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Hannibal VS C-LO
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10 mins no crew no hate no d/r |
aiight checkin in,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
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I’ma leave this cat wit more disabilities than a premature birth//
This nigga is a discrace to tha world like like hes he owns the earth// Look at my verse he can be micheal Jackson and still couldn’t be it// Nigga u better pay attention tha nigga that ur battling is undefeated// His name is c-lo cause is skills are below average like those a a midget// U can have hands like Muhammad ali and yo punches still wouldn’t hit// This is juss a lil 10 min diss that bout to blow yo mind up like bombs// Check his sig when that last time u eva heard any 1 still dissin momz// This cat is gay mmy gat bout to leave his brains on the cold sidewalk// Have this fakeass wannabe getting his body outlined wit white chalk// |
so u call ur self hannibal lector/
when really u just faggot with a pocket protector about to get his first loss on his record/ I'll stick lyrics like knives in each of ur organs in alphabetical order/ u can hear it tonight, im grindin on u, if it was thearetical u could be a skateboarder/ im droppin a bomb on this bitch causin u nothin but disorder, at mickey Ds sayin "hi can i take ur order"/ my flows sicka than the aids epidemic/ when ur rhymes are really just jokes and gimmicks/ u couldnt key a hot track if ur hands were oven mits/ ur flow so cold causin urself chapped dick/ i just exploded like ur appendix go on try to mend this, its over and u cant hold my pocket on the track bitch/ |
nice battle man, this should be good,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, holla at me......................
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Look at my verse he can be micheal Jackson and still couldn’t beat it// VOTE USING THIS: punches: flow: vocab: wwordplay: complexity: structure: Vote: |
uppin 4 votes
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vote - Hannibal
Structure - Hannibal Wordplay - Hannibal Edges it. Opener - C-Lo Closer - Hannibal Complexity - C-Lo Vocabularity - Hannibal Punchlines - Hannibal Flow - Hannibal |
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Structure - Hannibal
Wordplay - tie Opener - C-Lo Closer - C-Lo Complexity - C-Lo Vocabularity - Hannibal Punchlines - Hannibal Flow - C-Lo vote- C-Lo |
Structure - Hannibal
Wordplay - Hannibal Opener - C-Lo Closer - Hannibal Complexity - C-Lo Vocabularity - Hannibal Punchlines - Hannibal Flow - Hannibal i will be back to poll when i get 100+ posts |
can ya'll post honest votes on my battle.. they are being sleept
if you dont have 100+ post then wrtie who u think won.. consider it an upping... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=96977 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=96981 thank you.. |
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flow: h vocab: h wwordplay: h complexity: h structure: h Vote: h no hate jus a vote peace |
VOTE USING THIS:
punches: Hannibal flow: Hannibal vocab: C-Lo wordplay: ... cant judge complexity: C-Lo structure: ... Well, after dis evaluation, my resulted ended up in a tie, so i added 3 more categories for the tie breaker... Opener- C-Lo Closer- C-Lo Enjoyment- Hannibal So overall, c-lo was victorious vote - c-lo http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=97040 Hit me up wit an honest vote der. thx |
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aiight ya'll thanx for the honest votes, lets get some more in here UPPPPINNNNNNNNN,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
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Hannibal had a better start..........
C--lo's finish was just a bit better than Hanns......... Structure - Hannibal Punches - Hannibal Flow - Hannibal Personals - 50/50 Wordplay - C-lo Overall --Hanni You know the deal............... |
c-lo had me laughin my ass off u had a better finisher but he got you on the open my vote Clo
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Structure - Hannibal
Wordplay - Hannibal {just} Opener - C-Lo Closer - Hannibal Complexity - C-Lo Vocabularity - Hannibal Punchlines - Hannibal Flow - Hannibal Opener- Hannibal Closer- C-Lo Enjoyment- Hannibal Vote = Hannibal |
Personals- C.Lo
Punches- C.Lo Flow- Hannibal Multis- C.Lo Vocab- Hannibal Wordplay- Hannibal Overall- C.Lo Synapsis- Ok... this is a weird battle cause personally I didnt like the structure of C-Lo's shit.. and Really kinda in my head wanted to be bias to Hannibal lmao... but C-Lo's punches just hit harder even though his shit barely flow'd if it even did... Problem wit Hannibal was his punches really didnt hit... and he needs to make more sense wit his punches... for example... Quote:
[b]- Here The first line had no punch in my eyes... and the second line was a filler... U just need to be creative and come wit harder punches... thats it... Pz |
aiigh ya'll thanx for the votes, its a close battle how bout some more votes on this one............................................
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-WiLL GeTCha- r u eminem minis
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Aiight......
Hannibal:shyt wus aiight shoulda been stronger but not bad!!........ Check his sig when that last time u eva heard any 1 still dissin momz// ^^ lol dat wus aiight!!....nice! C-Lo:shyt wus kinda weak too me try n elevate more!!.......but good try ne way!!............ punches:H flow:H vocab:C wwordplay:C complexity:H structure:H Vote:Hannibal Reason:dont really need 1!!......... 0n3 |
hannibal got this, all around a better flow with better punches. C i liked maybe one line in your verse, and your flow was off. vote hannibal...return with an honest vote on my battle with j-yo thanks.
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dont listen to them clo you one because you had me laughin my ass off
im droppin a bomb on this bitch causin u nothin but disorder, at mickey Ds sayin "hi can i take ur order"/ Dat line was out fucking standing |
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