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rule 12-11-03 06:52 PM

Justin Kredible Vs Rule
 
10 lines
Blind spit
Verse Due 30 minutes After Check in
No hate votes
No crew votes
No unexplained vtes
And only vote if you have 100 posts or more
Good Luck

rule 12-11-03 06:54 PM

checkin in
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Justin Kredible 12-11-03 06:56 PM

checkin in.........../'./;].[;.;[]./;.][;;.]/[/.].[;/;][/.[/];./[;/.];[/;]./[;.[;[./;[]./;][./]/;[.;/.[/;[.];[/;/;[]./[;/.[/;[./][;.[];[.[.[./][/.;.]/;[.///.[;/.[/;[/[/][;]//;.][;.;/[;/;[;.]/;.[

Justin Kredible 12-11-03 07:13 PM

i dont understand this cat? B creative. Ill murk this fake fool//
call me 'Ja' cuz i got 'rule' behind me.....nigguh i break rules//
this guys 'wiggalicious'...gets on the web and sits back//
ill write 'negro' on his toungue and he still couldnt 'spit black'//
u accepted tha call........so now you'll lose by my scripture//
i gotta beat u wit 'kodak film'.......so u can 'get tha picture'//
call urself rule with a pic of J-Z.....u controdict ur favorites//
well u diddnt put the Ja.......so u diddnt completely fake it//
call urself 'rule' but no one 'follows' ur words that uve spoken//
and u jus got involved wit JK...so lets just say this 'rules' 'broken'//

Justin Kredible 12-11-03 07:16 PM

im not gonna explain punches if u dont get em' dont vote.......................................uppin'/'/'/'//''''''''''//////////////////////////////////'/'/'/'/'/'/'//'//'/'/'//'

rule 12-11-03 07:17 PM

Kids callin a battle obviously an understatement to vets
Couldn't beat a herb so I understand raps full of regrets
Your career as a lyricest couldn't obligue to nothing more
Your losing every battle like the jews for hitlers damn war
Justin Kredible is rediculous...incredible defines: Unbelievable
Similer to a pussy in your mouth to you a cock is more edable
Circumstances i'm going to go easy an hardly swing the bar
Turn my back 180 degrees let you swing you'd still be under par
Even if i was blinded and walking towards your rath uncautiously
You couldn't attempt a balanced hit thus your not hittin properly

rule 12-11-03 07:21 PM

good verse lets get some votes....but for the record...rules for short of a meaning....peace.................................. .......................

lyrical disaster 12-11-03 07:48 PM

yo, i think justin kredible took this shit, credit for goin first and still bein able to stik it out... rule was good but i liked JK's punches a lil' betta, they were funnier...PCe

vote=justin kredible

Justin Kredible 12-11-03 07:49 PM

u2 daug...............uppin^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

rule 12-11-03 08:37 PM

can that cat not read...blind spit dumb ass and only vote if you have 100 posts...it is a waste of time and space if you cant poll

Justin Kredible 12-11-03 08:53 PM

dont hate................................']']'''''']']']']']'']'''[];'[';]'[]';'['];'][']';]'[]';]']['];'][']';]'[]'[];']['[]';]'[]'........lol

rule 12-11-03 08:57 PM

i'm not haten i'm just sayin it takes up space like these posts that we are doing lol...but good drop anyways man....lets get some actual votes...good luck.............................................. ...........

Justin Kredible 12-11-03 09:01 PM

yup........................uppin^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

_MATCHyou_ 12-11-03 09:06 PM

i think it was a good battle both kids hit hard so imma break it down like so.....

PUNCHES....only by one, but RULE b/c(Justin Kredible is rediculous...incredible defines: Unbelievable
Similer to a pussy in your mouth to you a cock is more edable)

Disses....EQUAL

FLOW STRUCTURE.....(rule, just easier to follow and relitively the same length)

VOCAB.....Equal, good play with words

OVER ALL VOTE...gotta go to RULE, barely but he got it in my opinion, yallmake sure to hit your boys battle up too...dont' be stingey

HK The Great 12-11-03 09:26 PM

yo this was a close battle yo, good flow by both and two very different styles and shit
breakdown:

Punches: Rule got this wit "cock is more edable" line, tho Jk's Kodak; beat you till u get the pic. a nice one if he had worded it differently... but still pretty good

Flow: JK had a better flow.... Rules wasnt the worst but it wasnt that good, it was kinda scattered and shit.

Quality: Rule had better vocab and shit, JK was good but real real simple...

Overall: Rule Got this... but it was a good battle, wit different styles and shit

TheProphet777 12-11-03 10:31 PM

LOL rule didnt even try this Justin keep elevatin you need more skill goign dog no hate votes just this was a easy vic for rule! LOL sadness do i need to say more!

Favorite lines"
Rule:
Your career as a lyricest couldn't obligue to nothing more
Your losing every battle like the jews for hitlers damn war

Justin:Couldnt find one

rule 12-12-03 07:03 AM

uppen for 2 more votes............................................. ................................................

Kwizikal P 12-12-03 07:30 AM

I think rule edged this OK battle, a close thing though

His flow and better punches won this................

Hit this up

Whack Vote...
-Axe

Spekta 12-12-03 07:31 AM

JK's Verse:

i dont understand this cat? B creative. Ill murk this fake fool//
call me 'Ja' cuz i got 'rule' behind me.....nigguh i break rules//
^Nice opener -lil' filler to start, but a hard punch.

this guys 'wiggalicious'...gets on the web and sits back//
ill write 'negro' on his toungue and he still couldnt 'spit black'//
^Another good punch, still SOME filler to start tha line tho.

u accepted tha call........so now you'll lose by my scripture//
i gotta beat u wit 'kodak film'.......so u can 'get tha picture'//
^lil' played, but decent snap.

call urself rule with a pic of J-Z.....u controdict ur favorites//
well u diddnt put the Ja.......so u diddnt completely fake it//
^LMAO ---Hard hit.

call urself 'rule' but no one 'follows' ur words that uve spoken//
and u jus got involved wit JK...so lets just say this 'rules' 'broken'//
^Tough ass close. Best line in tha battle.

Rule's Verse:

Kids callin a battle obviously an understatement to vets
Couldn't beat a herb so I understand raps full of regrets
^good opener.

Your career as a lyricest couldn't obligue to nothing more
Your losing every battle like the jews for hitlers damn war
^OK line, but not a refined snap -could be better.

Justin Kredible is rediculous...incredible defines: Unbelievable
Similer to a pussy in your mouth to you a cock is more edable
^hahaha, nice w/play, punch

Circumstances i'm going to go easy an hardly swing the bar
Turn my back 180 degrees let you swing you'd still be under par
^ehh, mostly filler.

Even if i was blinded and walking towards your rath uncautiously
You couldn't attempt a balanced hit thus your not hittin properly
^ more filler, and not a hard close.

Tha Breakdown:

Open: JK
Close: JK
Wordplay: Rule
Meta's: JK
Multis: JK (3)
Vocab: JK
Flow: Rule
Punches: JK

Vote: JK

Good battle, JK jus' came wit' harder punches/snaps.

Spekta 12-12-03 07:32 AM

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=96175

Hey, return tha favor and hit this wit' an honest vote.

rule 12-12-03 03:58 PM

uppen for one more vote
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rule 12-12-03 06:14 PM

uppen
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Ace Of Spades 12-12-03 06:43 PM

justin came nice no doubt. but i've seen similar
lines. nice battle tho. everything was equal. but
ima give this one to Rule for complexity and creativity.
nice battle dogs.
props to both

vote-rule

plz hit this up:
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=98094

peACE

Yaz 12-12-03 07:55 PM

haha good battle yall, i think JK took this wit his wordplay, pun¢hs, personals, an dat kodak line.... But dun get me wronge this waz a veary klose battle... K33P iT Kr@kIn Yo

Yu Bin SunD 12-12-03 08:21 PM

Aite Battle
Justin His Verse Consisted Of Just Shots Of Rule'S Name And ANd Shit BUt It Was Aite
Rule His Verse Was Better Cause It Was More In Depth N Had Better Vocab

vote on battle on sigs pleaaaase 1


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