dj-20 vs lewd
 

10 linez max brother ill spit first

kinda goes like this
this guy is some kind of newbie asked who is trippin could be
nothin is lost never cost a dam thing on your tupac gold ring
swing swing whats with the style of hated dont spit words of intensional haten what you goin to createn fat maten in the hoods of ramming bars mooding cars fuedal lives of yo hood could be out of reach for good never could see what goin on for nothing but a secret of a tampon on for youe ronny shon. best can haten for saken shaken cant relate to my haten . now its your turn for this is your first time be scare becuz nothing will ryme take for a crime ride and hide for you wont beat so go take a seat

This bitch challenge me he only 1 n 8,
unfortunantly for him,life already planed his fate.
Take it,its takin,this bitch will never be winnin,
cuz fake shit,he spitin,this dj aint even spinnin.
You started in july,thats daisy,umust bin high,
cuz ur lyrics don't even faze me,the just pass by.
Shy?hell no!it me time.so perplexed, u rewind,playback in yo mind,
its so complex leavin you studderinly behind,payback,but u blind.
Too easy,maybe one day I'll make money,went easy on this rhyme
A crime?well it should be,destryed dj-20,defenently no next time!

*spinnin.DJ's spin
*he signed up in july

it was a ok battle both of you could of put mor effort into it both of your punchlines and multis were weak wordplay goes to lewd wordplay goes to lewd over all my vote goes to lewd

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Aiight.......

Opener:lewd
Closer:lewd
Punch's:lewd
Flow:lewd
Structure:lewd
Vocab:lewd
Wordplay:dj (whass tho)

Overall:lewd

Vote:Lewd

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dont up so much dawg... vote on other battles and leave your link
in there... uppin more than 5 times is a sure way to get dq'd.

flow- lewd
punches- lewd
structure- lewd
vocabulary- tie
wordplay- tie
metties- tie

vote- lewd for winning in most categories

aaight thanks for the vote and teh honest opinion........................................... .................................................. ......................................

aaight thanks for the vote and teh honest opinion........................................... .................................................. ......................................

UPPPIN what is takin so long.............................please vote on this battle............................................ .................................................. .................................................. ..............................

Fuck it your both ''jokes''<<
I would ''vote'' But, i dont have 100 ''posts''
Your ''both''soft like Cream of ''oats''
Your rymes Cant ''float'' no "boats''\\
Re typing so shit you allready ''wrote''
You both suck but-D.j 20-you the''Most''
See me on the street Get your |necks| ''broke''\
You'll never get rich ,never Ca$h no |checks| ''yo''
No ''Necklas'' no ''lexus'' No ''sex'' with chicks<X''X''X>
Cus you dick is ''evedence'' that every things not big in ''texas''

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...id have ta say Lewd............................but ya both did it...more on -L- tho............................................... .....................................

Lewd:
Too easy,maybe one day I'll make money,went easy on this rhyme
A crime?well it should be,destryed dj-20,defenently no next time!

It lookas tho you were feeding off his verse which is a no-no. Also, you threw in the 'money' part as filler, never made sence with the rest of your verse.

DJ-20:

swing swing whats with the style of hated dont spit words of intensional haten what you goin to createn fat maten in the hoods of ramming bars mooding cars fuedal lives of yo hood could be out of reach for good never could see what goin on for nothing but a secret of a tampon on for youe ronny shon. best can haten for saken shaken cant relate to my haten . now its your turn for this is your first time be scare becuz nothing will ryme take for a crime ride and hide for you wont beat so go take a seat

A word of advice, because it's 'text' you gotta structure your lines/bars better so we get the flow. To many non-important words that ryhme. Try to build a verse around somth'n instead of just ......ryhme'n.

Vote = Lewd

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Man Lewd definantly took this one, it was a alrgiht, but i totaly felt lewd, no need to break it down (no hate dj 20) your shit threw down well enough

too bad i don't got enoguh posts, just giving my thoughts

Lewd won my vote because it's easier to read and rhymes and means what it says better. DJ-20 dosen't get my vote because it's to hard to read, little bit of practice on structure,and learn how to set up flows a little better.


overall=Lewd


good job niggas, straight battle, but not all that.

yo i thought lewd on this one but the other guy want far behind. the both had structure and wordplay, but lewd had the flow going !yeaj

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this goes to Lewd overall,

id vote if i could

Vote dis shit
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lewd too kthis better wordplay punches an overall better verse his was more creative jst hit harder vote lewd

aight breakdown

flow: Lewd
disses: none
punches: none
creativity: lewd

DJ ya bars was too long didnt know where to take a break and shit, thats wut manly lost u this battle, so there fore my vote goes to Lewd

Winner Lewd

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this one was lewd all the way, my vote goes to him
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UPPIN end this battle.its been to long.............................................. .................................................. ....................

Pointless 2 post here but U hit my shit up so...
This was an descent battle, like SPEC said not alot of effort towards this 1... but , Lewd had better punches, a lil' better flow, Overall its obvious U dont have 2 try to hard against DJ-20 2 win.
Look man prewrite if U have to - your 1-8, do somthing.

>>by-the way did U forget to submit your vote on my shit???

thanks.......but honestly lets get some votes on this bitch............................................. .........................