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5hifty 12-08-03 10:45 PM

5hifty vs Walter Wall
 
8-9 bars (16-18 lines)

No-Hate
No-d/r
No-Crew
No-feeding
No-biting
No-Recycling
No-1 line votes

you spit 1st, you have 20min after checkin
i got another 20 after you..

All Votes Must Be Explained In Detail...

Good Luck!!!

5hifty 12-08-03 10:46 PM

Checking In...

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Walter Wall 12-08-03 10:49 PM

.........who the fuck do you think you are kid?

if you wanna battle me than your wack ass is spittin first

5hifty 12-08-03 11:03 PM

what ever.. stop you bitching.. give me 20min....

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5hifty 12-09-03 12:05 AM

Walter Wall?, my punches land hard enough to make
texas three states. uppercuts will leave ya chest in
v-shapes, as i hand you an L in a circle, like the winner
of a lexus-sweepstakes, I'll even
rip your eyes backwards so you can't look forward to this loss
like contemporary priests I'm already bored with this Cross
this bitch couldn't serve me fresh lines if he ordered some floss
like porn vets in virgin roles..you're only
Acting Tight, resurrect your life like Christ,
just so I can come and kill you twice
I'm always prevailin so every time you'll be failin
its like trying to Crucify yourself, you won't get the last nail in
im smackin this kid till his head
is turned..360 degrees, ya strategy will never work, cuz
ya loss record will be equivalent to the number of emcees
that RB has registered..


(finisher)
Verbally harassing walter I am forced to enforce his debt because
this faggot has decided to outgrow elevating and battle the best
I sever chests from necks and hips that are used for mad slaps and fag-biz, I could smack with jizz and FILLET this FISH.

5hifty 12-09-03 12:17 AM

where i said:

"im smackin this kid till his head
is turned..360 degrees" - look at his avatar

where i said:

"this faggot has decided to outgrow elevating
and battle the best" - look and read his sig..

Walter Wall 12-09-03 12:31 AM

Call'n me out?............must of misheard your information
cuz here ure cum'n up shorter than midgit masturbation
Checked ya profile, 57 posts a day? you must be joking
The last time you dropped a hot bar, ure feet got soapy
Im a laugh and relax as I take it easier than bake oven
Cuz kid can't spell, whats he gonna show me 5umthin?
Ya havent heard of structure vocab or multis apparently
Got no chance of the vote, Im facing emcee alan keyes!
So as I keep............my fly rhymes presidentially inclined
U stay wack and 'matched'.......'taken out' with 10 lines!

Walter Wall 12-09-03 12:40 AM

vote on this battle
and do it right

flow -
structure -
multis -
punches -
wordplay -

High Class 12-09-03 12:42 AM

5hifty - That was a decent verse. You had I think about 2 punches in there that landed really nice. They wernt played or anything. The structure, and rhyme scheme could use a little work. But thats nothing time cant do for ya...

Walter Wall - I dont know if this is as good as you are, maybe a bad day. But I wasnt feeling ya verse to much, I felt things were forced to much. You had 1 really good punch in there. But alot of the time, it doesnt match with multiple punches. Your flow was good and all of that. Structure was straight, maybe make a better rhyme scheme...

Because of the punches Vote - 5hifty

OUT

-High Class a.k.a Confusion

-WiLL GeTCha- 12-09-03 12:44 AM

Personals- Walter
Punches- Tie
Multies- 5hifty
Flow- Walter
Vocab- Walter
Wordplay- Tie
Overall- Walter

Synapsis- Ok... Battle was ok... Looks closer on stone than what it really was... 5hifty you need to work on your structure cause readin' yer shit was a pain... but other than that... both of em were str8... Pz

Walter Wall 12-09-03 12:45 AM

^fuck'n dickryders

I love frontlines, lol

punches is one of 5 categories

learn how to vote homie

then come back

Walter Wall 12-09-03 12:48 AM

that was directed at high class

wil getcha knows how to vote

Personals
Flow
Punches
Wordplay
Vocab
Structure
Multis

^all should be in your vote

_ÑÒÀßÙSÈ_ 12-09-03 12:48 AM

shifty had an overall better verse, he had more complex punches and wrdplay. Walter had an aight spit, one or two good punches but nothing too hard or witty. Vote 5hifty




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seriously, go back to somewhere else.

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Ambitious 12-09-03 12:48 AM

flow - walter
structure - walter
multis - shifty
punches - walter.......just showed utter disrespect for shifty....made him look foolish......elementary punches that hit harder than the complex shit he spit.....
wordplay - tie

vote - walter.............

5hifty 12-09-03 01:02 AM

hmm.. i think this could be a hate vote because of what happend earlier. Tech.. but its ok i respect your vote....let get this battle overwith today people..

Nice Verse Walter

Walter Wall 12-09-03 01:25 AM

Alan Keys was the black presidential candidate in the 2000 election

by the way, this was a quick key to get this kid to stop pmming me

....upp'n
for
fully
explained
votes

t-west 12-09-03 01:49 AM

Man, imma give my vote to 5hifty here,walter, i dunno if ya had a bad day or sumthin but to tell the truth, i wasnt feelin ya verse playa, maybe its jsut the way i like my rap, but 5hifty got the W here.

flow - walter
structure - walter
multis - 5hifty
punches - 5hifty
wordplay - 5hifty

5hifty won dis wit punches, walter, i felt urs couldnt match him styll, i wasnt feelin dem too much, i felt 5hiftys way more.


Hit me up wit an honest vote der man. thx.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=97397

Explict 12-09-03 02:14 AM

Personals-walter
Flow-walter
Punches-5hifty
Wordplay-5hifty
Vocab-5hifty
Structure-walter
Multis-5hifty

this was a great battle overall but 5hifty took it. he had some great punches. i was feelin them pretty good and they landed pretty hard.. Walter you had some great personals the midget verse cracked me up..but u need to use more punches...

5hifty that verse were you said i'll rip you eyes back words was a great punch.. hit hard..
overall 5hifty.. no hate just a vote..

PZ

Phoeniix 12-09-03 03:00 AM

nice battle, i really enjoyed it

flow - walter
structure - walter
multis - 5
punches - tie
wordplay - ......

personals: walter


walter came strong and structured and personal. thats why i think he edged it out by a little. dont matter tho 5hifty, i cant vote....

5 you came hard, i just think your structure is really hurtin you and if you worked that out your verse was be a lot better....
i really liked the crucifyin urself line thats some creative shit...


yall hit up my battles if get a chance and see em in frontlines....vs elude...and vs. meters

thanks

MC Free 12-09-03 03:57 AM

flow - walter
structure - walter {5's was a pain to read}
multis - 5hifty
punches - 5hifty
wordplay - 5hifty

overall, a more creative verse by 5hifty!

vote = 5hifty

5hifty 12-09-03 03:59 PM

uppin for some honest votes.. dont sleep on this battle ya'll.. lets get this over with already..

Thank You.. Bye

5hifty 12-09-03 04:41 PM

upping for votes #2...............

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Born To Kill 12-09-03 05:38 PM

I always preach the gospel when it comes to voting...

And Shifty's been shook like he's seen the hand of God...
Bitchslap him!

Those last four lines of Walter's just killed, killed, killed him!

Shifty's format was about the worst I've ever seen...

Some of his shit was aight, but nothing was extraordinary.

Tighten up ya format, hit harder and go for personals.

Better punches, wordplay, personals, and of course, format by Walter.

Holla back...

Vote here!

.Iknoevel. 12-09-03 05:54 PM

Personals-tie
Flow-walter
Punches-5hifty
Wordplay-5hifty
Vocab-5hifty
Structure-walter
Multis-5hifty
overall - 5hifty


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