B.I.Detained Vs UnParalled
 

10 lines max
no feedin etc
blind spit
30 mins to spit
good luck
exlained votes only count pz

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1st off...how you gonna take 20 mins to Check in your Existence
...N 2nd...how du expect to live w/ a Paper thin Resistance??
coz shit I Knock you down like Drunkerds to Destined Roadkill
...instead of keyin a 10 line Verse...start Keyin down a new Will
this Chump is askin for a vote on a Battle but leaves a faulty Link
...lmao..Tends to do everythin else..but the main thing..THINK
I take all but the Kitchen Sink..fuck it I'll take that off you too
...see we are Un-Parall-elled..I'm light years aheah of You
I keep looking back at you but all I see is a Dark N Bland Spot
...but like Baked Cooking Apples...your Core is about to Rot

My lyrics hit like cobra Venom,so it's Safe to say...my spits' is Killin'-em'.
Yea,I read yur' verse,it's nothing but a Waste of Words,like the 100 char. post minimum.
You not nice,I'll Expose this Pussy tonight,just to Show his Bitch-Side in this Fight.
Easy to see that yur' lyrics r' doo-doo,it's no wonder your Content with the Shitty thangs in life.
You not tight,So coming Half-Done,is the only time you stay in your Prime.
Your not ahead of your time,Claim your sweet,but 2-0 Behind,in Elite Front Lines.
I'll slice off yur' Writing Hand,just to Deprieve this guy of his Rights.
He Registered a month later then me and already has double my posts....where would you be without this site?
Yur' hits r' weak,I'll give yur' mind a Shrink,there's no way you Thinkin' Big.
I"m killing this kid,Talk is Cheap,so your lyrics are Poor,it's quite relevant why your reppin' Peasantry in your Sig.

:laugh: .......Uppin'

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if i were able to poll vote i would vote for Unparalled..he had some nice personals along with wordplay and metas.. pucnches were ok...B.I.. u also did pretty good but you verse just wasnt enough for Unparalled..no-hate..but good try.. keep it up both of you..nice battle..props to both..

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Personals- Un
Punches- Un
Flow- BID
Multis- Tie
Vocab- Tie
Wordplay- Un
Overall- Un

Synapsis- Unpara just had an overall better verse... He hit hard wit personals... and that really help'd him win it...

^again, this cat says "synapsis..."...damn...BI took this junk with no problem...unparalled didn't have anything on him....flow was on top and so were the punches...vote - BI..hit this battle up ya'll

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=97161

yo i felt both verses but i felt bI verse more. his punches wuz hittin harder but un punches wuz hittin just kinda weak.....un u got good ideas just tweek em a lil bit and elevate....no hate

vote=BI

drop a vote......holla
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=97164

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B.I. had that level of professionalism that I enjoy when reading text. I hate stretched lines, to me that means you can't come tight with such strict structure, and I like the personals that UN had going but I take skill over laughs any day.
Vote=B.I.

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though bi beat me in the past (yet my style is differnt now) i still vote for him his shit beat this due by far! this shit was ripped easily and im lauphign about it ! gj B.I u got my vote!

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lolol...Un Came Wit Sum Pretty Decent Concepts...But Damn Kid, If You Work On Your Structure And Flow, You Should Have Won This By Far...Also You Had Decent Ideas...Just ReWord Them Better..

B.I Came Out Ok...Good Structure And Flow...Punches Were Ok...Nothing Special But The Whole Verse Was Solid And Consistant..

I Would Have Voted Un...But Ya Verse Seemed Shaky And Flow Was Terrible...I'ma Vote B.I For A More Solid Verse..

Keep Elevating Un..