Celestal Dialect vs GameTime
 

12 lines max...deadline to spit by is 11pm tomorrow eastern time

5votes
no dk
no crew
no hate

all votes must be explained

Catagories:

opening
flow
punches
metas
multis
complexity
vocab
structure
closing
overall
my vote

checkin in..........................................

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^^breakdown??>..i dont care....fuck it...........




Torn with torment, tryna distinguish fake from real..
cuz Celestal Dialect even Envies his own Skillz...*
you define Ill? well my last 2 battles toppled ya top dogs..
you the 3rd faced with GameTime and insurmountable odds..**
structurally off..ya diversity worst as it expands its alias..
tryna elevate? off to a new start..im on top & u scaling it..
ready to be tossed..lost in a wave of tidal drops..
didnt wanna take it personal so he took his sig off..***
still hit below the belt..u felt a jolt from ya waste down..
couldnt vote 4 himself..so tells voters to follow his own breakdown..
ya weapons..consist merely of unfathomable questions..
like how is wackness considered a murderous method?****


*his name was Envy Skillz

**third straight battle against DOI

***he had some shit iin his sig..but took it off when he made the thread..i wasnt gonna diss his sig anyway

****he leads DOI as far as battlers are concerned..called murderous methodz..

iight...

I'm deeper than pockets revealin ya sockets peelin n poppin, Basically im endin ya life
Drop game wit tenses of fright I'll have u watchin ya mouth like we was in a dentist fight
Comin face to face wit me u’ll be beheaded head reddened, call me out now dead n sore
Curse ya verse when I lurk, ya rap is just like a 2 by 4 cuz it already has everyone board
U aint done, taken out of the oven early,nothin but bad badder (batter), u get up n shatterd
Ya neck will get splattered, ya lyrics are dormant, they fall off like Narcoleptics on ladders
My bullets disintegrate your rhymes puncture tendents, Commin hard n crack yo cranium
Freestyles?? He couldn’t come off the dome hard while diving off a 200 ft astro stadium
Carry your flows up out this shit before you get whipped n Celestal has to bury you hoe
12 lines...please my verse can hit ya long distance like I'm calling different area codes
Hes getting ripped worse then he did wit brix, smoka, n Ace then raped like April Lebrex
Putting holes threw ya chest, the only positive lines he ever touched was on his HIV test

Explanations

11th line:

April lebrex is a person who was raped by 14 men at a rave in S.F

(edited for explaination^^)

blha......lets get some votes or someshit.........uppin#1....

i removed that shit..no beef....just votes......

no beef game time.....nice battle

uppin for some votes................

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opening-Envy
flow-GameTime
punches-GameTime
metas-Envy
multis-Envy
complexity-GameTime
vocab-Envy
structure-tie
closing-Envy

overall:Envy 6-4

Celestal = 8/9
Game = 7/9

my vote -Envy Celestal

uppin #2...........

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up up and away

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uppin #2..........
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Okay, kind of one sided, good battle though.

Opener: Envy
Flow: Envy
Structure: Envy
Rhyme: Game
Punches: Envy
Disses: Game
Wordplay: Game
Closer: Envy

Vote: Envy

wow..hom much do i agree w/ gametime..
you cant put that b4 a verse.....................
thats like dddddddd damn!!!
you spit ya verse thats it...maybe explanation if needed
I'll hit this up wen that text is removed...
Gametime i suggest you report it
so its removed pz
no beef to any of you so plz dont bitch at me

my last uppin for today

and i took my shit out game time...take out yours then it'll be straight...no beef

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uppin #3.....shit is getting mad slept on............

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come on.......uppin # 1 for today


need some votes cats...come on.....

vote up peoples.....


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Tight.......

Punches-Celestal Dialect
Wordplay-Neither
Creativity-Celestal Dialect
Originality-GameTime
Structure-Tie
Overall Vote-Celestal Dialect

Nice Battle
But I was feelin Celestal Dialects verse more
He came a bit harder than Gamtime did
No Hate... props to both

flow=game
creativity=celestal
personals(x2)=celestal
punches(x2)=game
structure=game
closer=celestal

my vote=gametime........5-4 very close.........no hate

opener - gametime...nice personal punch...LLL type shit
closer - gametime...both good HIV kinda played
structure - gametime...celestial had stretches lines
punches - celestial...nice
personals - gametime
wordplay - celestial
metas - celestial
multies - celestial
vocab - gametime
originality - gametime
creativity - celestial
overall - gametime won 6 celestial 5
close battle no hate at all
props to both of you

ha....nice battle i gotta say....but Celestial....i didn't like all the links to retarded shit..lol....but u get a plus for mentioning me..lmao...but...Game had a more solid and hard hitting verse....and also better personals.....personals about who the emcee lost to is gettin kinda old nowadays....

Best Line:
^^lol....breakdown line was funny

BREAKDOWN
Multis - Game (had some)
Metas - Celestial
Wordplay - Celestial
RhymeScheme - Game
Structure - Game
Flow - Game
Vocab - Game
Personals - Game (his were harder hittin)
Punches - Game (same as above)
Creativity - Game
Complexity - Celestial
Overall - someone needs to get rid of Ape's vote...cuz that shit was just fucked.....if people read the verses...Game won this because he had much harder punches without a doubt....no hate to u Celestial....good read from both though....just a vote

peace
4:20

^^ no i think your vote needs to go...apes was fine

yours u gave him multis..lol..everyline i had atleast 4 multis...did u even read my verse..

but ok...

and e coli break it down better cuz me and game both got 3 catagories and u gave it to him

anyways uppin #1 for today

i think smoka means quality over quantity....maybe he thinks u forced some....and ecoli prolly has 5-4 cuz his vote counts for one.....blah.....Ape is just gay for saying this was one sided.....peace

Opening: CD
Punches: CD
Personals: CD
Vocab: Tie
Structure: GT
Flow: GT
Closing: CD
Overall: CD

CD took this in my opinion with alot harder hitting punches and better personal(s)

I told you that Game-Time would make a nice battle Celestial Dialect. LOL . This is looking real nice from both of you. G/L
god damn, LOL.

OUT

-High Class a.k.a Confusion

who ever said that CD got this is fuckin retarded... and dont complain cuz someone told u that ur fuckin stupid and shit... cuz u are..... well GT got this like really really easily........ too easily.... i think it could be a alias battlin him self......... hmmmm......... cant vote here cuz im not registered......... late

Breakdown..

Punches-Celestal
Personals-Game
Multi's-Game even tho dialect had more
Wordplay-Game
Creativity-Celestal
Flow-Celestal
Originality-Tie
Overall-Celestal, close battle but celestal had a lil bit stronger punches. Game you should of had this, your doper then that.
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