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-Negative-™ 12-11-03 03:40 PM

CarnaGe Vs double-0 seven
 
wE BOTH aGREED

on 10 lines max

u drop 1st

rulez:
no swayin votes
no dyckrydin
no crew votes

bla bla bla

goodluck

menolin 12-11-03 03:44 PM

aiight
checkin in................................................ .................................................. ......................

-Negative-™ 12-11-03 03:46 PM

Checkity cHECK.............LETS DO THIS HOMEY............................................. .................................................. ............

menolin 12-11-03 03:58 PM

my texts cause 'carnage', to re-evalute his short RB career,
leave him to salvage his record, fuck him up like gonnerea,

his birthday non applicable, like this cat dosent even exist,
my eat steam your eyes up, leave you lookin through mist,

got more characters in his name, than a warner bros animation,
i take this cat shaolin style, a mortal kombat, total anhiliation,

the only warning he contain, is not to let him near you children,(avy)
slap his sig backwards,, because it was the devil, who served HIM,(sig)



you got 10 lines of filler, you must be able to patch up 'concrete' walls now,
no 'base' to ya stucture, the outcome of u winnin, will provoke the question how??

menolin 12-11-03 04:04 PM

the second bar is supposed to say HEAT, because eat wouldnt make any sense............................................. ...........................

menolin 12-11-03 04:14 PM

is u droppin or not, you wanted 10 minutes in the first place............................................. ...........................

-Negative-™ 12-11-03 04:16 PM

Aight....

You Atack?.....You "Hit Wack"! You Spit, Miss n Get "Bitch-Slapped"!/
Cuz "Bringin Cerial Back In Time" Is The Only Way Ull Get Ur "TRIX-PAST"!!!/..ouch!!..lol


14-13 ..weak..lol Kid I Bring "Weaponry To Batles", I Guess You Can Say I "Glock-The-Thread"/
But Following a "STEET SIGN" Would Be The Only Way For You To "STOP-A-HEAD"!!(Ahead)/..lol

Im The "Shady-Type", That Got "Tonz Of Gunz" That "Make-Me-Hype"/
Callin yoself double-0 seven Your Fake Ass "STORE'S More Fictioness CLIPS" Then "8 Crazy-Nights"!!!/...haha

'god is my judge'...god wont have yo Bac CUz You Lack-Text, Plus Ya Got Sad Assets, All Ya Rb Winz Are Like "Recently Walkin Threw Camp Grounds", "Just Past-Tents"(Tence)/
I Grab-Vets Like Ass, n Thrash-Sets, Like Ya "Showing Us How To Digest Change", We Wood Have "Understood Ur Abb-Cents"(Absence)/..lol


Done deal...............vote

menolin 12-11-03 04:49 PM

1st time uppin.............................. this site is dyein out............................. battle used to be losed pretty quickly, never mind not even get 1 vote???

menolin 12-11-03 05:34 PM

2cnd time uppin............................. c'mon peeps please dont sleep............................................. .........................

Quelude 12-11-03 05:39 PM

Yeha I give it to Klipz $ Murkin.
He had better punches and his flow was clearly undastandable.
Care to take on a challenge this time Klipz?
Face a real emcee and stop feeding on newbie blood. BLOOD.lol
Vote=Klipz

LMAO... Vote Gone.
-Axe

blak woods 12-11-03 06:02 PM

yo...

'god is my judge'...god wont have yo Bac CUz You Lack-Text, Plus Ya Got Sad Assets, All Ya Rb Winz Are Like "Recently Walkin Threw Camp Grounds", "Just Past-Tents"(Tence)/
I Grab-Vets Like Ass, n Thrash-Sets, Like Ya "Showing Us How To Digest Change", We Wood Have "Understood Ur Abb-Cents"(Absence)/..lol

good shit...


my texts cause 'carnage', to re-evalute his short RB career,
leave him to salvage his record, fuck him up like gonnerea,

his birthday non applicable, like this cat dosent even exist,
my eat steam your eyes up, leave you lookin through mist,


kinda like ya best two lines..

vote:~©Ã®Ñåg€~

just more fowetic in my opinion..

please return da favor


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=97605

blak woods 12-11-03 06:03 PM

oops wrong thread.....


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=98069

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menolin 12-11-03 09:15 PM

3rd time uppin............................................. .................................................. ........

menolin 12-12-03 06:09 AM

4 th time uppin..................... drop a link................. an one of us will drop an honest vote.............................................. ........

B.I.Detained 12-12-03 06:12 AM

bREAKDOWN--
Punches-007..little played tho
Flow-007
Structure-None..007 go to structure like ya open mic diss
Enjoyment-Both
Sustainment-007
Complexity-Carn
Overall-007

MAKE SURE YA HIT THIS UP PLZ..BEING SLEPT ON PZ
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=97780

Kwizikal P 12-12-03 07:31 AM

007 won this battle........better flow, punches etc......
Other guys lines were too stretched n i GOT BORED OF HIM EASILY wheras I thought 007 verse was quite ill

Hit this up

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=97450

Thanx

Blah... Whack Vote.
-Axe

menolin 12-12-03 10:36 AM

yo pez, thanks for the vote, an BI, but pez your link dont work.............................................. ...

Kwizikal P 12-12-03 10:39 AM

oh....alrite....see if this works.....

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...?threadid=97450

Killjoy 12-12-03 08:47 PM

HE UNLEASHED THE ILLEST
FLOW, PUNCHES, META'S
AND THE STRUCTURE

MY VOTE: DOUBLE-O SEVEN

PEACE TO THE EAST

Killjoy 12-12-03 08:53 PM

[QUOTE]Originally posted by Killjoy
[GOOD META'S AND PUNCHES
STRUCTURE AND FLOW]
[THEY TRIED TO HOE YOU
AGAINST MY MAN'S]
[GOOD SHIT DOUBLE-O SEVEN]
[PEACE TO THE MIDDLE EAST]

menolin 12-13-03 09:45 PM

aiight 5th tine uppin.................................................. .............................................

Ace king 12-13-03 09:51 PM

double 0 seven..................James bond his ass.................my vote.....champ..............
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You Will Be Banned If YOu Continue To Vote Like This.
-Axe

Handcuffs 12-14-03 02:58 AM

personals-007
punches-carnage
entertainment-carnage
wordplay-carnage
opener-007
closer-tie

close battle, entertaining to read
vote-carnage

Gangsta One 12-14-03 03:07 AM

Breakdown:

Punches: 007
Flow: Canarage
Creativity: Carnage
Vocab: 007
Enjoyment: 007

Overall: 007

No hate, fuckin' pretty ill battle...fo real...

Yo, dawgz, could ya plz hit this up? It's bein slept on harcore...thx...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=98660

-Negative-™ 12-14-03 04:58 PM

OK wuts strange is 2 ppl voted for me ......and only 1 poll vote c'mon stop the dyckrydin look at the personals and punches i had wit that.........so be real

UPPUN YO

menolin 12-14-03 05:07 PM

an i didnt have any personals, my whole verse was filled with punches, an mostly personals, and hancuffs, why you go round voting against me in every battle i have???

-Negative-™ 12-14-03 05:19 PM

looooool^^^YO DAWG RESP LIKE I SAID U HAD A NICE VERSE BUT RB PEEPZ AS I HEARD DYCKRYDE MOSTLY...FEEL ME NICE BATTLE I DONT REALLY CARE........

BUT UPPUN.///////////

BlUnT-MC 12-14-03 05:29 PM

carnage killed this kid... the one street sign line was pretty much the point i said.. MERKED... i'm not gonna break down... 'cause read them, it's fuckin' obvious.. 1

Gay Vote.
-Axe

Lil_C 12-14-03 05:34 PM

that was dead even tuh me nce flows for both.........
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-Negative-™ 12-14-03 05:50 PM

Ummm^^^^Hit the POLL if u wanna vote.............................................. ...................

UPPUN............................................. .................................................. ...............

-Negative-™ 02-02-04 05:16 PM

..............u,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,................. .............................uppunnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn nn

N LitEnd 02-02-04 06:43 PM

Vote - Aesthetic

Reason? Had the much better punches and wordplay. His lines were just much more wittier. 007 had a bar like, birthday/dont exist - see thru mist...thats not a punch...filler. Work on better punches.

menolin 02-02-04 06:47 PM

damn this battle was fomt last year!!!
lol, why u up it?

-Negative-™ 02-02-04 06:48 PM

LOL i just seen it i was like whoa it didnt even end..lol

So lets end this ...na'mean.................we need more poll voters

168 02-28-04 01:31 PM

my texts cause 'carnage', to re-evalute his short RB career,
leave him to salvage his record, fuck him up like gonnerea,

good opener original, pounch and aight vocab

his birthday non applicable, like this cat dosent even exist,
my eat steam your eyes up, leave you lookin through mist,

good personal in there with pouch

got more characters in his name, than a warner bros animation,
i take this cat shaolin style, a mortal kombat, total anhiliation,

good vocab usage and personal=pounch also

the only warning he contain, is not to let him near you children,(avy)
slap his sig backwards,, because it was the devil, who served HIM,(sig)

lol....great personal and good pounch

you got 10 lines of filler, you must be able to patch up 'concrete' walls now,
no 'base' to ya stucture, the outcome of u winnin, will provoke the question how??

fuckin origanil and great finisher
this verse had great concept enjoyed and laughed through your personal and pouncheds
you also great metas and exaclt vocab keep it up

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You Atack?.....You "Hit Wack"! You Spit, Miss n Get "Bitch-Slapped"!/
Cuz "Bringin Cerial Back In Time" Is The Only Way Ull Get Ur "TRIX-PAST"!!!/..ouch!!..lol

nice opener stronger harder pounchs, metas, and werdplay

14-13 ..weak..lol Kid I Bring "Weaponry To Batles", I Guess You Can Say I "Glock-The-Thread"/
But Following a "STEET SIGN" Would Be The Only Way For You To "STOP-A-HEAD"!!(Ahead)/..lol

personals and pounches and keepin metas stronge

Im The "Shady-Type", That Got "Tonz Of Gunz" That "Make-Me-Hype"/
Callin yoself double-0 seven Your Fake Ass "STORE'S More Fictioness CLIPS" Then "8 Crazy-Nights"!!!/...haha

lol....personal and pouches was aight

'god is my judge'...god wont have yo Bac CUz You Lack-Text, Plus Ya Got Sad Assets, All Ya Rb Winz Are Like "Recently Walkin Threw Camp Grounds", "Just Past-Tents"(Tence)/
I Grab-Vets Like Ass, n Thrash-Sets, Like Ya "Showing Us How To Digest Change", We Wood Have "Understood Ur Abb-Cents"(Absence)/..lol

lol....better finisher with personal and pounches
this verse has my vote for an overall betta personals and pounches
great metas and werdplay you really had him goin

my vote ~©Ã®Ñåg€~

check sig and vote on that battle honest votes

peace

teflon don 03-06-04 07:31 AM

vote:double 0

*****return the favor*****
teflon don vs guyver4mk
teflon don vs slaughta

BUTCHA 03-06-04 11:07 AM

Both Verses Ware Weak Weak Both Mces Need To Get They Rap Level Up, What Are Yall Smoking,, My Vote Go To Negative For Better Punches And Flow But That Shit Was Trash................butcha 1


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