NUCLEAR CONCEPTS true fact
 

deathlcok
born to kill
split soul
west

VISHUN OV VENGENCE
(Yon NONCENTZ you been doing your battle rhymes and comedy shit for a grip wont you battle something different battle fucken history battle science educate these wack motherfuckers in something.....show some of that 34THsaratoga brooklyn taino cabano and brazilian shit hit up you dumb spic)

intro: This is a term that has been used by occultists since the late 15th century onwards to described spiritual adepts <../a/adept.html> who received mystical <../m/mysticism.html> insights or "illuminations" from a transcendent source. The Order of the Illuminati was founder by a Bavarian professor of law Adam Weishaupt in 1776, but it was hardly esoteric in any mystical sense because most of its "secrets" were based on the works of Voltaire and other French Encyclopedists. Weishaupt and another enthusiast Adolph Knigge later adapted the Order's teachings in order to infiltrate Freemasonry <../f/freemasonry.html>. A decree in Bavaria in 1784 banned all secret societies - including Freemasonry - and the Order decline. However, by the turn of the 20th century occultists Leopold Engel and Theodor Reuss revived it. In recent times the fantasy occult writer Robert Anton Wilson has popularized the idea of a secret brotherhood of adepts


CANTO UNO
is it the big bang or did man always exsist?
is there a god and if so was satan his nemises?
where are the answers to the questions posed?
who are my foes? who really oppose?
will i go to heaven or hell-
am i who i am or an angel that fell not a man-
so no of men-do i curse you or praise you with an amen?

have any of you noticed a change in the weather?
winters get colder as the earths birth range gets older...
the ice age begins as the winds get colder-
what evolves desolves so as the planet revolves.
man excells from primate while tectonic plates-
shift seperate and recreate a pangian state.
but where is man from???
in times of cold there was no admittance of heat or light-
so with shift of pigment and melon being recessive type-
the first man was dominant white.
now as the snow melted and the temperate rate esculates-
the first albino occurs in the shape of black skin with odd traits.
now this became the new origin-so those with light skin-
traveled away from islam to iran later to be arayans.
this is dated back as fact and realism-but what about religion.....
everything that lives has a father and this ones’ was zorastrianism.
The birth of your beliefes had know beliefs in the entities
Transcripted on loose leafs and delivered from overseas.
To them the to fallow what they read-
so they would fallow there lead.
i do this not to be blasphemous but simply train-
pacifist with passages for they are disdained with a strained brain.
And the true atrocity-is knowledge begins with philosophy-
And according to DONTE that is to study satanology.
Making you a devil fallower and this has been excepted for years-
And later these same fools forced the Indian through the trail of tears.
Those Indians where displaced with a lost race according to fact-
These Indians were the true American settlers called the aerowak.
This aerowaks migrated and started Hispanic latino-
For those who don’t know that was the Aztec caribs and tainos.
These tainos created a brother hood with black-
As a means to unite in slavery and adapt.
But it wasn’t the white mans fault-
it was the same albino man from their lands who commited the assault.
All men been prisoners and slaves at one point so im amazed-
There’s racism in the realism of persecution-
and we depend on violence for solutions- so what’s retribution?
The irradication of a nation-built by minorities?
when we out number our enemies-
its genocide cause we teach and preach to murder the majority.
There’s no justice-when its just us-that bust bucks-
We so smart we cant see we a bunch of dumb fucks.
So what the answer? But what the fucks the question? I ask you-
Zig zag zigular means what happens onec will twice it’s the evil men do.
proof is in the i raised praised by mason as amen rey-
and beast computer designed with each man as a number for doomsday.
so you think if we evolve that we'd no longer be slaves-
please the u.s. is a plantation the government the master and we 14 amendments taught to behave.

that was some deep shit damn brough the concept a distance i was feelin the flows nice internals good rhyme scheme for the most part i was feelin this for sure

tell me what you didnt like please

yo word this piece was real deep, i liked the floe, vocab, and multis,
i realy cant find anything i dont like.
i liked the first part , the hook, the best.
peace

deep nucca, wordplay/vocab/flow/multis
i was amazed by how much u improve each drop
sik shit like usual
amor

that shit was hot nice vocab and flow wordplay was good structure was good nice shit over all 7.5/10

what i didn't like:

the vocab sometimes fucked with the flow or the vocab really hurt the steadiness of your rhymes. Big words sound alot better if your rhyming them multi syllabically. basically in my opinion if you wwrote your shit more in multi's it would hurt your vocab a bit but would make you pretty untouchable with how deep your content is. You had a few multis toward the end that i noticed that were pretty nice though. not much else negative i can say on this like i said before i was feelin it.


now if youd return the favor and check out my replyless post it would be appreciated

never mind you already did thanks

actually i see why it seams off beat i rap this mor like im talking or teaching instead of rapping. damn it did flaw this up

uppin this before i go through my usual page of critquing everyone's work

nice concept and well executed,....but the intro bored the hell outta me, i would drop it.....other than that, the flow fell a bit in places, but with the content and vocab, it didnt really touch it....another nice drop....pZ....

really i thought dropping some historic fact would amp this but i guess i can see what you mean thanks twin i'll work on that

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I liked it.
just a bit intersting to learn stuff but yea
wasnt that topicl
like ur usual deep shit
still good
uppppin for this guy.

word pretty deep piece man, I was really feeling it like they said already there were a few spots were the vocab hampered the flow, also you may want to work on steady bar, line rates I have the same problem myself Im told, but I figure since I cant find much else in this particular piece to critique it is good advice for everyone.

feeling these

"now as the snow melted and the temperate rate esculates-
the first albino occurs in the shape of black skin with odd traits."

"There’s racism in the realism of persecution-
and we depend on violence for solutions- so what’s retribution?
The irradication of a nation-built by minorities?
when we out number our enemies-
its genocide cause we teach and preach to murder the majority."

Ill drop...