DA~shadow~knows vs. the real sizz
 

aight once again this is the real shit

I'm feel you. Checking in so lets begin.


This is only the ‘beginnin’ Time for your mine ‘bendin’/
A ‘cleansin’ by fire fuck “hydro” - I exhale “Nitro” when ‘spittin’ -
lava ‘engulfin’ your ‘endorphins’ so you’ ll feel the “pain” /
of my lyrical “flames” ‘scorchin’ the hell out of your ‘origin’/
until you ‘morphin’ into a bitch cause a corpse named ‘Morgan’/
donated her ‘organs’ after this ‘torchin’/
I’ll “blaze” you until you eyez “glaze” like ‘crispy crème’/
Fuck with Sizz and become a part of a ‘crispy scene’/
So I ‘quickly bring’ your “azz on” as you ‘fit between’ /
The “talons”of a true fire spittin ‘Dragon’ that’ll make you “shit yo jeans”/



Another cleansing by fire.

What's up Shadow. I Know he didn't vanish into the night on me. Is this a TKO or what. First battle and it ends this way/////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////

whoa...thats serious..... your comp will probablly post tomorrow after he consult is vote buddies and advisors

Thanx for tha respect playa. I don't underestimate anyone in a battle though. We'll see how this turns out.

all i gots to say is that real sizz's verse fuckin blows fo sho
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nice verse dawg

will poll a vote when he spits cuz a shud be 100+ then....

thats gona be difficult to beat.....dont think its gona happen to be honest....

keep it up man!

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=97113

aight my bad i forgot about the battle
ima spit now



ayo...

i spray bullets at nigga's who come to test me//1
fuckin wit shadow will get u 9 bullets in ya chest b//2
im leathal and ill//3
i shoot to kill//4
i got sizz shocked payin my electric bill//5
by the end of this battle this cracker be knocked out cold//6
while i got his girl goin up and down my dick like a go-go pole//7
ima take this white boy though my own version of hell//8
you aint catchin bricks bitch, u catchin shells//9
better hope the crowd save u by the motherfuckin bell//10 (final)

aight my bad i forgot about the battle
ima spit now



ayo...

i spray bullets at nigga's who come to test me//1
fuckin wit shadow will get u 9 bullets in ya chest b//2
im leathal and ill//3
i shoot to kill//4
i got sizz shocked payin my electric bill//5
by the end of this battle this cracker be knocked out cold//6
while i got his girl goin up and down my dick like a go-go pole//7
ima take this white boy though my own version of hell//8
you aint catchin bricks bitch, u catchin shells//9
better hope the crowd save u by the motherfuckin bell//10

Aiight.......

Heres da breakdown!!

sizz:shyt wus weak.....flow wus off,i think 1 or 2 lines didnt even rhyme!!...Punch's were weak(elevate)!!........Overall Verse succed,jus practice more!!

This is only the ‘beginnin’ Time for your mine ‘bendin’/
A ‘cleansin’ by fire fuck “hydro” - I exhale “Nitro” when ‘spittin’ -
lava ‘engulfin’ your ‘endorphins’ so you’ ll feel the “pain” /
of my lyrical “flames” ‘scorchin’ the hell out of your ‘origin’/
until you ‘morphin’ into a bitch cause a corpse named ‘Morgan’/
donated her ‘organs’ after this ‘torchin’/
I’ll “blaze” you until you eyez “glaze” like ‘crispy crème’/
Fuck with Sizz and become a part of a ‘crispy scene’/
So I ‘quickly bring’ your “azz on” as you ‘fit between’ /
The “talons”of a true fire spittin ‘Dragon’ that’ll make you “shit yo jeans!!

^^ dis kid needs da book "Rap For Dumbies"!!

Ok Now

DA:This wus an aiight verse punch's werent dat strong but dey were there,flow wus good n on point,structure wasnt bad.....Overall da verse wus goood!!....Keep it up!

i spray bullets at nigga's who come to test me//1
fuckin wit shadow will get u 9 bullets in ya chest b//2
im leathal and ill//3
i shoot to kill//4
i got sizz shocked payin my electric bill//5
by the end of this battle this cracker be knocked out cold//6
while i got his girl goin up and down my dick like a go-go pole//7
ima take this white boy though my own version of hell//8
you aint catchin bricks bitch, u catchin shells//9
better hope the crowd save u by the motherfuckin bell//10

^^ not bad keep elevating!!

Vote:DA

Reason:I feel his verse is dominant over sizz!!

Aiight nice battle DA,..as for sizz elevate kid!!....u'l get better!!

Aight thats wassup


already im uppin by 1











so the score is shadow :1 vote
sizz:0 votes

Oh yea u do know sizz



if i get 3 in a row its a T.K.O.









aight people lets get the votin

aight yo >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>uppin>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>







aight ya get ya votes in asap so we can decide who won this


aight ~1~

aight.....merking in the process with this one............................................... .........................
DA took it in every category......dont need to say nemore really!

vote = DA

Personals- Tie (None stood out)
Punches- DA (His Hit... Sizz had a problem Imma Later talk-about)
Multis- Sizz
Flow- Sizz
Vocab- Sizz
Wordplay- Tie
Overall- DA

Synapsis- Now.. this is a weird VOTE cause by categorys DA should lose... but the 2 main Categorys in battlin' Punches n Personals were taken by DA... Sizz's attempts for punches were word'd wrong... They werent' hittin at all... DA came weak as well... but threw punches that connect'd... Both of yall will Elevate tho... Keep spittin' Pz

Vote on my ISH! :-p
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=97244

damn homie its a t.k.o.
good battle tho





so thats it i won



vote :shadow 3
vote : sizz 0



aight yo it was a good match and i came out the victor

all i could say is ppl who voted 4 me good lookin and i hope 2 battle u one of these days

sorry to piss on yo perae u dun win, no ones votein on this...

Eh yo! This is Yaz's breakdown, ¢heck it:

Flow-the real sizz
Multies-the real sizz
Stru¢tur-the real sizz
Pun¢hs-the real sizz
Personals-the real sizz
Vol¢ab-neither (it's all basik)
Opener-the real sizz
Finisher-the real sizz
Wordplay-the real sizz
Enjoyment-the real sizz
Overall-the real sizz

DA u needa eleavate kuz, dat waz weak

hit diss up yo
Yaz vs. Justin Kredible

K33P iT ¢r@cKiN YO,
Pea¢e (\1/)
050~5

ayo it dont really matter tell u tha truth cause i know
i won this shit

ya vote for who eva ya want ima let ya know now


if ya gonna vote then poll

this was a weak battle...but one was extremely weak....heres the breakdown....

flow=sizz
creativity=sizz
punches=sizz
structure=sizz
vocab=sizz
wordplay=sizz
multis=sizz
...need i go on.....gotta vote=sizz on this one...pZ

aight >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>Uppin>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>again>>>>>>>>>>>:shoot:

I vote sizz man. shadow,, ur punches were too hard, matter of fact, they were pretty weak. Also, u needa add sum complexity to dat shit, ur punches hit harder when der more complex than dat

im leathal and ill//3
i shoot to kill//4
i got sizz shocked payin my electric bill

U could of made dat punch way stronger.

But now sizz...
I’ll “blaze” you until you eyez “glaze” like ‘crispy crème’/
Fuck with Sizz and become a part of a ‘crispy scene’/

Ya see wat im talkin bout, elevate man.

And dat brings me to the rest, sizz was mroe creative, complex is creative, anybody can make simple punchlines. To me, this was a loop-sided battle.

Vote- Sizz


Hit me up wit honest votes at these links. thx.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=96491
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=96361

Looks like i'm winning 3 -1. whew, from the first 3 I thought I was going to have to simplify my style to get votes. Oh yeah, I aint white. I've been black since i was born. That part of your verse has no validity.

yo this is crazy




uppin







damn ppl where all ya at for votes



this is very akward

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needing votes. Help us get our fist stat please...............................//////////////// My last up.

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aight i'ma vote fo SIZZ,
reason y, well Sizz ya verse was tight, nice word play
goodf bars
good flow
ran together well
now shadow ya wud been better
but ya verse was uneven

props ta both but Sizz gots my vote

oh can u hommies hit this up wit a vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=95580

This was a alright battle here..
Punches: Sizz
Flow: DA
Structure: Sizz
Multies: Sizz
Vocab: Sizz
Overall a alright battle, but Sizz took this, props to both though, vote goes to sizz