen to prove you're deprived of guts
kid you're trash in my sight and I'm glad for your strife...
I'd even rip out your spine to take the only support you ever
had in your life.

[B]Merk Complete...[B]

5hifty 12-06-03 11:18 PM

upping for somw honest for #1




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†...XiiV...† 12-06-03 11:22 PM

My Divine Scriptures Intertwine Mixtures of Mind Pictures and
Sinister Quotes that don't Administer Hope cuz you're Fucked when
I Drop like a Prisoner's Soap,

^^^SH!T WAS NICE FROM 5HIFTY...





OBSTACLE...

ya flow cant come at me, it's like 5hifty's dick is Starril

^^^THIS LINE MADE ME LOSE ALL INTEREST THAT I MIGHT WOULD HAVE HAD IN YOU IF YOU WERE GOOD...



VOTE=5HIFTY...but i can't poll vote yet though

rapture 12-06-03 11:28 PM

"cuz you're Fucked when
I Drop like a Prisoner's Soap"
thats some ill shit man
my vote - 5hifty
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5hifty 12-06-03 11:32 PM

LMAO.. thanks man............................................... ........................................

SyaNidal 12-06-03 11:35 PM

5hifty ripped n murked this kid in like 2 lines....

My Divine Scriptures Intertwine Mixtures of Mind Pictures and
Sinister Quotes that don't Administer Hope cuz you're Fucked when
I Drop like a Prisoner's Soap,

that shit wus very ill yo....
5hifty nice spit yo u got talent better punches better opner closer shit i od tneeda go into no more detail
My VOte=5hifty«-- u merked that kid!

5hifty 12-07-03 12:34 AM

upping for honest votes #2..........................common people plz vote..................................

5hifty 12-07-03 01:42 AM

upping for votes #3................................................ .................................................. ..............................

5hifty 12-07-03 04:08 PM

upping for honest votes #4................................................ .................................................. .........

.:K:. 12-07-03 05:12 PM

shifty got this one beceause his punches hit harder with better personals, da otha dudes shit wsnt hard man.his flow was ok but had a poor open and close.keep elevateing u 2.................

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=97097


...............pz

.Iknoevel. 12-07-03 09:39 PM

shifty got this one wit harder punches, better personals, and more complex

i would explain it better but this battle wasnt even close

shifty...change up ya struct and elevate alittle more then come try out for DOI again

t-west 12-07-03 10:08 PM

Lol, 5hifty's last line sums up my thought.

"complete merking"

Better punches, vocab, opening, closing, need i say more?

Vote- 5hifty


Hit me up with a vote here. Honest vote plz.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=97040

5hifty 12-07-03 10:56 PM

thank you.. i appricaite the time and the votes for all of those who voted....

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High Class 12-07-03 11:08 PM

5hifty - You had some nice punches in there. Maybe make the verse easier to read for the newer people on the site. But I was feeling the word play and all that shit. Nice drop hommie.

Obstacle - Your verse was ok, played punches and all. The steril line has been used to much. It was straight but could have been done better. The punches where flying out, but not catching full contact...

Vote - 5hifty

( Return the Favor and peep my flow in my sig hommie, drop a replie for me, it would be much appriciated... )

OUT

-High Class a.k.a Confusion


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