Bill Clinton \/s. Mc Free
 

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checkin in..........rules sed 20 mins to drop.............................................. .......good luck

droppin in...........ermmmmm.............................. .................................................. ......................................few minutes

you spit first actually.......................................... .im jus on fone........................will drop straight afta you tho

rite..........fuck this, bk from the fone now, some speed typing about to go down.............................................. .....................droppin as soon as a type it

im not gona go on bout ur name, thats too easy --
crackin jokes about America, and Monica Lewinski --
thats right, im white, but a ent no Eminem --
my lyrics will break ya down worse than a digestive system --
ima make it easy for you, make all of your decisions --
slit ur wrists and just die, u ent fulfillin none of your ambitions --
ive got a show to do, and ur stoppin me from doin it --
you've set the standard too low, man, uve ruined it --
this verse your about to spit, its gona be terrible, its gona make every1 think ur illiterate --
you shudnt be here man, you shud av been included in ur generations infant mortality rate --

there ya go.............hurry up and spit....u got 1 minute left man................type faster :P......................

come on man.......ur browsing front lines for fuck sake...........................hurry up and type ur shit!

stop lookin for inspiration from other battles and type damn you!

is this annoying ne1 else yet?!?!

its annoying me! he is online and browsing Front Lines ffs!!!

he sed 20 mins to drop afta check in.....he checked in @ 9:31.......40 minutes ago by my clock........come on Bill.....you layed down the challenge.......u can at least drop.....dont be scared!

hurry up fool

sorry man but stop yer fucking free posting
i jus saw this ill key it up now
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MC free bout 2 B a fucken herb picking N tha gardens
Tried 2 diss me G but failed horribly,kill u & add 1 more topic 2 my sins
U B the worst kinda plant,roll U up & smoke U like a joint
Stab U N the eye 2 fix yer sight,homie Ur done,get the point
Im acid & yer that of unknown masiah,ill melt u down till ya retire
post up a fly-ER & show yer genetailia 2 the public,bow down im the sire
Coudent hit a punchline even if U Ali,yous B steadaly fumbling like a football
Even quarterbacks could do better cuz son U the one always getting sacked,u fall
So stay home like home alone blown out,yer brains flown 2 my disscount lown,its all about
I thrown this win like a bitch when she mowned loud,2 bullets in ya dome from a double crome spout

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Opener- MC Free
Closer- ...
Punchlines - MC Free
Flow- MC Free
Structure- MC Free
Enjoyment- MC Free


Bill, ur stuff doesnt flow well, work on dat, shorten ur lines or sumthin, cuz the way u have it now is really affecting the pwoer of ur punchlines.

Oh i forgot, my vote goes to
Vote- MC Free
Ill poll when I get 100 posts

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=97040

Return the favour by posting a honest vote der.

yo bill u need to sit and elevate ur self b4 u battle anymore ur 0-7 dowg dat means ur doin something wrong no hate just say sit and write and get ur mind right first.......with that said Free took this wit a landslide victory!!!!


drop ur votes here
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=97042

man...neither of you deserve your first win....so I ain't voting...peace~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~

yo

in all categories(opener, flow, closer, structure) mc takes it...Bill you need to elevate alote your verse wasn't that great...i suggest you take a look at vet battles to help you get some inspiration..

no hate jus a honest opinion...

peace

vote MC FREE

^2 LMFAO!!
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wat r u laughing at homeboy??

can't take the truth??

your rhyme was wack take it...

elevate

peace

^^ take it ez on da kid!!....lol...but ne wayz let me vote!!

aiight heres da deal!!

Bill:shyt wus weak work on yr shyt like ery 1 esle is sayin!!....ur flow wus off work on dat!...punch's werent really dat hard,soo i feel u lose dis battle!!

Punch's:5/10
Multi's:dont even think there wus ne!!
meta's:3/10
Wordplay:4/10
structure:horrible
Overall:12/50

now

Mc:shyt wus hott good job keep it up kid!!....Flow wus on point,Punch's were def fon point!...overall keep it up!!

Punch's:8/10
Multi's-6/10
Meta's:6/10
Wordplay:6/10
Structure:7/10
Overall:33/50

Vote:Mc

Reason:We all know da deal!!

aiight!!.....Good battle!!

ok free took this n he keyed his verse in fucking 2 minutes n bill clinton had 40 mins to drop his pretty sad well my vote goes to MC free for better punches personals and better structure
My VOte-MC Free Hit up the battles in my sig... ThanX
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Vote=Free
in ever category, like ^ this guy said man take time and elevate before u stack up ur losses cuz thats kinda what happen to me
<look at my record daug

>;o) LOL
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thanks for the votes y'all......jus need one more for the complete KO :P
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uppin #1
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come on guys....only one more vote for me to completely merk this kid
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erm.....

slept on last nite.....come on people....only want on more....not to much to ask is it?

hit this up wen ya get the chance!

laterz

uppin #3

MC Free kicked off with a good start

Punchlines - MC Free
Flow- MC Free
Structure- MC Free
Wordplay -Bill

Closer would go to Mcfree..........

Bill doesn't seem to be doin well with the elevation thing, only thing he is dooing is bagging the loses................

Mayb the name is cursed????????

uppity up up upuppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp
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pfft 100characters

oopps..........that was up number 4 sorry.......pressed wrong button...............my bad ......soz...................................

Some good shit mc-in ere. But im afraid Bill m8 as t-west sed Ure lyrics just dnt seem to flow right. And as for Mc Free well well wot can i say Mc Free & The Laydee B Rippin the shit 03 & 4eva. We r truly the Birmingham Lyrical dominatin ravers!!

aight.....my final uppin {#5}

lets jus have the last vote a need please......

then this battle will be finally closed!

thanks

laterz

free got this 1 just with better flow and his punches hit harder.bill your lines were streched and played man but keep elavateing.poor battle.

repay the favor free when you have 100 posts in abit.http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=97097 honest vote plz.............................pz