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5hifty vs Walter Wall
8-9 bars (16-18 lines)
No-Hate No-d/r No-Crew No-feeding No-biting No-Recycling No-1 line votes you spit 1st, you have 20min after checkin i got another 20 after you.. All Votes Must Be Explained In Detail... Good Luck!!! |
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.........who the fuck do you think you are kid?
if you wanna battle me than your wack ass is spittin first |
what ever.. stop you bitching.. give me 20min....
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Walter Wall?, my punches land hard enough to make
texas three states. uppercuts will leave ya chest in v-shapes, as i hand you an L in a circle, like the winner of a lexus-sweepstakes, I'll even rip your eyes backwards so you can't look forward to this loss like contemporary priests I'm already bored with this Cross this bitch couldn't serve me fresh lines if he ordered some floss like porn vets in virgin roles..you're only Acting Tight, resurrect your life like Christ, just so I can come and kill you twice I'm always prevailin so every time you'll be failin its like trying to Crucify yourself, you won't get the last nail in im smackin this kid till his head is turned..360 degrees, ya strategy will never work, cuz ya loss record will be equivalent to the number of emcees that RB has registered.. (finisher) Verbally harassing walter I am forced to enforce his debt because this faggot has decided to outgrow elevating and battle the best I sever chests from necks and hips that are used for mad slaps and fag-biz, I could smack with jizz and FILLET this FISH. |
where i said:
"im smackin this kid till his head is turned..360 degrees" - look at his avatar where i said: "this faggot has decided to outgrow elevating and battle the best" - look and read his sig.. |
Call'n me out?............must of misheard your information
cuz here ure cum'n up shorter than midgit masturbation Checked ya profile, 57 posts a day? you must be joking The last time you dropped a hot bar, ure feet got soapy Im a laugh and relax as I take it easier than bake oven Cuz kid can't spell, whats he gonna show me 5umthin? Ya havent heard of structure vocab or multis apparently Got no chance of the vote, Im facing emcee alan keyes! So as I keep............my fly rhymes presidentially inclined U stay wack and 'matched'.......'taken out' with 10 lines! |
vote on this battle
and do it right flow - structure - multis - punches - wordplay - |
5hifty - That was a decent verse. You had I think about 2 punches in there that landed really nice. They wernt played or anything. The structure, and rhyme scheme could use a little work. But thats nothing time cant do for ya...
Walter Wall - I dont know if this is as good as you are, maybe a bad day. But I wasnt feeling ya verse to much, I felt things were forced to much. You had 1 really good punch in there. But alot of the time, it doesnt match with multiple punches. Your flow was good and all of that. Structure was straight, maybe make a better rhyme scheme... Because of the punches Vote - 5hifty OUT -High Class a.k.a Confusion |
Personals- Walter
Punches- Tie Multies- 5hifty Flow- Walter Vocab- Walter Wordplay- Tie Overall- Walter Synapsis- Ok... Battle was ok... Looks closer on stone than what it really was... 5hifty you need to work on your structure cause readin' yer shit was a pain... but other than that... both of em were str8... Pz |
^fuck'n dickryders
I love frontlines, lol punches is one of 5 categories learn how to vote homie then come back |
that was directed at high class
wil getcha knows how to vote Personals Flow Punches Wordplay Vocab Structure Multis ^all should be in your vote |
shifty had an overall better verse, he had more complex punches and wrdplay. Walter had an aight spit, one or two good punches but nothing too hard or witty. Vote 5hifty
vote gone for this reason: the following message describes your votes credibility level: http://laer.nu/captions/chalkboard....g13%5Rabg+shaal seriously, go back to somewhere else. feeble |
flow - walter
structure - walter multis - shifty punches - walter.......just showed utter disrespect for shifty....made him look foolish......elementary punches that hit harder than the complex shit he spit..... wordplay - tie vote - walter............. |
hmm.. i think this could be a hate vote because of what happend earlier. Tech.. but its ok i respect your vote....let get this battle overwith today people..
Nice Verse Walter |
Alan Keys was the black presidential candidate in the 2000 election
by the way, this was a quick key to get this kid to stop pmming me ....upp'n for fully explained votes |
Man, imma give my vote to 5hifty here,walter, i dunno if ya had a bad day or sumthin but to tell the truth, i wasnt feelin ya verse playa, maybe its jsut the way i like my rap, but 5hifty got the W here.
flow - walter structure - walter multis - 5hifty punches - 5hifty wordplay - 5hifty 5hifty won dis wit punches, walter, i felt urs couldnt match him styll, i wasnt feelin dem too much, i felt 5hiftys way more. Hit me up wit an honest vote der man. thx. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=97397 |
Personals-walter
Flow-walter Punches-5hifty Wordplay-5hifty Vocab-5hifty Structure-walter Multis-5hifty this was a great battle overall but 5hifty took it. he had some great punches. i was feelin them pretty good and they landed pretty hard.. Walter you had some great personals the midget verse cracked me up..but u need to use more punches... 5hifty that verse were you said i'll rip you eyes back words was a great punch.. hit hard.. overall 5hifty.. no hate just a vote.. PZ |
nice battle, i really enjoyed it
flow - walter structure - walter multis - 5 punches - tie wordplay - ...... personals: walter walter came strong and structured and personal. thats why i think he edged it out by a little. dont matter tho 5hifty, i cant vote.... 5 you came hard, i just think your structure is really hurtin you and if you worked that out your verse was be a lot better.... i really liked the crucifyin urself line thats some creative shit... yall hit up my battles if get a chance and see em in frontlines....vs elude...and vs. meters thanks |
flow - walter
structure - walter {5's was a pain to read} multis - 5hifty punches - 5hifty wordplay - 5hifty overall, a more creative verse by 5hifty! vote = 5hifty |
uppin for some honest votes.. dont sleep on this battle ya'll.. lets get this over with already..
Thank You.. Bye |
upping for votes #2...............
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I always preach the gospel when it comes to voting...
And Shifty's been shook like he's seen the hand of God... Bitchslap him! Those last four lines of Walter's just killed, killed, killed him! Shifty's format was about the worst I've ever seen... Some of his shit was aight, but nothing was extraordinary. Tighten up ya format, hit harder and go for personals. Better punches, wordplay, personals, and of course, format by Walter. Holla back... Vote here! |
Personals-tie
Flow-walter Punches-5hifty Wordplay-5hifty Vocab-5hifty Structure-walter Multis-5hifty overall - 5hifty |
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