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((no abuse vs j-yo-b))
10-15 line max
no crew, hate or dr no feeding verse due hour after we both check in check in first. |
checkin' In...
verses due in an Hour... Lets the best Emcee Win... Honest votes only please.... lets do this mu'fukka... |
aight
aight yo
prepare to get merked, J understand? care to get served cuz your interest in this rap games, just a tag on a shirt* yu a fag for what it's worth, take it in the ass so gentle your flows like fans on clearance, the way they blow special hoe get a stencil, cuz son we kno you copying your rhymes and could never shit on emcees, that's why you drop on a dime hopefully you'll get better, being your new i don't sweat ya from south of boston? now i kno where to call when-you need a stretcher* this beating is obvious, and i won't make the hate staul the truth is i defeated your looseleafs while playing planet 8-ball* but stay strong, maybe you can battle a newbie next and relay all your gay messages, through your fruity text *in his profile his interests is the rap game *he's from south of boston *planet 8-ball is a pool game on uproar.com peace g/l |
i'll be back in ten minutes you better of posted, we had plenty of time. So hurry up and get your shit up.
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Yo...
When I stop to Mock~you, you betta "Bounce" cuz my automatic creates "Statik To Stop~you"/1 thats how was and Will~Be, For Real~G you gotta be a "Handless Ghost" to "Not Feel~me"/2 Isn't that Right NO~ABUSE?, I show~a~Noose cuz I'm about to Hang this mu'fukka wit No~Excuse/3 cuz I want him Dilibratly~Dead, So I'm Shootin' SLugz that are "Hollow Tipped" like "Lady Liberty's~Head"/4* Actually NOABUSE Fuck~the~Noose, cuz it's the Truth that I Can "Run Circles" around you like "Duck~Duck~Goose"/5 So pack ya bagz~and~Vacate, your "More than Weak" for being missing for "Seven Days" to be Toe Tagged~on~"Day~Eight"/6** but thats your Fate~"Chess"~mate, I "Move strategically" around this place to Find the Safe with the Cake~for~CheckMate/7 Protect ya Chest~Plate? with what?~a~Vest?, J-yo just Slayed the Rest of who Contest... Man... What~a~Mess!/8 Never the Less this is Obviously~a~Massacre, I take this Rap Game "Serious" and Mu'fukka I'm "Honestly"~After~ya/9 I just "smoked you" like a "Dutch" and I'll Do~it~Again, Why Waste my Breath wit a mean Fifteen when I can Do~it~in~ten...10 * Explanations * 4*- Lady liberty is the Name of the Statue of Liberty and it's Hollow... 6**- 8 Days (Day~eight) is one day MORE than a WEEK (More~than~Weak) ... get it... lets get some votes on this shit.... |
structure - abuse
opener - none flow - abuse enjoyment - abuse {just} closer - j-yo-b abuse.... how can u say that.... 'but stay strong, maybe you can battle a newbie next and relay all your gay messages, through your fruity text' i'd say that ur record is newbie....11 losses cant mean nethin good can it?!?!!? that was the only thing wrong wiv ur verse {really}..... beat him in every category except closer.... vote = abuse |
flow -
structure - multis - punches - wordplay - thats is how u Vote on this.... so Poeple Vote Correctly.... |
If you don't Vote Correctly From Now on then it Won't Count... Period....
I'll post it once again for the HARD HEADED: flow - structure - multis - punches - wordplay - ^^^ thats the Catagories you Are SUpposed to VOTE ON... DO SO... |
ive covered most of them in my vote neway so stop moanin kid
but he still took it....already polled neway so :P no hate, good luck y'all laterz |
flow - j
structure -abuse multis -abuse punches -j wordplay -j Overall-j Vote:J Reason:i felt his verse more!!....his lines were more creative,n i feel da punch's were on point!!......soo he gets my vote!! Hate if u want cuz I DONT GIVE FUCC!! |
1-0 me since that last kid can't poll, well upping for some more votes. nice spit j-yo just late. i can't beleive you needed more then hour must be those long fuckin bars kid. let's get some more votes.
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Dawg I spit 5 minutes past the deadline... Whoopie.... i hadtah do shit in the middle of the battle like make a Play.... u know... but anyway.... that shit counts....
if that doesnt count then your vote dont count Cuz he Didn't Follow the Fuckin' CAtagory Guidlines.... and i don't see how you could win tha Multi catagory.. i dont even think u had any... my whole shit was multis but anyway... 1-1... More Votes People... |
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flow - no structure -no multis -no punches -j wordplay -j overall = no. close shit j work on your structure man............................................... ....no vote on my shit in my shig honest votes..........thx...........pz |
Personals- Abuse
Punches- Abuse Multies- J-Yo Flow- Abuse Vocab- Abuse Wordplay- Tie (Both were Decent) Overall-Abuse Synapsis- J-yo you need to shorten yer lines cause they were a lil stretched... Abuse took this rather easy almost... I wouldnt say one-sided tho... Good battle n return the favor and vote on my open battle... Pz |
J-Yo-B
way better wordplay w/o the lines and ~'s no abuse got abused, gotta add more punches and metas that hit harder. keep practicin but J-yo gotcha! |
damn does this site even know what MULTI's ARE??
Multi's are when u use MULTIPLE WORDS TOGETHER to RYHME.. Example: Do~It~Agian + Ruined~My~Pen = a 3 word Multi!... 2. Dilibratly~DEAD + Liberty's~Head = 2 word Multi... 3. Vaccine + Black~Screen = a 1-2 combo Multi.... Not a MULTI is a one word end of sentence Ryhme.. Example: DIMES + RYHMES = NOT a MULTI... ^^ just to let yall rooks know.... so how he won in the Multi catagory just Baffles me.... well Fuck the Polls dawg.... he didnt Vote on the Polls but I dont Givafuck unlike you tryin to get my vote voided.. but i bet your cool with it now cuz it happened to you right.. lol... 2-1.... More votes Please... |
if we are going by the Polls... and I guess that is the rules i just found out... then it's 2-1...
if not... 3-2.... More Votes Please... |
im sure that counts as uppin
if it dont, then ur the biggest bitcher ever jus let the votes come in and quit moanin man...... not givin urself a good rep by bitchin every three minutes.... jus chill out ffs laterz |
stop trying to sway the votes. I'm sure everyone knows what multi's are. Also
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I'm just upping this for some honest votes. I did allot of voting today and ya'll better hit this up and drop a vote please. I gotta work early tomorrow so i'm going to bed soon. But leave a link and i'll get back at it tomorrow if it's still open. peace
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Great job of voting people. I think this is mu third upping, so lets get voting. I've been working all of this week so i haven't been able to vote much or get at battles. But if you leave a link i'll hit it up over the weekend. NOW VOTE DON'T SLEEP!!
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upping this battle for some more votes this ones hell old............................................... .................
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i don't even know where the fuck this kid is, he must be dead. So can ya'll vote on this battle and end it. i'll hit up any links you got too. thanks.
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THIS BATTLE NEEDS VOTES IT'S SO OLD AND NEEDS TO END, CAN YA'LL HIT THIS UPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP. THANKS..
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Jyo-B just cuz his word play and and shit was betta the otha categories were very close so it came down 2 that!
Vote:JYB Bottom Line:Decent battle both could elavate |
Personals- Abuse
Punches- Abuse Multies- J-Yo Flow- Abuse Vocab- Abuse VOTE ABUSE AND PLZ VOTE ON THE POISON-PEN VS. SE7EN BATTLE |
Structure: No
Opener: tie Flow: No enjoyment: tie closer: J Win: no Abuse. J your shit got confusing at times. Get tid of all the useless shit= the quotes, and the / and numbers are excessive man Please hit this up honestly http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=100235 |
flow-no
punch-j structure-j multi-j wordplay-j (more~than~weak) vote=j people, please vote in this battle http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...138#post1010138 |
aight well the last few cats can't poll yet, and i don't even think jay is even on here anymore. bu ti'm aup it anyway for more vtoes and pollers would be helpful.
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flow-j
punches-no personals-tie creativity-tie consistancy-no j had some kool multis, but that was about it.. most fo your good punches were played or forced.. but u have potential.. no your record is misleading your not bad at all.. a few witty lines a decent flow.. pretty steady.. hit him with a few more jabs than he hit you, pretty close but vote-no abuse |
vote/abuse
had a better style... nice wordplay... other cats lines were long... nice verse but not verygood flow... punch/draw personals/draw injoyment/noabuse |
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