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.:K:. 12-10-03 03:10 PM

.:K:. Vs I.C.U. unit
 
yo man,

10 lines......................

both spit in 10 mins...........................

no crew d/r or hate votes.............................

no feeding or freeposting....................................... .

check in................................................ ................................

gd luck man............................................... ......................................

.pz

.:K:. 12-10-03 03:12 PM

checking in................................................ .................................................. .................................................. pz

.:K:. 12-10-03 03:21 PM

ite peep,

this bitch is simular to England's triumph~you ask how?,
cause like in 1966, they think its all over, well it fucking is now,
so how come your a unit~but you dont have a crew and aint excepted?,
its just like him and his parents~hes feeling rejected,
this isn't with my soul~but im killing you softly,
with lyrics simular to sweets~cause they'll stick like toffe,
this emcee, sounds like a femcee~is he really a bloke?,
to tell bring a flash light~.................and a mircroscope,
so sorry for being personal~but your record and verses stink,
your shits so fucking pointless~that i forget it after i blink.


quick merking........................pz

I.C.U. unit 12-10-03 03:29 PM

check in
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I.C.U. unit 12-10-03 03:31 PM

I'm battling this kid...?...shits a 'joke' similar to reading a 'satire'/
This wack liar feels the damage when I come 'back at em' like shots that 'backfire'//
bombin' ya bitch ass like World War 2//
itz ok to cry over lyrikal defeates//
fuckin wit a white boy iz like fuckin wit 3 timez da "heat"//
Its the invasion of my lyrical manifestations makin rap creations//
soon to be regarded as rap sensations//
I'll murda ya no matter ya alias or whetha not they catch me on security savalence,
Lyrically, ya aimless like performin intergalactic intercourse wit aliens,
You couldnt pull in "eight" figures if you were an "octupus" workin da "cash register

.:K:. 12-10-03 03:37 PM

ite man not bad just work on ur sructure and ur flow.............................................. .......gd luck.............................................. ..........................pz

I.C.U. unit 12-10-03 03:40 PM

thanx fo the help k lets get some votes in here
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.:K:. 12-10-03 04:13 PM

uppin(1).......................................... .............lets go................................................ .................pz

B.I.Detained 12-10-03 04:16 PM

lol to they thinks it all over..US heads wont get it!!
Breakdown--
Punches-K
Flow-K
Enjoyment-K
Sustainment-K
Metas-K
Structure-K
Overall-K...clean sweep..pz

MAKE SURE YA HIT THIS UP PLZ...BEING SLEPT ON PZ
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=97712

.:K:. 12-10-03 04:26 PM

^well fuck it man,most should............................................ .................................................. .................................................. ...............pz

eMiNeM MiNis 12-10-03 04:37 PM

Opener- K
Closer- K
Structure- K
Flow- K
Ejoyment- K
Punches- K
Vote= K
Return the favor wit honest votes once this cat spits....1....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=97810

Dick Tator 12-10-03 04:37 PM

K got this in all aspects nice verse K


please hit this up its so slept on....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=97748

Defining Illness 12-10-03 04:41 PM

Opener/ K
Closer/ K
Structure/ K
Flow/K
Ejoyment/ K
Punches/K

VOTE/K

K got this shit easy...ICU battle people on your level

plz return tha favor honeslty
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=97802

.:K:. 12-10-03 04:43 PM

ite 4-0 to me 2-0 on the poll..........................................thx^ .................................................. ...............................................pz

FlowzLuCiouS 12-10-03 04:43 PM

Aiight.......

icu:<<<u got sent there!!.....dat was weak nicca,learn how to rap!!....elevate more!.....n den battle!

Quote:This wack liar feels the damage when I come 'back at em' like shots that 'backfire'//

^dat was ur hottest line!!

Ok Now..........

K:ur verse was better but not by much!!.....shyt seemed kinda whacc,flow was aiight but it was like u jus rhymin words!!.....soo try harder next time!

Vote:K

0n3

B.I.Detained 12-10-03 04:47 PM

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=97712
yo i hit this up so hit up this link pz

.:K:. 12-10-03 04:53 PM

yo man^ i cnt it would be a crew vote.soz.......................................... .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. pz

Dick Tator 12-10-03 04:58 PM

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=97748

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=97748

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=97748

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=97748

please

.:K:. 12-10-03 05:04 PM

uppin(2)...................................thx yall^............................................. .................................................. .................................................. pz

Menik 12-10-03 05:14 PM

This was a alright battle..
Punches: K
Flow: K
Structure: K
Metas: K
Open: K
Close: K
Overall a decent battle but K took this though, props to both of you, but vote goes to K

.:K:. 12-10-03 05:18 PM

thx dawg^..................ite 6-0 3-0 on polls............................................. .................................................. .......................................pz

Emerge 12-10-03 05:34 PM

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opener
closer
punches

and everything else
K



yupyupyuypyupyupyup

MC Free 12-10-03 06:04 PM

ICU....had trouble readi ur verse....u finished lines in the wrong places....most didnt rhyme....structure = shit....no hate, jus my opinion....

as K sed @ the end of his verse.....'quick merking'!

Opener - K
Closer - K
Structure - K
Flow - K
Ejoyment - K
Punches - K

Vote = K


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