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~©Ã®Ñåg€~ Vs Dez
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simple rulez: 10 lines max no crew votes no dyckrydin lets do this goodluck |
I dont know if he is gonna show in frontlinez........................................ .................................................. ................
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checkin in... but discussing porn.
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LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL aight here it goes
My punches alwayz hit targets…yous a bitch artist, your faggot ass flowz is harmless// Hot Flowz'll burn this carcass....Put that gat to ur dome my bad if it dis-charges// Like Sean Paul and 50 I'll leave this nigga "Deaded" "Who wants to be a RAPPER" 50/50, call a friend, poll anybody.........Fuck it yah LIFE LINES ENDED// I'll flash you the peace sign- minus the in-dex(fuck you), I send such sick text// You fuckin suck, ur trash how u claim to be "THE TRULY BEST"// Yeah count the "bits", punches are too hard so dont try to block the hits, "Dez" is "trash" when did the Take over begin// Fuck bacteria CarN sick enough to reshape cancer...death shall not be tampered the Mag leave ‘More Kids Coughin Up’ than ‘Students givin fake answers// Flows are packed like frozen lunches and if u talkin punches than CarN's a jaw bruiser.. Cause Fuckin Wit Me U'll Get ' Your Ass Shut Down For Free' Like Unknown Kazaa Users// Your death has been setup askin me to join ur crew Warlords, shit got me fed up...cause i got 'Punches that a leave yah in Ah' longer than a 'Dentist Checkup'// Its a known fact that CarN will murk ya............and if u travel my street of success i’ll let you off on a rode to failure// Done deal/////////partna |
I tear through homos.. and leave nothing but ~©Ã®Ñåg€~
Leavin him with black eyes..from just beat boxes! Your sig? i used to rock it.. but then i turned thirteen This kid is trying to lock me down..usin only piano keys! Battle is a breeze..through kids Dez keeps on rippin Im leavin this homo more confused..than Amish electricians! Quit bitchin, ~©Ã®Ñåg€~ your verdict is in : gay Run of the mill rapper..verses are lick rays of sunshine.. On sunny days Kids had it.. ill let him just walk away for now.. Didnt have to try anyway..reading his verse as a root canal. |
*****reading his verse was as fun as a root canal
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lmao was that swaying^^^j/p....
Breakdown---- Punches-Dez Flow-Dez Structure-Dez Sustainment-Dez Enjoyment-Dez Overall-Dez What a full blown merking..plz dont say he called dez out..oh well CHECK MY BATTLE W/ BASH PLZ..BEING SLEPT ON PZ http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...5065#post975065 |
vote dez
quality not quantity. although carnage out bared dez he out battled him nice verse from both but dez was more direct an nice with the punchs.. |
punches=dez
flow=dez meta's=dez open=tie(both weak) close=dez overall= dez dez nice spit(nuff said) carnage u just need to step up ya game and cut out all dat bullshit in the middle get to da point da best verse is quick hard punches that make a nigga think a lil.....elevate yo this needs some votes........thanx http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=97164 |
Yea is ok............0-2 Dez........we dont have serious voterz i see...but yea nice battle indeed......uppun .................................................
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Breakdown
Punches = Dez Flow = Dez Structure = Dez Sustainment = Dez Enjoyment = Dez Overall = Dez My VoTe - Dez.. Heres what took it.. Quote:
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Carnage Got Murked....His Verse
Sucked...Dez Came Decent With A Few Nice Puns...Carn You Need To Get Some Structure...And Your Punches Didn't Connect At All...Dez Keep Up The Work Soon You'll Be Dope Again =). Vote= Dezyir |
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Punches-Dez
Structure- Dez Flow- Dez ENJOYMENT- DEZ vote- Dez return the favor wit honest votes........ http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=97640 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=97643 |
Can't poll but will help up thread: Vote Carnage
I made sure i read both verses twice to make sure i had a good feel of the flow and structure of the verses. As far as rhyme scheme and punches i felt there were a couple of misses on both, but I felt that Carnage had the better overall veres once i got his flow down. i also felt that Carnage hit mor metas even though a couple of them were obscure. |
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lol...ok...
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this battle was garbage.
Carnages verse was garbage. ohhh man......................... ......................................... .......................................... vote - dez |
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