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LM vs. McProfit
Aight herre the deal.
No D/r No hate No crew Don't matter how many lines. 10 mins to check in. 20 mins to lay your shit down. |
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K well I g2 go to work now I'll respond A.S.A.P. sorry bro............................................... .........
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This guy reminds me of a cat, he's always fallin on his feet...
He's fell four times without reply, but still thinks he can compete... At light weight level he's still fresh meat, well food is his interest... He only has pac in his avatar to say he's close to the best... In october he was still only a guest, he should of stayed as one... I heard he had talent then, but since he registered it's all gone... Somebody give him a magic wond so he can make wins appear... Coz then you'll eventually have one, fuck it we'll give you 3 cheers... I'll even buy you a beer, you'll be so happy your dick will be erecting... But deep down we all know you aint capable of lyrically infesting... Maybe you'll be infecting us, with herpes, or maybe aids... Coz when your got raped by the outfitz members was the only time you got laid... Your chances of winnin this are startin to fade quickly... So I'll just leave you with a taste in your mouth, only described as sickly... Peace + Goodluck lyrically infesting = profile food is his interest = profile outfitz = profile |
Alright man, when you get back from work check in again and after that you have 25 mins coz thats how long it took me to spit my verse......
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This cat came in the door cuz some punkass cracka wants some more
You think I've fallen and can't come up the only way you can look good is with props Your too ugly to stand but you seem to be walkin out on no mans land You can't win this battle, I like food so I'll beat your ass with a laddle Your like my stirring bowl for different mixes so I'm gonna fuck you up with different fixes You should of said no feeding now I'm eating and when I'm finished with you I'll be leaving Your like my washing machine always changing and washing but when you come out your never clean I'm clean and you know it the only one who's infesting is you it's obviously been seen fit Your like cancer to me an awful diesease unfortunately you had to make this shit so easy I'm not homophobic but when you get in the picture I bring out the next fixture Cooking with color, my rhymes are new and improved the make yours look older and duller Your a little prick who sucks a lil too much dick I'd offer you mine but I guess there's 2 ways to dine. . . At least I'm in a crew I don't got many but it's more than you Your a loner who get's erected boners Off guys, with "blonde hair and dark brown eyes" I'm gonna kick you ass sooo hard it'll make it straight, that way you'll be able to say you pulled back down the gate No trespassing allowed that's what it should say but your just a fag and you want guys too stay My name is McProfit and I like pussy and clit My style has changed but I wouldn't pay you one bit, enough to see your ass rearranged I think you must be mentally deranged You sit at the computer all day and night lookin at gay porn wondering if it's worth your fight homosexual shouldn't be your right It should be a punishement what did you do wrong? It must of started when you put on your moms thong It's nasty in a way how this guy once was straight, now the fags seem to be in his fate Your like a Michael Jackson in the making you may be negroe but your quickly changing On it goes first your off with guys to show promos than you head to the ballet shows. Get the fuck off the stage! Your a fagget who only makes minimum wage I hope you don't carry this shit on to your old age. |
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i think LM took this he had overall better verse mcprofit lacked in everything in my opinion
LM had punches metas flow structure n personals.... My VOte-LM Hit up my battle(s) in my sig with an honest vote yall Peac3________--------------___________.................... |
+personals win battles....
anyways, Both verses were lacking battle material.LM seem to be telling the story of Mcprofit more than damaging him, even tho the last line did catch my eye as pritti nice. Mcprofit delivered some good here and theirs, but some of it was tacky...noone really had punchlines or some-what wordplay but you both had well flow. LM had structure but Mcprofit had jabs so further looking into it. LM's personals were at a large and he was very direct about it, even though the diss along with it lacked alot of effect...alot of filter in Mcprofits verse...so overall ima go with' LM. vote on these battle in return. honest votes only. poll also for it 2 count. Cannabarz vs Looney_Boi Cannabarz vs McProfit |
cmon yall vote on my battle i vote on yours so you vote on myne thats how it works your not supposed to let other emcees get slept on ThanX
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Cannabarz has got the idea here, the personals won dis battle. McProfit, remember these words...
Quality, not quantity. U can write a whole track about sumone and diss em, but it dont mean shit if they can post 4 bars and top ur track. LM did he research, that just proves dat he wanted it more. And he also came harder. |
I should be winnin this 2-0 so can you guys poll your votes next time and I'll return the favours in a couple of hours when I come back online
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profit
__________ verse was far too long and didnt really have nethin in it. weakest closer ive seen for ages to be honest....only my opinion....no hate LM __________ good overall, tight verse....nice closer {nethin cud of beat Profit's closer tho} keep it up both of you! vote = LM http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=97113 |
Alrite thanks for the comment and the votes which havn't been polled............................................ ..........................
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LM took this one is the way i would vote....Didn't feel like reading MCprofits coz its just 2 fucking long...
Seems like he went and asked all his workmates to come up with lyrics and he just organised em and posted..... Although i didn't read the next kats shit,I think LM is just hittin niggas with a machine gun of lyrics.... |
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a will poll as soon as a reach 100 man.....wont be long now.....6 more left now.......then ima poll my vote for LM.....{reasons are above}^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^up dere^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...8940#post968940 ^^only one more vote needed for the 5-0^^ thanks laterz |
yo vote goin to LM better structure, punches, flow, and personals.
\/ \/ \/ \/ yo hit this up \/ \/ \/ \/ http://www.rapbattles.com/fourm/sho...&threadid=97033 |
Ok thanks for the vote. In theory I'm winnin 6-0 but 2 forgot to poll and 3 havnt reached 100 posts.
Oh and the link doesnt work. Peace!!! |
aight.......here comes my vote.......ive set my reasons out above...........
read em then you'll see..... vote = LM no hate.... laterz |
OK thanks......I sent Jay Pana the link to add my votes but it looks like he's ignorin it. The poll should really say 4-0
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dont worry dawg.....you will win this eventually!
u merked him to be honest.... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...1245#post971245 ^^have a look at that.....jus to check out my verse.......cant vote yet cuz he gone offline halfway thru the battle!?!?!?!!?^^ safe, laterz |
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This takes the piss now. I've Pm'd both Jay Pana and Axe E. Um and both have been online since I sent the Pm's but nothin has been done. So we have mods who ignore their Pm's. Great.
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Why won't they listen. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . It's obvious that I lost this battle no matter what happened I've been K-oed and everything well not technincally but still .................................
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No Idiot... I Was At School... At School, I Just Browse RB... Don't Do MOD Work Till I Get Home. Now Hop Off. All Votes Have Been Polled... I Only Counted Five... But One Was A Whack Vote So It's 4-0. |
Flow-LM
Structur-LM Punchs-LM Personals-LM Wordplay-McProfit Overall-LM LM won this with his Structure Punches and Personals Peace -{/]~{Ú§kÍ}~[\}- |
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