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Technician vs Aragorn
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30 min blind spit no b/s/ votes check in. |
checking in...................g'd luck
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Yo.....
Bitch I'm bout to even out my K.O.'s with your wins Shits 5-0 in my favor before the battle even begins You think levely but i'll punch you below five hundred Bones readily crunch, so Ur days alive are numbered Aragorn, male fans run to his Faucet like Farah Porn Mad and mourned, a crossbread failure like Carrot-Corn Don't delay the final result just give it up this Instince Hiding in the corner i get a vote every time he Winces Can't go a second wit out Flinchin', need help from henchman My text weapons like Lynchin', bleed Aragorn's clothes crimson Technician, exhibits repetition, in-hibits ya style ta make a better edition Like'a half clever collision, my fists crush your light feather submission |
Fuck.. thread was closed when I posted and shit. Gotta re key some shit
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Check... Technician I'll edit your text the way the tech hit 'em...
"S's" don't sound correct with pieces of your neck missin... Then again, neither do "I's" and "O's"... when you chest explodes.. Plus you can't see me with them eyes.. holes in a broken skull... I'll put your head in a Vice like Vercetti up in my City.... You think you "nice"... but you don't hit heavy.. battin paws like a kitty... Technician rhymes with next victim... seems logical to me... I read in between the lines.. your death's already forseen... Your avvy's a mirror image... your suicidal at times.. Cause you can't rival my lines... here's your life on the line *hangs up* They tried closing the thread cause of the blows that I fed... tech's a trip.. common to clip the way he holding my lead... |
nice verse uppin for sum voters in this bitch............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .......................................
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decent battle
Ill be back to vote as soon as I get registered I feel like an immigrant, lmao |
aragon had a decent opener...he had iight punches but
they did'nt really hit that hard...disses were kinda blah.. nice flow..did'nt feel the closer... tech starter was a lil weak..he had a nicer flow..betta punches.. his last six lines iz what killed this battle... vote tech |
blah...pretty good
opener+1-tech closer+1-tech punches+2-tie personals+2-blah wordplay+1-tie multis+1-tech complexity+1-aragorn originality+1-aragorn cornyness-2-tech...sorry but farrah faucet??..come on enjoyment+1-aragorn overall- Technician (+4).....Aragorn (+6)....-----Winner is Aragorn...no hate but those corny lines gotta go for Technician...please drop honest vote here http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=97367 |
no^. you just dont get it........try getting Smart.
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uppiinn..................
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opener:Aragorn
closer:Tech structure:Tie punches:aragorn vocab:Tech wordplay:Aragorn overall:aragorn best punches, this what won the battle...... aragorn Check... Technician I'll edit your text the way the tech hit 'em... "S's" don't sound correct with pieces of your neck missin... I'll put your head in a Vice like Vercetti up in my City.... You think you "nice"... but you don't hit heavy.. battin paws like a kitty... Your avvy's a mirror image... your suicidal at times.. Cause you can't rival my lines... here's your life on the line *hangs up* technition Aragorn, male fans run to his Faucet like Farah Porn Mad and mourned, a crossbread failure like Carrot-Corn Can't go a second wit out Flinchin', need help from henchman My text weapons like Lynchin', bleed Aragorn's clothes crimson Technician, exhibits repetition, in-hibits ya style ta make a better edition Like'a half clever collision, my fists crush your light feather submission tech- if you would of hit harder at your beggining you would of won this battle. nice read, great batttle pees. can ya drop a fair vote on the battle in my sig |
this was an okay battle...nuttin special...give the edge to tech..
go job dawg...elevate though..wanna see you up at a elite sum day... Everyone Vote on DOI vs SOFT FOCUS Crew Battles. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=96519 |
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good battle aragorn |
opener - T
closer - T punches - T personals - tie wordplay - A vocab - A overal - T no hate just honest vote...T had better punches |
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ok poll voted...can you go to my battle again and please break it down better...sorry to be a pest but if not it wont close...just use the categories i put up...thanks homie
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opener:Aragorn
structure:Tie punches:aragorn vocab:Tech wordplay:Aragorn closer:Tech overall:aragorn |
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really. i didnt think dis wuz great. i thought tech had betta flow and punches. no good personals, and everything else wuz about even. so ima go wit tech on dis one. No hate. vote goes to TECH.
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punches - Tech
personals - tie this was a decent battle, nothing special flow was decent from both vote= tech, he came more consistant with punches |
Techs punches hit harder..... better flow and structure as well....
Aragorn came better than he usually does but it just wasnt enough... very close though |
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