i'm`the`bitch Vs. mofo
 

yo lets do this
rules are the following:
no hate votes
no dr votes
no crew votes
5 to 15 lines/bars
i'll spit first

Re: i'm`the`bitch Vs. mofo
 

[QUOTE]Originally posted by this_mofo_aint_playin
yo lets do this
rules are the following:
no hate votes
no dr votes
no crew votes
5 to 15 lines/bars
i'll spit first [/QUOT

how do i get a structure

yo lets do this shit i'll put ur ass in that ditch/
rite about now i'm about to make u my bitch//-1
do you think you can compete with the mofo/
well bring it bitch and we'll see this fo show//-2
ur advatar is the one fuck milk and got pot/
thats what prob makin you c da fuckin dot//-3
grab ur flabby ass and fuck the hell out of it/
make you fuckin moan an make u eat carpit//-4
well mabye i aint got shit to fuckin say bout you/
and by the way thst was my shit an i'm through//-5

look at my rap and u'll see

oh yea i made a typo thst= that ok ppl........................................
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come on bitch bring that shit i'm gonna woop your ass with a 1 ton bitch you think u got all say just wait till i kick your ass another day when i get done your not gonna be able to bend down and suck your dick cuz all your are is a big fat prick.
i have not much to say except why are you so fucking gay
and thats all i have to say............................, ................................./
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/=half a bar,//=end of bar

METAPHORES - ...
VOCABULARY - ...
PUNCHLINES - ...
STRUCTURE - this_mofo_aint_playin
CREATIVITY - this_mofo_aint_playin
PERSONALS - this_mofo_aint_playin
MULTIES - this_mofo_ainy_playin
FLOW - this_mofo_aint_playin

OVERALL - this_mofo_aint_playin

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yo thanx for da vote...........UPPIN(1)........................... ....................
come on ppl lets get this closed today........................

Agree wit ya 200%, except for creativity, i didnt see much in der.
Hit up my link and give an honest vote.

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this_mofo_aint_playin- structure, flow, personals, creativity,
n multis... this battle in my opinion wus fucking weak and whack.....
no one had punches or nuthin anyway My VOte-this_mofo_aint_playin
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yo buggs vote on the pole man............................................... ..
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yo t-west get ur posts up then come poole vote on this ok man. thats what counts not just typin it in here..................

UPPIN(2) COME ON PPL LETS GET THESE VOTES IN FOR THIS POLE AND LETS SEE WHATS GONNA GO DOWN BETWEEN THE BITCH AND MOFO

UPPIN(3) come on guys and gals vote on this batlle already.
hit this up come on...............................plz.............. ...............

Aiight dis battle was whacc!!.....nooo punch's sooo dis really isnt considered a battle.....but ill explaine my vote!!

Bkitch:ummm....i dont really have ne thing to say to u but dat u should elevate alot more b4 u battle dat wus horrible!!......try harder next time!!

come on bitch bring that shit i'm gonna woop your ass with a 1 ton bitch you think u got all say just wait till i kick your ass another day when i get done your not gonna be able to bend down and suck your dick cuz all your are is a big fat prick.
i have not much to say except why are you so fucking gay
and thats all i have to say............................, ................................./
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^^ dat wus nuttin but an elementary rap soo elevate!!

Now

mofo:shyt wus weak basically no punch's or if those r they r not strong soo work on dat!!...but atleast un-like "bitch"......ur verse wus better structured,flowed better,soo overall u have da better verse!!

Vote:mofo

Reason:>>(Scroll up n look for ur self)<<

there you go!!......~1~

yo dumb ass u have to have 100 posts to vote on this battle thats the only way that votes can be done cuz u have to pole vote.

UPPIN(4) HELLO PPL YOU HAVE TO HAVE AT LEAST 100 POSTS TO POLE VOTE SO LETS GET SOME PPL THAT HAVE OVER 100 POSTS TO VOTE ON THIS BATTLE.

rite....

bitch
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weakest verse ive ever seen methinks.....nothin in there at all....

'youre a big fat prick'

omg, terrible.....

no structure.....go to open mic please before your battle record goes down the drain.....

not a brilliant verse from mofo....from wot ive seen before....

vote = mofo

yo man thanx for the vote and the only reason i made a weak verse is cuz shez a newbie so yea lol.................

UPPIN(5) THIS IS MY LAST AND FINAL TIME FOR UPPIN SO COME ON PPL ALL I NEED IS ONE MORE VOTE ON THE POLE

ppl u all gonna vote on this? come already this battle will close soon and all i need is one more vote..................................

Punches - Mofo
Flow - Mofo
Structure - Mofo
Personals - ( None )
Excitment - ( A little )
Closer - Mofo
Vote - Mofo

He just got it in every way that is think able...

---> return the favor Click Here Make an honest Vote hommie.

OUT

-High Class a.k.a Confusion