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e.coli vs smokajoka666
5-6 bars (10-12 lines)
no crew......hate.......d/r.......chain votes no voting for someone just cuz they voted for u explain all votes check in playa....and u can set a deadline or whatever |
i'll be back to vote...can you drop honest one here please
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=97210 thanx..late |
checkin....both verses are due December 9th, 2003 by midnight eastern time....we can drop before that time...but any later and it will be DQ for either of us....
peace 4:20 |
thats cool mine will be dropped well before than
......................... i will drop after b-ball practice |
36 battles...but ya record says u only battled 2 vets...
u well known???.. ..e-dubbs aint even on the map yet.... ya dislexic and murdered ya cat but ya still not an insane killer.... call u hoe-hoe cuz ya spits are nothin but filler.. all those wins...... and u still cant get in elite... thats what happens when u battle a vet...u get ya ass beat... them wins are all from newbies they dont mean shit... ya whack...even ya toothbrush hates ya spits... damn its like whackness jumped up and attacked ya.... cuz in this battle... ..hes comin up short of breath..like fat kids wit asthma... mike jackson is his idol cuz when he feels lonely he just beats it... u were born... ..thats proof a condom is never around when u need it... |
aight i'll be dropping in a bit............................................... .................................................
peace 4:20 |
Don't Understand Personals Or Wordplay, Don't Vote...Every Line Has It..Catch It!!!!
I Got On AIM And Told Him Fuck U, And Started An Approach For Cyber.. I Don't Know What's Worse, Me Losing To 2 Vets Or U Losing To 5 Herbs.. His Custom Title Told Me To "Feed Off This" So I Brought His Girl With Me.. Ur Barely Up In Rank, Ur To The 'Left Of Z' So I Ask 'Y' Are U 'Shifty'..(keyboard) I'm Sorry To Be The One To Break This , But Ur Ghostwriter's Aisle 5.. Take This Girls Period Remove The O, Rearranged And Realised U Had LICE..(e.coli) How Can U Be The Winner, When In Ur Sig U Don't Even Know How To Center.. This Kid Is Gettin Hit In The Ass More Than A Legless Man's Fender.. I Told Him What's Up Dog, And He Immediately Asked For A Kennel.. Ha, This Kid's Reppin A Crew That Praises Prince Just A Card As The Symbol.. If This Kid's Rhymes Were Crossdressers, They Would Still Never Change.. U Would'a Saved Some Embarassment With Ur Verse As Ur Location...Blank.. peace 4:20 |
nice battle props to both....
this is my break down...e.coli you had some nice flow...you had some hard punches mixed in wit some nice creativity... damn its like whackness jumped up and attacked ya.... cuz in this battle... ..hes comin up short of breath..like fat kids wit asthma... i thought that was a killa line... call u hoe-hoe cuz ya spits are nothin but filler.. i thought that went down well...i think you came hard with some nice punches...some litte action on the personals...the structure was ok...i admire your style... smoke, i know holds i nice record...i can see why...you came back hard..you had some crazy ass personals...the punchlines and creativity was awesome...enjoyment plus... Ur Barely Up In Rank, Ur To The 'Left Of Z' So I Ask 'Y' Are U 'Shifty'..(keyboard) that was a killer line...good to see the use of the mind there... i have say props to both, but smoka brought the pain on this, his structure and flow was awesome.... vote=smoka good battle and props to both... could you plz drop a vote on my battle on the link below and vote honestly.. its gettin slept on...cheers http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...81&pagenumber=1 |
^^done....uppin #1......*remembers y i don't like battling in the elevated*....damn...this battle won't be over until next week most likely....lmao...
peace 4:20 |
opener:smoka
closer:smoka punches:smoka structure:smoka vocab:tie wordplaye.coli: overall:smoka smoka won this hands down, ecoli, ur shit was wackly structured. aiight please vote for the battle in my sig ::VS:: johnnywattz its gettin slept on aiight peace |
^^i'll check the battle.....but i even think it was closer than the way u put it...lol...but if that's ur opinion....lol...it's coo...nice battle e.coli...
peace 4:20 |
nah it was closer than i put it, ou hit harder with your opener, closer an punches, that takes up the bulk of things.
it was a very close battle, his structure ,ad lees harde hitting punches won it. i aint tryin to cause no hate. peace |
yo this was a good battle. Oh - and yall return the favor and vote on my shit with Da_Legend since you know shit sleeps in elevated....
here's that breakdown: Opener: smoka (close) Punches: smoka (close though e.coli had more, but smokas hit harder) Originality: tie Personals: e.coli Closer: e.coli Best Punch: smoka "I Got On AIM And Told Him Fuck U, And Started An Approach For Cyber.. I Don't Know What's Worse, Me Losing To 2 Vets Or U Losing To 5 Herbs.." Vote = smoka good battle yall vote on my shit |
yep.........thanks to everyone who voted..........
uppin(1) lets get this closed ...................... |
opener:smoka
closer:smoka punches:smoka perosnal:Tie structure:smoka vocab:tie wordplay:e.coli overall:smoka WoW this was a great battle.. i enjoyed reading both verses.. but i was feeling Smokajoka's verse better.. very good wordplay and persona.. e.Coli.. you had some pretty good landing punches and personal but smoka had a mixture of everything....No hate.props to both GREAT BATTLE Overall:Smoka PZ |
yep..elevated is sleepish...breakdown honestly
opener+1-both weak...ecoli's was pretty weak and smoka fed closer+1-Smoka personals+2-tie...didnt really get the link u left smoka..thats just me though.....ecoli...i am not an herb or newb...just saying cuz that must be a bootleg personal punches+2-tie..not too good by either...smoka was weaker than usual and ecoli's werent too hard multis+1-none wordplay+1-blah...the few used were corny complexity+1-eh....didnt like either's originality+1-neither...asthma line, michael jackson, condom for ecoli made it weak...switchin of name and keyboard for ecoli cornyness-2-tie enjoyment+1-neither as u can see i didnt like this battle at all...a lot of weak and corny punches in my opinion.... smoka again u rearrange your opponents name..and again it came out weak..only time i seen it come nice was against me (Emit Game)...its like u force it sometimes ecoli ya verse was really basic...didnt like when u said he beat newbs only...blah...no dice...and the last lines were real weak as well.... so very weak battle even not considering u guys' records....sorry but honest opinion...nonetheless my breakdown has determined a winner overall...E.coli (+2)...SmokaJoka666 (+3)------Winner by points system..no hate..jsut a vote |
damn....lol...and i thought the shifty line was good....hater...lmao...nah....it was weak when i really look at it....most of my personals came from his sig and shit by his name...only one was the link....and the link was to a battle between Aisle 5 and Ace Of Spades (pinkslips in the elite)....and i read that battle and realised Aisle 5 and e.coli have a VERY similar style...lol...but let's get the last vote in this...
peace 4:20 |
uppin #3 or 4...one of those...lol....................................... .............................................
peace 4:20 |
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