AMEND VS 13th Disciple
 

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Verses Are Due: Friday 12/12/03

Put Up Or Shut The Fuck Up & Get The Fuck Out!!!!!

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good luck.......


was gonna diss on ur sexual preference but i seen u gave it away
.....when i scanned ur member pic and ran across...



..not gonna say...'Sonned!'..... cuz i don't father homo dependants
& its a fact u swap spit wit fags...gays brag on there Amend-mints
..other kids..might look forward to ur drops..me..i'm not impressed
Peewee i peeped ur sig...& don't care about ur wackin progress
.....let me express...why i been avoidin ur PM's to a text challenge
cuz i knew u were borderline...like smugglin the refugeein' spanish
..u couldn't manage...2 step 2 my level so come down from ur high
see..i'm gifted wit my punches.....now keep ur eye on the prize...
....this guy...is a joke...and seriously so is ur weak ass crew....
all of ur members are wack...but yet...happened to beat you!...
...dude...i'm callin ur bluff..ur no Ace now i'll lay out them cards...
hey at least its not crack which means u know u ain't hard
...fuckin retard..u make Divinity look genious...& urself look dumb
FLA/NC/VA?...even that bitch knew u can't be in 3 places in one..
....um...its over...u been served like sheriffs wit bench warrants
its been a laugh...hell u are the white version of Martin Lawrence!

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yo...don't feed ...seriously....don't quote sayings like i did...don't
post my pic like i did...bring ur own style...

huh. why im not in LLL? i do not know. wow.

Fair Is Not Fair.!
 

Eat A Dick D, You Can Have This Win - To Change Ya Score
..& Its Sad, U Been Beatin By Kids The Same Age As Yours
Take The Floor, Like Its Av's Dick - & See This Herb Mop It
& DAMN.!!...
........Ya Punches Look More Confused Then Ya Shirt Pocket
'Mends Merk Modest, Keeps It Quite..This Fact I'll Brandish
Congrats........On Raising A Ball Of Grease & A Half Hispanic
'Mend'll Max Ya Limits, Av's Diminish'd - Just Call Me DADDY
Your Side Burns Are Much Like Your Flow................Both're Off Badly
I'm Loss Happy, Got Room For Seconds - 'Mends Full Of WIT
Like Taking The W, SEE.............Im Leaving D Just Full Of IT


Probably Pull A Fit, "Ooh He Used My Pic", "He Bit My Style", But...
Everyone Knows A Personal Punch Beats An Attempt'd Try Chump
Advice: DUCK - Edit Ya Post, Forget A Win - This Newbs A Loser
Bitchin About Lady Div Punches, Let Alone That You Would Use It
& Rules Are Useless, Av'll Look Out For Ya, Thats What Fams For
....13th Went :banghead: When He Found Out His Dad Likes Cam More
Cant Stand Whores, Your An Easy Slut, 'Mend'll Take Advantage Of...
Make Ya Look Like That Little Girl.......Manhandled & Banaged Up
Can U Manage Chump.? Or Is The Net Too Much, & We ALL KNOW...
Family Matters Suck'd, & You Look Like The Wet Version Of Waldo

13th came with hard punches some good personals and that photo of amend is pathetic,, wow you're taking a pill!!!!

amend tried to come back and had some good multies to help the flow of his punches but his verse wasnt a good as 13th's all round and the pic he used is a good pic,, its a guy with his kids,,, big deal


VOTE 13th

The guy with his kids is 13th. . .
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i know, but its an ok picture,, where as you look gay on yours

Not in the tourny... Cant vote

Word to that ... Don't get me wrong ... 13th had some dope ass and witty punches ... But I can tell Amend put more thought into his ... He juss came more consistent ... Both dope verses against eachother ... But Imma have to go wit Amend for bein' a bit more wittier and harder hittin' ... Props to both on this battle tho ... Was interestin' to read ...

Vote : Amend

yea... both get props but I gotta give this to Amend. His wordplay was mixed better with his personals. This isn't sayin I like Amend better because I don't. I personally think he's overrated but he did win this battle.

vote - amend

Omg...Those punches Amend was throwin on 13th's kids were fuckin brutal, lol. Great battle from both. Witty punches etc. It's not hard to see that Amend one this though.

Punches Like these took it.

"Congrats........On Raising A Ball Of Grease & A Half Hispanic"

"Make Ya Look Like That Little Girl.......Manhandled & Banaged Up"

Lmfao.

Brutal shit. Good battle from both. There's no doubt IMO that..

Vote ~ Amend

lol....okay i guess....again...this is why i hate droppin first but
blah...doesn't matter..

What The Hell Does That Mean.?
"Blah W/e, It Doesnt Matter" ...Then Why Post Period.?
Uppin For Chuckles.

nah..it ain't nuthin...good comeback i guess...i just think its funny
that the way i battle...wit quoting..and even postin pics...u
happened to copy the same style...and even fed off of me in the
first line of ur verse...as u read mine line for line..thinkin of
punches to outdo mine...and copied my style...i'm sure u will say
i'm bitchin..cuz only in here do cats think its bitchin...elsewhere..
the tru vets know feedin when they see it...but its whatever....
good battle and i hope u get the win kid :)

Wtf, True Vets Like What/Who.? M~M Just Fed Off Dayak Kid. The Fuck Out Of Here, Everyone On This Site Knows Im A BIG Personal Puncher, Once I Seen My Pic I Said "Okay, Lets See Who Can Do It Better"
& Yes You Are Bitching, LOL@ Real Vets. & Who's That.? Av.?






....'Mends Been Here Longer ;)




& Skill Doesnt Make A Vet.!

ur right....ur 9-13...

and seriously...ur overrated...

u still use letter punches...i'ma hand u the x and give u
the L .....played...adjust to the new times....


but its whateva....













fake ass vanilla ice

Whoa. That Came Straight From The Originality Cup Huh.?

Amend was wittier better word play, i found that 13 had better flow. Vote-Amend

^ OMG at that bullshit vote.


I personally thought 13th got this, amend was lame to play off his verse like that, and a lot of his 'personals' werent really worded strong enough that id consider them punches, a lot seemed weak hitting or just plain average to me .. 13th came decent, not the greatest verse, but i fgelt enough to take this.

It was close, but


Vote13th Desciple

Bad luck, Amend ;)

Of course you would say that.
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Not Surprising

^stop hatin on cats who don't vote for u...




uppin



oh yeah...nice hard punches on the kids...:)...i wouldn't direct
them towards the dad either....

vote Amend really..

Both verse were str8
some good shit some not

wow... u really are dumb. I just thought I was talkin shit before...

yea... this was a bitch battle. Wtf feeds their entire verse off of the other guy? damn... that's rediculous. The style, the verse, everything. It's disgusting. Especially from somebody who claims to be a vet but oh yeah, like u said, vets aren't skilled. lmfao... Amend you're a joke. Worse than that you're a plague. We keep beatin the shit outa u n u disappear n pop back up every now and then.

lmao....now thats comedy....

but also the truth...at least someone finally seen that...

i don't care about the win...its just the point kid didn't just feed..
he bit my style and everything....


fake ass vet...ur only a older herb...thats it...

i think AMEND got this

i aint voting for him cause he is in my crew...you can delete this vote if you like....i jus think it is necessary to vote on this

no here we go


^^why the fuck do u post this in every battle?...to try stop some of there punches or personals that they can throw at it....dam man i thought i would never see anyone on your level dong somin like that...

and i dont think 13th came with enough personals and punches that amend came with his were harder and funnier alot made me go OHHH n shit....but them two votes for 13th i think personally were just because there friends and he cant vote against him...thats just what i think..maybe its not but its the obvious reason

so my vote goes to AMEND from comin wit good structure and personals and punches...although them ones on his kids n shit was un-called for man..that was maybe too harsh but ohh well

keep up the work....dope battle

^kid....i only had to read half of ur post becuz i already know how
u are...ur a cock rider....and no matter if Amend woulda posted a
no show verse..u still woulda voted for him...why do u think i
blocked u on AIM?...cuz u stayed riding my gonads...

go do sumthin useful wit ur life...and kill urself

Probably Pull A Fit, "Ooh He Used My Pic", "He Bit My Style", But...
Everyone Knows A Personal Punch Beats An Attempt'd Try Chump


The More You Bitch The More My Verse Makes Sense. . .

ok, while 13ths verse was fairly good one, there was too much filler to seriously consider it for a victory. I refuse to praise Amend cuz hes a homo, but 13th, honestly he got you brother.


vote- gay.

Although its really fucking gay that amend fucking copied all of 13th's concepts and was feeding off of 13th's verse more then that kid in 13th's avatar, amend still came out and beat 13th.....i think thats the gayest way to win, but his verse was better

Vote:Amend

^^ok grampa

if i was "riding your gonads" as u say..then why the fuck didnt i vote for you?....i voted fair he won its as simple as that...now stop bitching about people who voted against you...just like you said to AMEND stop bitching...and i aint a cock rider i vote fair i woulda gone either way i dont have to sit there for an hour thinkin about whos dick to ride like what u probably did with avalon and evolves match??....i think im right..and if amend no showed then u woulda got the vote dont play with urself man you know who i am.....


P.S= take ur own advice

im taking the "dez" approach to voting . .

13th - your verse was to much filler for me. im too tired to read anything thats not amazing right now. . just losing attentiveness.

amend - you definitely had some great lines. funny even. somewhat played on 13ths kids. but still funny. somehow. next time dont steal his exact style though.

vote - none.

lol....this became funny...give Amend the win..it didn't matter to
me in the beginning or end...just the feedin and biting.....

Methodz..ur gay...





vote=Amend

Amend Wins
13th Is Out...

& You Guys Bitch Way Too Much