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5hifty vs †...XiiV...†
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No-feedin No-biting No-Recycling No-d/r all votes must be explained.. you spit 1st good luck! |
checkin...make sure you spit tonight...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...7388#post967388 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=96965 ^^^i dont know if links are needed or not... |
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Follow In "God's Footsteps" Connected To A "Seraph's-Knees"...Monitoring Your Style...Ya Sh!t's Not Even Fair,-It's-Weak...13 Is "Sick As Indians"...With "Ill Az-Tecs (ass text)"...I'm 'Beatin Your Verse' Like Wrestlers When I "Chair-A-Key (cherokee)"...(wrestlers get beat wit chairs) 5hifty Is Now-Fukked...He Marvels At My Kills...13 Usually Wow's-Sluts... Your Verse Is Like Putting "Streets On Tropical Beaches"...Cuz Your "St.Aisle (style)"-Sukks...(st.=street) 5hifty's Disoriented...In The Illest State Of Mind Is Where This Genious-Roars... Thinking You'll Win...His Head's "Filled Up" Like Cars At "Convenience-Stores"... This Kid's "Lifestyle Is Ripped" So He Gets-"Trojans" But Even His Men-Notice... I Mutilate Deformed Sluts...Put "Nostrils At His Side"...He's 'Out Of It' Like "Hip-Noses"...(hypnosis) Bring Havoc To This Cunt's-Spine...Peeps Like Me Is Why He's Still Unsigned... You'll Never Have "4 Wins"..."Perpetrating Verses" Think Ur Ill But All You Do Is "Front-Lines"... 13 Is My Name But It's Roman-Numerals...Rip And Dismember Is What I Hope-To-Do-To-You...I'll Play The "Good Son" And Orchestrate Your "Death" Like We Was At "McCully Culkan's-Funeral... ...R...=...I...=...P... E=F=F=O=R=T=L=E=S=S |
uppin for 5hifty
now i gotta make this post a little bit longer to stretch out to a hundred characters... pee'c |
Merkin in Progress....
your punches are wack and poor now I'll slap this whore till I wrack his core..this faggot's 'threads couldn't be felt if they were sold in a fabric store, your lies are all a game to prevent your fall from fame, the only proof I need is posted in the Hall of Fame, you twist words while I spit verbs that rip herbs till they're diss turbed.. where's your pic-nerd? this geek is chokin as his defeat's approachin cuz he can't step to me when both his knees are broken, you're more cashed out than the resin from weed hash and crack smoked, the only thing funny about your verse is that I need to laugh at bad jokes, your chances of beatin me are like cripples masterin stairs, leave you gaspin for air, you couldn't drop hot shit if you lit your ass with a flare you've got nothin bringin that wack and harmless evil and your punches are non existent just like slaps from armless people Merk Complete.... |
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damn this is probably my weakest verse i have ever spit in my life.. what can i say it was less than 5min to write...good vers XiiV.. you might of won
but i will get a rematch later on :) |
yo so far everything i seen from 5hifty has been a complete ill and merking verse i gotta go wit 5hifty he murked u 13....
any way 5hifty had the flow structure punches merkin metas n multis shit no more explanation.... My VOte-5hifty.....«-- man u merked another cat... |
yo everyone drop ya honest votes on the battle in my sig Vs Rapture we needz votes yo Peac3........___________________
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NIce Battle!!....
Aiight heres da "Breakdown" X:shyt wusnt dat good i couldnt even finish readin it!!....but keep tryin!! ^^....Cant give break it down!! Now..... 5hifty:Good shyt!....i wus feelin dis!!....Punch's were on point n were hittin, good shyt wit dat!!....flow wus good keep it up!! Punch's:8/10 Multi's:6/10 Meta's:7/10 Wordplay:8/10 (not dat hot tho) Structure:7/10 Overall:36:50 Vote:5hifty Reason:He straight mrda'd him!!....keep it up!! |
i appricate for those who voted...
aiigth this is my last time upping for votes so plz vote people.. we need this battle overwith |
Vote=5hifty
better punches that hit way harder...........yo that verse was dope.....................that was a nice battle yo |
good battle here. i liked it cuz it had to differen styles....both of their structures were pretty fucked up.............but 13 got it together after the beginnin, i just cant feel the verse 5hifty when its like a paragraph.....flow was almost even....13's lines were a little too long i think....
5's punches hit hard....but 13's punches hit hard and had wordplay..... i think i'd give it to 13 if i could vote |
yo 13 your shit waz to komplex man, like if u were to spit dat ova a mik people wouda been lost, but all in all u did have good wordplay.... but 5hift kuz, u got strait to da point and your rite dat waz a merkin verse fo sho...my vote=5hift... keep it krakin yo.
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Damn this mother really did break it down to a T |
Yea man 13, dat was wayyyy too complex lol. Like no offense man, but dis aint "NASA freestyle battles". Dont mean 2 diss ya der but stressin the point. 5hifty, i did expect more from ya but u put out enough to earn urself my vote.
Vote- 5hifty Return the favour by placin honest votes. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=96491 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=96361 Thx. |
i wouldn't say 5hifty murdered XiiV...but he did have a much better structure, flow, and punches....XiiV u battle like a head from HHD...it don't work here.....u had some senseless wordplay....for example...
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BREAKDOWN Multis - XiiV Metas - Tie (XiiV had some senseless ones) Wordplay - Tie (same as above) Personals - Neither (none of u threw a direct punch) Punches - 5hifty (hit harder and made more sense) Vocab - XiiV Flow - 5hifty Creativity - Tie Complexity - XiiV Structure - 5hifty RhymeScheme - 5hifty Overall - 5hifty only gets this because XiiV had some pointless lines and forced wordplay...don't get me wrong...some of them were tight....but 5hifty had a more understandable and harder approach....good read from u both though...no hate...just a vote... peace 4:20 |
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